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By : penpaninu
  • From ANON - hanyou_swimmer on October 05, 2005
    I love this story! you really out did yourself with this past chapter! Although I like fluffy, I was amazed at the way you used his character, you kept him in character while making him do something I could never see happening, which is something you definitely have to care to do. You are an awesome writer and I can't wait until chapter 19!!
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  • From ANON - Sonya[Not loggin in] on October 05, 2005
    Damn, you better be damned right this isn't the end yet. But still, it doesn't sound so resolute like you think. I can see how you ended it is very reasonable. Naraku and Kikyo are dead, Sango and Miroku are to be wed, Kagome and Inuyasha are together and soon to be parents. Everyone finally gets their happy ending and with our imaginations, we should think the best of it. But, I still see why you want to continue it. You want to be able to describe how Sango, And Miroku are wed together in the fuedal era by Kagome. Hell, I'd love to see how Inuyasha copes with the Doctor's office, not to mention know what their Baby's personality is like, especially a name. It'd be a cool twist if Sango and Miroku had a baby too.. xD.... There's never any good fics about that D=.. Well, With that said, I'll leave you. Wether you choose to end the story in the next chapter or change your mind. Not to mention continue it for another 2931236,91318731.. etc... Chapters.. Most of us probably think this is a great story. :) especiallymekthanks
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  • From ANON - SapphireBlade on October 05, 2005
    Poor Kagome, I hope things get a lot better for her and InuYasha. I wish I had a guy that would love me like InuYasha loves Kagome. (sighs) Anyways, again, great chapter, it shows your really care about the characters and who they are. As for Sesshy, the guy got off easy, but oh well, at least he'll live to get his butt kicked by InuYasha again if he tries to hurt Kagome again.

    Ja ne! ^_^
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  • From ANON - SapphireBlade on October 04, 2005
    This again a great chapter, and eventhough I would have preffered more pain to have been inflicted on Sesshy, I am satisfied that justice has been served. The bleach is back under the sink, and I will save the cursing for another day. This was extremely well written, I can't seem to say that enough, and I love the way Inuyasha transformed, I totally did not see that one comming. I just hope little Rin doesn't regret having saved that baka's life.

    Ja ne!
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  • From akanehimura on October 03, 2005
    Good story! Keep it up ^^
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  • From ANON - InuGrrrl on October 03, 2005
    WOOT! IT WAS OVER BEFORE IT BEGAN....GOTTA LOVE IT!

    So the Inu-lords heard Kagome's call and aided InuYasha.
    How bootiful is that! Sesshomaru...

    YOU GOT KNOCKED THE FUCK OUT!!

    LOL! He really caught hell that time. He got what he deserves.
    The rape scene...let me just say what Sess did is not far fetched
    and fits the story. He didn't feel like he was commiting "rape."
    (Even if that IS what he did.) He thought he was making her his
    mate and she'd LEARN to love him later...lol. So don't worry about
    it. Anything forceful or dominant seems to be "rape" by some
    standards. In THIS case, was it? Yep, but it fit.

    End For Now (heh)
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  • From ANON - Kirah on October 03, 2005
    Much as I hate to see any fic end (even though this one isn't quite over yet), I think that this came out perfect. Although there is always room for a sequel (after all, Kagome is still pregnant, and as the Purity series proves, the next generation can be as interesting as the first). Although I am riteously (sp???) enraged at the Sess/Kag scene, I guess it is kinda essential, and may have some after effects later. As before mentioned, perfectly done, and I hope you continue writing- both to finish this story, and future stories as well.
    (also, I usually review every other chapter or so- this is because I only have access to a computer every few days or so. If it's adds at all to your ego, I always check your sotry first for updates!)

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  • From ANON - romantiq on October 03, 2005
    aaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwww how sweet !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*squeels* although i wouldve personallyspilled his guts 4 it its stil so cuteeeeee !!!!1 lolawesom awesome awesome !!!!!!!!!!!cant w8 till chapter 18 !!!!!!!!!!!! im soo anxios to read it !! its so good !!! lol gotta go buhby
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  • From ANON - peachgirl2112 on October 03, 2005
    Great I laugh I cry, I love it!
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  • From ANON - Syko on October 03, 2005
    ::bows head loyaly:: I am honored you put me on your honored list! ^_^

    I loved it! Many, many, many bows for your work! Keep up the great work!

    ~Syko
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  • From ANON - InuGrrrl on October 02, 2005
    :OMG:OMG:OMG:OMG:OMG:

    First news of the day: My b/f gave me an
    Ipod Nano today...omg it's SO rocks!!! Just
    had to share!! Now my review...

    Tears actually came to my eyes when I read
    this. Sesshomaru actually RAPED her. I was
    so mad. Poor InuYasha...the worst part was
    that he FELT it. Just wretched...

    But he's in the courtyard now & it's on n'
    poppin! That BASTARD FLUFFY! I hope
    Inu beats the cowboy shit outta him...
    Slaps the taste right outta his mouth! lol

    I hope Inu can see kagome...I know that
    cunt fluffy will try to lock her away. To
    think..he actually had to get someone to
    mask her with his scent...um...I think
    that's a CLEAR sign that it ain't meant to
    be. Buy a fucking clue!!

    As always, Brilliant show & I know the
    next chap will hawt as all get out!
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  • From ANON - InuGrrrl on October 02, 2005
    I didn't get to read this when it was pposted...so i'm leaving two separate
    reviews...heh. Good show! But i am still DISGUSTED with Sesshy-sama.
    Trying to take advantage of horny preggos, lol.

    INUYASHA!!!! He's better...still not 100% obviously...but at least Kouga is &
    everyone's ready for a fight. I don't think this chap was short at all...

    Bitchin' show as always chica!
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  • From SapphireBlade on October 01, 2005
    There isn't enough bleach on the planet to wash that off!!! (insert even worse curses) I hope InnuYasha cuts Sesshy's thing off and rams it down his throat!!! I can't wait for the fight scene, Sesshy must go down like the cowardly prick he is!! Don't worry about me, I'll be ok, I just really get into stuff I read, and only if its really good! ~_^

    Ja ne!! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Chio on October 01, 2005
    Really you were really mean......Buuuuuuuuaaaaahh!!!!!!!...But It was necesary. Poor Kagome. But Sesshie didn´t obtain what he wanted. Update soon!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From SapphireBlade on October 01, 2005
    (insert slew of very profane curses in 4 languages directed towards Sesshy here) If I were Kagome I would have jumped inot a vat of bleach after something like what Sesshy did to her. Anyways, I loved this chapter, you are doing an excellent job and as always, I want more!!!

    Ja ne!! ^_^
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