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Reviews for inuyasha my love

By : inuyashaissexy
  • From XxSangoxX on October 01, 2006
    you need a spell check and maybe a beta... nice idea but you have no substance in this....

    there are too many mistakes that cannot be passed.
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on October 01, 2005
    I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters? Can the pairing be Sess, Kagome, and Inuyasha please?
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on September 08, 2005
    I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on September 07, 2005
    I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - MariaSutter1 on September 06, 2005
    This story is really good! I hope you can continue it as soon as you can.
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  • From ANON - Question on September 06, 2005
    Is this a inu/kag
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  • From ANON - Kiki on September 04, 2005
    Please hury and update very good
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  • From ANON - bettychan on September 03, 2005
    Much, much better. I now have a clear picture in my mind of what was happening. Keep up the good work. I can't wait to read more of this story. I look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Sango on September 03, 2005
    Your story is good, but it needs work. Everyone else that reviewed this is right. You need to capitalize certain words, like the word 'I' and the first word of a sentence. Also, use some punctuation. I noticed that alot of your sentences don't have a period in them. This is not a flame. I am just trying to help you.
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  • From ANON - No Sugar Added on September 03, 2005
    Your story doesn't suck, the plot idea is good. Capitalize your sentences and the word 'I'. Give some details on what certain people are doing, and watch your spelling and grammar. Maybe you should try getting a beta reader who can help you with that?

    Otherwise, I do like this plot. :)
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  • From Animefangirl81 on September 03, 2005
    Hey! Your story doesn't suck, k. But as your other reviewer says, it could use a little work...capitals at beginning of sentences...periods...and maybe not so much dialogue...I am very interested to see where you are going with this...keep writing!!!
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  • From ANON - bettychan on September 02, 2005
    This story doesn't suck. But it could use some work. For example, periods at the end of sentences would be nice. Also, names should always be capatilized. So should the first letter of the first word of a sentence. When "I" is used as a word, it is also capatilized. Some descriptions would also be nice. The first chapter was 99% conversation. What were Kagome and Shippo playing? Pattycake? Go Fish? Tag? What kind of day was it? What was Kagome's expression when Shippo asked for a little brother or sister? What kind of animal did Inuyasha kill? A deer? A boar? A rabbit? What was Sesshoumaru doing when he came across Inuyasha? Patroling his lands? Looking for Inuyasha so he could beat his little brother up?
    Please don't think this is a flame. It isn't meant to be. But the suggestions I've given would make this story more interesting to read.
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