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Reviews for Intended Mate

By : penpaninu
  • From ANON - inurin on December 27, 2005
    I have just had the pleasure of reading your intense, involved and beautifully told story. you did each character proud, and kept them true to their character. I are able to draw us into the scenery so well. You feel like you really are there within the story, I hope to read many more of your stories, keep up the excellent work.

    Many thanks for your fine work.

    inurin
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  • From ANON - Morgan on December 24, 2005
    Wow, loved it! Such a lovely ending, I bet the baby looks just just like his daddy when he was a new-born. He was such a darling little pup! Howled like his heart was breaking 'though. Just got the third movie. It was a wonderful statement of how much InuYashas' father loved his mate to run to her, nearly dead himself, just save his mate and pup. And in your story InuYasha and Kagome share that same type of love *sniff*. A as for Sessoumoru rapeing of Kagome, it was in context. Besides rape is not about sex, it's about power. And Sess does not seem the type to be put just off just because *she* doesn't want him. After all, he does try to kill his half-brother on a regular basis just because he has the indecency to be half-human. On the whole, a well put together, well written A+ story!
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  • From ANON - chanda (NSI) on December 17, 2005
    Omg I loved this story immensely. I loved how you portrayed your characters. I applaud you, very well written. I cant wait til I dig into the sequel.

    Chanda
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  • From HaleyBrooke on December 16, 2005
    THIS WAS BEAUTIFUL. SESSY WENT TO FAR AND INUYASHA SHOULD HAVE BEEN ABLE TO FINISH HIM. TO BAD INUYASHA IS SUCH A SOFTY WHEN IT COMES TO WOMEN.
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  • From ANON - STAR OF DEATH on November 30, 2005
    HOW COULD YOU KILL INUYASHA YOU BITCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - lbvnn on November 27, 2005
    how could you kill inuyasha in !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - marissa on November 26, 2005
    ewwwwwwwwwwww, did you make that up. the mating thing sounds kind of nasty!!!!!!!!!!!!
    I like your story so far, i hope it turns out good!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Sasha on November 04, 2005
    your story is good, and so is the sequel so far.


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  • From ANON - inu_geri on October 31, 2005
    I loved it. It was wonderfully well written and great. I read it entirely in one day.so it definately held my attention. I was saddened about Sesshoumaru , but I am glad he was not killed and has come to realize that Ris is the one for him. I hope you will make atleast onw ( or 2 or 3or 4) sequals to this story. lots'o'love
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  • From ANON - ~The Cridic~ on October 23, 2005
    i am astonished at how long your story on the internet is i would nomaly think that a story this long would be boaring because of the lack of intrest in it but this story was one of the best so far good for you.
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  • From SapphireBlade on October 20, 2005
    A wonderful end to a wonderful story. Thanks for taking me and all of the other readers on a great ride. I laughed, I cried, I raged, and I got a little turned on. ^_^ I definatelly have to say, this is one of the best fan fics I have ever read.

    Ja ne! ^_^
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  • From ANON - a lost soul on October 19, 2005
    I loved your story so much, I do believe it was the best story I read. I also really hope you write a sequel
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  • From ANON - peachgirl2112 on October 19, 2005
    best story ever! I wish you didn't have to end it. DO A SEQUAL!
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  • From ANON - InuGrrrl on October 19, 2005
    Penny.....it's The End...for now...for always...forever.
    Bravo Missy! You completed it and it rocked the house!
    Regardless of what anyone else thinks...here comes my
    last insane review full of jokes that only you get lol.

    Sesshy....I'm glad you finally see the damn light! You
    ain't gettin' no younger dude. You got some sweet meat
    there and all ya gotta do is wait for it to age....like CHEESE.

    Miroku? Sango? Kaede? Kouga? Um...Where'd you go?

    Grandpa...you know your ass don't need all those boxes
    moved! And in the tradition of the Simpsons when the
    Ramones guest starred..."You old bastard."

    Mama...there's a real world outside of the kitchen. I swear
    there is. It's just a matter of putting one foot in front of the
    other. Take my hand...C'mon, it's okay...I'll show you...

    Souta. Get a job and a new hat cuz the angels got...
    KNOCKED THE FUCK OUT!

    Hojo. Two words... MOVE ON. And take Kagome's friends
    with you. InuYasha & I agree that they're useless.

    Dr. Sato...you must have grown tired of living to even
    ENTERTAIN THE THOUGHT of touching that baby's ears.

    InuGrrrl: Tell em' Shippo.
    Shippo: Idiot.

    InuYasha and Kagome...
    What can I say? You guys did it all. You finally admitted
    after a BILLION years that you were in love. You beat
    the fuck outta Naraku then mated, Kags got kidnapped,
    InuYasha died, Sesshomaru ...ahem...took it there,
    InuYasha became a gigantic dog & whipped the shit
    outta him, Kags got knocked up, then married and
    convinced Inu to live in the wrong era, banged in a
    chair in the middle of the kitchen with Jiji outside
    and finally there's a baby. Dayum.

    No stone was left unturned. The only thing missing is...
    Wait. THERE IS NOTHING MISSING! Bloody great romp
    Penny. It was awesome and quite fun. Should there be
    a sequel? Good Q...there are places you can take it..
    or not take it. But if you do make one, I'll be there to
    leave my mark. Wink!
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  • From ANON - Syko on October 19, 2005
    I Loved It! although, Im sad that it had to end, but it was the best story I have read so far in my life. Im also glad that the pup had InuYasha's ears! So cute to picture! I LOVED IT! Thank you for writing a great, gripping story! ::bows::

    Tails and Whiskers,
    ~Syko
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