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Reviews for Dona Nobis Pacem

By : jibril
  • From ANON - chanda on November 23, 2005
    Okay I didnt give up on you, I have been really busy writing myself. So I am up to chapter 10 now and it has been really good. I normaly dont read this pairing, however seeing the third movie.... OMG wtf was I thinking... LOL. Anyway I will update more.

    Thanxs
    Chanda
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  • From ANON - chanda on November 21, 2005
    Hey sorry I havent reviewed in a while... This has been very interesting, I look forward for more...
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  • From ANON - sendosha on November 21, 2005
    Sorry but please tell, how can a dead person be pregnant? You´re forgetting that Kikyou´s body is made from clay, soil and ash. If Inuyasha would enter her she would shatter into many pieces. I don´t understand why so many authors write that her body is like a normal body with flesh and blood just dead.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 21, 2005
    Inutaishou's real name is SUPPOSED to be Touga. When they were making the movie soundtrack for "Tenka Hadou no Ken", the 3rd movie, one of the tracks was going to be 'Touga's theme'. Later they changed it to 'Father's theme.' Also, it was the name the producers gave him (in actuality he was called "Touga-ou", but that just means King Touga) while they were making the story board. For some reason, they never used that name in the movie, so Inu no Taishou is still considered un-named. I don't know where Sugimi came from, I think people mistranslated when Myouga said "Chichi-gimi" in Movie 2. Anyway, I know it'll be a pain to change the name since you've written 11 chapters, but just thought you should know. ^-^" I love your story.

    -Hikari
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  • From ANON - badkitty on November 20, 2005
    This is a great story so far! Intaisho/Kagome pairings are so hard to come by and are rarely any good, yours is an exception. This story is very interesting and the last chapter just left me wanting even more. Please update again soon!:)
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  • From ANON - MemoriesVoid on November 20, 2005
    Interesting story, it's the first time I'm reading an Inu no taisho/Kagome pairing. Usually, I'm a fan of Sess/Kag... Anyways, it's nice to see something different and I'll be looking forward to your next update. ^_^
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  • From ANON - bluemoon_175 on November 20, 2005
    Your story is really good please keep the updates up. I can tell this is going to be a really go story.
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  • From ANON - sexykitten on November 05, 2005
    please let me know when you have done the next chapters ok i love this story so far it is so cool.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 02, 2005
    Ah, so Kagome is a Mary Sue in the fic? Lovely. No really.
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  • From ANON - Calix of Heaven on November 02, 2005
    Fine story very original. So is Kagome a kami? Guess this makes her much more special then Kikyo. Is she going to have to be cut for the other wing to release...hope not painful. I have my own set of characters with wings. Their wings come out at around a certain age but after they do the first breaking of the skin, they have kind of a glowing mercury mark on their back in the shape of wings. It helps them to take the wings in or let them out without pain. It's good to have. You can use that if you want too, I'm fair, people get ideas anywhere it's only realy insecure people that say I though of this it's all mine GRRRRRR. You can e-mail me if you want more idea's it's nice to have another writer to write to.
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  • From ANON - azurephoenix on November 01, 2005
    Wow!! well that was unexpected...Kags is an angel. So who cut off the other wing??? or is still coming out of her body and that is why she is bleeding so much??? What trigerred her transformation? Does she have more power now that she has a new form? Is she an avenging angel who will annihilate Naraku since he is pure evil? I CANT WAIT TO SEE WHAT YOU WRITE NEXT.
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  • From ANON - Nefra on October 17, 2005
    I'm happy that you have not given up on this fic. After so long of not having an update I was afraid you had decided to pass it up. I do hope you update soon. I am also happy that you are striving to improve your writing style. Trust me, you are good already but you will get better as time passes. I have come a long way myself since I wrote my first fic and I have major plans to edit and revamp all of my older fics. This story has held my attention since the beginning and, again, I hope you update soon. I will look for that update and new chapters.

    Ja ne!

    Nefra

    P.S. If you need anymore inspiring pictures let me know. I got a ton of them. LOL!
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  • From ANON - Magdalen Millicent on October 16, 2005
    Please continue!!!
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  • From ANON - Buyo-chan on October 10, 2005
    Love the story! I've come to adore this pairing but there are hardly any stories.
    Will Inutaisho find out that it was Kagome who pulled Tetsuiga (is that right? *shrugs*)
    out? I'd love to see his reaction/ hear his thoughts. Never the less I look forward to the next chapter!
    Domo Arigato, for your thought and effort.
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  • From ANON - Wicked on October 09, 2005
    Please explain how the phrase "Dona Nobis Pacem" has anything at all do to with your story.
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