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By : penpaninu
  • From ANON - romantiq on September 26, 2005
    that is soooooooooooooooooooo good plz right more !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!ur a really good writer !!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!dont stop writing i beg u !!!!!!=)
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  • From SapphireBlade on September 26, 2005
    Arigatou, arigatou, arigatou!! I take back everything I said, you had me really worried for a while. I really like where things are going but you are a cruel person for doing that to a sensitive soul like me. Anyways, keep writing. I'm actually gonna be late to class cuz I stayed a little late at the house to read this chappie.

    Ja ne!!
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  • From ANON - frani1375 on September 26, 2005
    I love your story. I can't believe that Sesshomaru would take Kagome like that! Does he really think that she would forget about Inuyasha, even if he was dead, and stay with him? I just hope that she puts him in his place and tells him off! Anyway, great story! Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - InuGrrrl on September 25, 2005
    :RUNS UP & DOWN THE HOUSE SCREAMING:

    Woot! As if you could ever disappoint.....
    LOVED IT! And this is not just talk...but
    that was so fucking creative. I've never
    read a resurrection like that before. I'm
    in love with the description of Inu's robe.
    I could just picture him looking so
    bootiful. :Sighs happily: So stubborn he
    is! So gorgeous, so maddening, so HAWT!
    :Goes into InuYasha induced stupor:

    Sesshomaru...you bastard! He actually
    had balls that hung low enough to demand
    Inu's scent be washed off her. Tell me
    Sesshy-"sama", how would you wipe the
    SMELL OF INU OFF HIS PUP?! Or was the
    plan to drown it?! Can ya tell I'm pissed?

    What happened to Kouga's legs? I know
    it's not likely, but I wonder if Inu will be
    a little outwardly sweeter to his friends
    since they did so much for him. Oh I
    forgot to say this last time...

    Kikyou; Another one bites the dust! heh

    As always, brilliant job. I'm QUITE ready
    for the next chap, BUT don't feel rushed.
    The best work comes from a relaxed mind.
    You RAWK chica!
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  • From ANON - a lost soul on September 25, 2005
    I loved your stoy alot, even though I thought the ending was very sad.
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  • From ANON - InuGrrrl on September 25, 2005
    THE BEST AND THE WORST!!!!

    OMG...what are you DOING to me?!
    First off..that battle was OFF THE CHAIN.
    It was extremely well written...I mean you
    left no stone unturned, and hell if I wasn't
    shocked all the way through!!!

    Kagura...I felt so bad for her. I so wanted
    Sesshy to realize he liked her or something.
    For her & Kohaku to die that way...and then
    get devoured. I'm speechless.

    Second: I love the way you used the diamond
    power. I don't see too many people tear thru
    the manga the way you do. NYCE.

    Third...INUYASHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    How COULD you?! HOW? I am so devastated.
    Words can't describe it. Well fucking done
    because I NEVER saw that coming. InuYasha
    dying wasn't even a thought in my head. That
    baka, Kagome. How could she NOT wish him
    back?! Makes me wanna kick her in her back.

    Fourth..purifying Naraku. I love how you did
    it. I didn't expect him to try and absorb her.
    That's deep, lol. Kouga...poor chi-chi. I feel
    so sorry for him. Will he ever walk again?

    Fifth...and you know I gotta leave the best for
    last. SESSHOMARU. Why that piece of dung!
    Here I was hoping & praying he would help
    InuYasha with Tenseiga..that bastard. How
    could he hit Shippou like that? Then just take
    Kagome?! She hasn't even had time to mourn!
    But more so..she's a fucking baka. I still can't
    believe she didn't wish him back. Anyhoo...
    Sesshomaru is a real chump. I'm so pissed at
    him. GRRRR

    Excellent Chica. Seriously. You OUTDID yourself.
    I've been reading this since you started, and you
    have really taken it places that I, for one never
    saw it going. Excellent read & You BETTER write
    more soon & calm my youkai. It's screaming for
    Sesshomaru's head! LOL
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  • From SapphireBlade on September 24, 2005
    DON'T KILL INUYASHA!!! (crying, really) I hate sad endings, please don't kill him, poor Kagome and the baby. I really love your story but why did you have to do that? Get Sesshy to bring him back!! This isn't fair. :'(
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  • From SapphireBlade on September 24, 2005
    Oohh, I can't wait to see the big battle, i love epic battles. Again, great chapter and a great that you are tying up all the loose ends, some authors forget a lot of stuff and leave things hanging at the end. Anyways, update soon and lets see this thing end well, I hope.

    Ja ne!! ^_^
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  • From ANON - InuGrrrl on September 24, 2005
    NICE & LONG...WOOT!

    Okay first: You are absolutely right. InuYasha is a prince.
    How anyone can NOT see him as one is puzzling. He is
    Inu No Taisho's son ne? Was Izayoi not a princess? That
    gives him royal lineage. Well there ya have it - in a neat
    lil' package too! ^_^

    Second: Love the way you're pulling everything together.
    Love the whole "Kagome-woman", I think it's SO cute.
    I'm hopelessly hentai, so I vote for another lemon :P
    Even though it may not be appropriate timing. But I can
    SO see Inu saying "c'mon Kags...just a quickie!" lol

    Last: Kouga-Kun. OMG...I felt so sad, so bad for him!
    Well done!! The way Inu kinda let him get his shit off,
    being the bigger man & all...then the way he said bye
    to everyone, even Inu. Loved it. Thought it was perfect.

    And no, Penpaninu. I bow low to you! You've given me
    a great damn time with this fic & I can't wait for the
    next chap as well as your new stuff. You're definitely
    on my faves list.

    Ja Ne,
    InuGrrrl
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  • From shinimegamisan on September 23, 2005
    OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    This is the first story I have read on this site and let me tell you I registered just so I could tell you how much I LOVE!!!!! you fic. I've read quite a few Inu/Kag lemons but this is by far the best. Words cannot describe the saddness I felt when I realized that you had stopped at ch10 I yelled NNNNNNNOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! but any way... sorry for the outburst. I couldnt stop reading and so from 5-8:30 I comsumed the wonderful images, descriptions, and plot. PLEASE I BEG YOU! write more!!!!! Thank you for such a wonderful fic, I hope the rest of yours are just as good. But I have no doubt inn my mind that they will be :)

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  • From SapphireBlade on September 23, 2005
    FYI: SapphireBlade/Saber are both me. ^_^ I just forgot my real screen name, I'm a ditz that way. Anyway, I enjoyed this chapter very much and of course I can't wait to read more. Great idea with the tents. ~_o

    Ja ne!
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  • From ANON - jodibetz on September 22, 2005
    Its an inu-kag, right? right?
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  • From ANON - Rawben on September 21, 2005
    damn it sess! back the hell off! ugh. lol, anyhow, great chapter!
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  • From ANON - InuGrrrl on September 21, 2005
    Dayuuuum. You are really taking it there!
    I laughed my ass off thinking about sess
    "stepping through Jaken's head." Fucking
    hilarious! So sess-sama wants kags. He's
    so fucked up, lol. You're gorgeous papa -
    get a chick of your own that's NOT knocked
    up! Well done!!
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  • From ANON - kunkra on September 21, 2005
    very good plot, and the thing with sesshie is getting interesting. i would think inuyasha would have smelled sesh on kagome though.
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