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By : penpaninu
  • From ANON - nina on October 19, 2005
    HOW SA-WEEEET !! i REEEALLY SMiLED !! :D i DNO Y PPL LiKE U ARE HiDiNG` iN HERE . U SHUD B OUT DER MAKiN` BOOKz FOR PEOPLE LiKE ME !! LOLzz xx REALLY ENJOYED iT ^__^

    xXx SHOWiN` LOVE .. BAKiN` COOKiEz xXx
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  • From ANON - INUYOUKI! on October 19, 2005
    Oi Penpaninu-chan, *senshu*
    Although i will mis reading your updates to this well thought out story.....Domo Arigato for an awsome ending. The pup arriving was a excellent way to wrap up and as always you took care on the details even thinking up an original name for the sprout. I will be looking forward to other stories from you and I would be honored to hear from you via e-mail . I also have a story I have worked on maybe we can share ideas.


    Oite goshujin saimu,
    Inuyouki! (skye)

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  • From ANON - INUYOUKI! on October 19, 2005
    Oi Penpaninu-chan, *bows*
    Although i will mis reading your updates to this well thought out story.....Domo Arigato for an awsome ending. The pup arriving was a excellent way to wrap up and as always you took care on the details even thinking up an original name for the sprout. I will be looking forward to other stories from you and I would be honored to hear from you via e-mail . I also have a story I have worked on maybe we can share ideas.



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  • From ANON - Anon on October 18, 2005
    Thank you.
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  • From ANON - hanyou_swimmer on October 18, 2005
    What a great ending! Personally I don't feel that you made the rape same event he least bit funny, or not serious. Rape is a terrible thing and I looked at it like you were approaching it from a very mature perspective. True, you didn't go to far into her recovery, but, being as she was happy to find Inuyasha alive it was understandable. Plus, I do believe that one of her biggest worries would be that Inuyasha wouldn't want her anymore.

    I like how you approached the whole sesshy/rin relationship. I also find it ironic that he mentioned that Kagome reminded him of Rin, being one of the reasons he liked her. And still he refuses to admit that he waiting for rin to mature. (past chapter, can't remember which one! hehehe)

    I would like to read a sequel, or at least an epilogue. I think it would help to put a concrete ending to the story! While until next time! ja ne!

    ~Hanyou_swimmer
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  • From DL69 on October 18, 2005
    i cant see it now -inuyasha running around kagome's bed room trying to get dressed only to fall over or something- LOL

    I really love this story and you ended it beautifuly, but there is a problem it is just that YOU ENDED IT!!!!!! NOOOOOOO

    you so so so HAVE TO write a sequeal to this story, i want to hear about S/M's baby and about what they and shippo has to say
    PLEASE PLEASE WRITE A SEQUAL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Syko on October 17, 2005
    Im glad you are feeling better~ Keep the chapters comming! I cant wait to read more.

    ~Tails and Whiskers,
    Syko
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  • From ANON - Muem on October 16, 2005
    iz there gonna b a sessy/rin pairing??? PLZ!!! but other than that- i love it!
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  • From SapphireBlade on October 15, 2005
    As always, great chapter. I do enjoy the calmness of most stories after great events such as the ones here. I just wish I had a cute loving guy to carry me around like Inuyasha. (sighs) Anyways, I can't wait to see how you plan to end this. The only complaint I have is not about this story but about the new look of the site, I liked it better the other way.

    Ja ne!
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  • From ANON - InuGrrrl on October 15, 2005
    Penny!

    Great chap as per usual! Where shall I start my rant.....?
    Gotcha! I don't have one! Okay, I lied...

    Sesshy-sama..AWWW, he let Rin snuggle with him.
    As soon as she's of age you better tap that thang
    Sess-poo. Lord knows, you need some-damn-body!
    And geez...would it kill ya to cook your food? There's
    a fire n' everything....

    Inu & Kags...how cute. But seriously Kago...STOP WITH
    THE DAMN SITS! The man...er...hanyou...takes care of
    you. Carries your bloated self everywhere. Puts on SHOES
    for Kami's sake!! The least you can do is make sure he
    doesn't eat dirt! P.S. Inu...licking your plate is NOT cool
    dude. You don't have to listen but...

    Sango & Miro...a little praying exterminator on the way.
    Kawaii! It'll wear monk's robes and throw boomerangs!

    Grandpa...nobody wants your damn tea. AIGHT?!
    Mama...french toast is better than waffles.

    Last but not least...Angels hat?! GO CHICAGO!!!!
    lol.....
    Good show Chica...I'm ready for the next!!

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  • From ANON - kegome on October 14, 2005
    KEEP GOING THIS IS THE BEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ IN MY LIFE UP DATE MORE THIS IS GETTING SO GOOD AND SO CLOSE TO THE BEST PART I CAN FELL IT MAKE IT MUCH LONGER THE STORY I LOVE IT MORE THE ENYTHING PLEASE UP DATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN
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  • From ANON - Inuyouki! on October 13, 2005
    I have a new email : inuyoukiskye@yahoo.com
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  • From ANON - Inuyouki! on October 13, 2005
    Oi! Daijoubu? Hope your are recouperating from your cold! Drink some hot limeade with honey it will make you feel better. (thats better than inu-youki medicine of boiled livers and herbs!) I liked chapter 21. It's cool , it shows a side alot of authors dont bother to write about. The everyday behavior of the Hanyou and Kagome is cool to read about as well as Miroku and Sango. I enjoy well written stories with attention to detail, domo arigato yet again for doing just that.
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  • From ANON - kegome on October 12, 2005
    PLAESE UP DATE I WANT TO NOW WHAT HAPPINSS AND START MAKING IT SEXYER AND HOTTER THEN BEFOR
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  • From SapphireBlade on October 11, 2005
    Sorry I hadn't reviewed your last chapter, but I had midterms and stuff so, no time to read fun stuff. Anyways, great job on the both chapters, and I'm so glad things are beginning to look up for our heroes. As for Sesshy, I still want his head on a pike, but that's just my humble opinion. Ok, I guess that's all I have to say, but as always keep up the great work and I'll be here to review and love what you do.

    Ja ne!! ^_^
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