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Reviews for Dona Nobis Pacem

By : jibril
  • From ANON - Nefra on October 09, 2005
    Oh, please update soon. I know schooling takes priority over fanfiction but I do hope to see more from you very soon. Keep up the wonderful work. I'm completely hooked on this story.

    Ja ne!

    Nefra
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  • From ANON - Snowfall on October 06, 2005
    I have been reading your story. It is very interesting. It appears that english may not be your native language. The beta groups have brought in some traslators that may be able to help you. Fics written in other languages are welcome. Check with the beta group. They can be a lot of help. Perhaps you could translate fics into your language for readers in other countries!

    Snowfall
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  • From ANON - Arainaina on October 04, 2005
    very interest please update soon
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  • From ANON - azurephoenix on September 24, 2005
    AHHHH...that was evil!!!such a short chapter and with a mysterious ending. I can't wait for you to update.
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  • From ANON - demonqueen on September 24, 2005
    Not to bad of a chapter, though you jumped around a bit. I'm guessing you are trying to set the stage for a major scene or plot to unveil. What's with the scar or scratch on Kagome's back. Don't tell me the dog princess can turn invisible.
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  • From ANON - Vanessa on September 23, 2005
    Hey love the story plz update soon and fast i want to know whats happening to Kagome did someone attack her or is Narku behind it.

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  • From ANON - Katzztar on September 23, 2005
    There are several spelling mistakes. Such as the female demoness, it is heir not hire.
    Also you have several characters speaking in ways that are out of character form them.
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  • From ANON - me on September 23, 2005
    wow i love were this is going i absolutleylove this pairing exspecialy nefra's story but i just dont think sango and miroku would sit back and let her win so easily and what ever happened to kagomes clothes you need to mention her state of dress alittle more and how she feels about it itll make it a bit more ... real. also i doubt a village of dog DEMONS would be verry ecepting of kagome one last thing our dear lord fluffy (sesshomaru) is im prety sure lord of the westenland wich means so was daddy but its your story you can have him rule just a village if you want just thought i d let you know please update soon ther arnt enough kag and inutasho stories out there im glad i found this one
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on September 23, 2005
    This story is really very good, and I like your plot. Just a suggestion, however. You really need to check your spelling, especially in the most recent chapter. Some of the misspellings make a few of your sentences either mean something you were not intending, or are difficult to determine what you were trying to say.
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  • From ANON - Cancan227 on September 23, 2005
    What the HELL! Is she turning into a demon, because that would be so cool.
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  • From ANON - sesshy\'s_gurl on September 23, 2005
    Awesome atory keep writing ^*

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  • From ANON - puff on September 23, 2005
    wow this is such a cool story and will you please update soon!!! preet please #puppy eyes#


    sign your number one fan puff
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  • From ANON - Ashley on September 18, 2005
    Great story and LOL to the last part ^.^ ahh the competition between womankind. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - demonqueen on September 17, 2005
    Nice story so far. Introducing a inu princess? Who's relation is she? Bad enough we all thought that Inuyasha and Sesshomaru were the only inu's left, now you introduce a whole village of them. Did Sesshomaru know about this village or he just didn't care to associate with them. I'm guessing that Inuyasha didn't know about the village or being a half demon, he felt that they wouldn't have anything to do with him. Bet the inu princess gets jealous of Kagome. I don't think Kagome will be jealous right off the bat like she will. Kagome is still dealing with the painfull feelings of being betrayed and unloved by her friends and Inuyasha. With all of this, she really doesn't know what to make of Inuyasha's father at this time. True he is handsome and seems nice, but one must remember Kagome has been with Inuyasha for awhile and has ment Sesshomaru off and on. She will probably judge the father by the son's actions.
    Will be waiting for more updates to see how things go.



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  • From ANON - silvermoon134521 on September 16, 2005
    pretty plz update really soon
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