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Reviews for Dona Nobis Pacem

By : jibril
  • From ANON - Nefra on September 16, 2005
    *squeal* I loved it! I especially liked the part where Kagome opens her eyes and Inu-Papa is smiling at her. He would have a very dazzling smile I think. What a hottie! I'm glad you went into more detail about how Naraku actually came to be in possession of Inutaisho. One thing I am curious about is how easy it was for Kagome and Taisho-kun to escape from Naraku. Is it all part of Naraku's bigger plan? This Inutaisho fan is DYING to know. No pun intended there. LOL! Oh, and another thing that caught my eye was the battle between Naraku and Sesshoumaru. Sesshoumaru was getting weaker and even thought to himself about how the only one who could do that was his father. Does Naraku have a way to steal the power and energy from other youkai without absorbing them now? Just curious. Please, please, please, I hope you update soon. I've been watching this story like a hawk.

    Ja ne!

    Nefra
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  • From ANON - demonqueen on September 12, 2005
    Interesting story so far. A dog village?! Can't wait to see what kind of reception they get when they arrive. Will Inustashio regain all of his strength and powers? Update soon. Would like to see how events turn out.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 12, 2005
    great fic really hope to see another chapter really soon
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  • From ANON - Artemis on September 11, 2005
    I like the pairing of this story...it's odd but I like it alot...please update soon...I really like this story!!!
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  • From ANON - swasdiva on September 11, 2005
    And actually, I think I might agree with other reviewers regarding how quickly Kagome's friends were to abandon her. That seems a little too swift and unsubstantiated. I wonder though, since Kikyo was taken in so quickly as a replacement, did she have anything to do with it, like brainwashing perhaps? Don't know! Can't wait to find out!
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  • From ANON - swasdiva on September 11, 2005
    This fic just gets better and better. You've really got me on edge! I like how you've portrayed Inutaisho and I'm curious to see how he's going to adjust to the changes that've happened since he's been dead. I think my only critcism is that the grammar is a little hard to follow, but your original, engaging plot more than makes up for it. Great stuff. Please keep it up!
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  • From chanda on September 09, 2005
    I am really enjoing your story so far. I would like to point out in chapter 4 that you had written.

    He blinked a few times and pulled his fur thingy closer.

    This is how I would of wrote the sentence. He blinked a few times and pulled the fur cloak closer to himself. However, this is my own personal opinion. You are very vivid writer, you have pulled me in from the beggining and I will continue to read whenever you update. The point I am trying to make is when you write thingy it is not very discriptive. What is a thingy? A thingy could be anything. I dont want to sound like I am being mean, because I am not. Just wanted to help another author.

    Thank You, I look forward to the next chapter.
    Chanda


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  • From ANON - kiara703 on September 09, 2005
    WOW. Really like it so far. Please update soon. would really like to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - bettychan on September 09, 2005
    Very good story. I can't believe the way the gang treated Kagome. Are Inutaisho and Kagome going to get together? I hope so. Please update as soon as you can.
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  • From ANON - demonqueen on September 08, 2005
    So the great demon lord has been weakend from the revival. Just how weak is he? Is he only weak in Naraku's castle? Great story so far.
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  • From ANON - kiara703 on September 07, 2005
    This is an interesting story. I had never seen a plot like this before. Would love to see what happens next. Please update, it's really good.
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  • From ANON - Nefra on September 06, 2005
    I really like this a lot! I don't see anything truly wrong with it other than a few spelling errors. I am curious as to why you had Sango and Miroku agree with Inu Yasha in their own gentle way. I hope that you'll clear this up as the story progresses. I would also like more details on the fight between Naraku and Inu-Papa and exactly how he came to be locked in the dungeon with Kagome. I know, lots of questions. I'm thoroughly overjoyed that there are getting to be more and more Inutaisho/Kagome fics out there. I think Taisho-kun deserves some recognition too, he did, after all, sire two very hott sons. Oh, on a final note, please tell me Inu Yasha is going to be handed his ass on a platter by either Kagome or Daddy Dearest. If at all possible, let me know when you update. My email address is directly above. I'm sitting on the edge of my seat, hoping you update quickly.

    Ja ne!

    Nefra
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  • From ANON - sendosha on September 06, 2005
    Interesting, please write more
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 05, 2005
    its spelt glance not glanze

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  • From ANON - Katzztar on September 05, 2005
    Ah, Shippo is still loyal to Kagome, as is Kirara. I like the idea of Kirara leaving Sango (at least for now) to help Shippo look for the Woman that Inuyasha, Sango and Miroku betrayed.

    Even if Sango and Miroku still cared for Kagome, the way they turned her away was still a betrayal. I can't wait for those two to see they are guilty as Inuyasha in betraying Kagome.
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