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By : penpaninu
  • From LIlmamma on November 27, 2017

    Not sure if anyone else told you or if you even check reviews for this story but Hiku could in a way be a nick name for him, his name is Hakkaku, and to be honest I figured that that's what it was just you shortening his name. I read at one point you would like reviewers to leave an email so I'll leave mine, oh and I'm loving the story. mammawolf247365@yahoo.com 


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  • From Shellnet on February 09, 2017

    I just read a lot of stories and i liked yours but I think it is a little OOC having sesshomoru rape kagome thou i have read meny that have that i will say i like your story even thou that sean is thair and i respect your motives but though i do like what you did with koga he is more likely to be a rapist he also let his pack on rins village and they killed rin and sess stopes them from eating her and kills them and brings her back later he has kohaku with him and she is dies again when she gose in the mado with sess his mother brings her back when sess can not you can only bring someone back once with tensega but his mother wornes that if rin dies one more time she can not come back and she is to have a choice when she is older to be with him or the humans as he gives her gifts keg calls him big brother ha ha ha   


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  • From Shellnet on February 06, 2017

    Inuyasha's mom was a hime (princess) as well he is royal on both sides he was rased in a Castle by his mom till he was 5 and his grandfather would not tern himout till he was old enough to take care of himself but then he was alown in the woods till he was 150 when he met kikyo and she pined him to the tree for 50 years


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  • From TwilightInuyasha on March 20, 2012
    I just love your Story. How you have Wrote it. Everything screams amazing and good. I cried when InuYasha died. Ugh! that was so said. But OMG that Battle was amazing. I would have so watched it if it was Done as an Episodes or movie.
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  • From TwilightInuyasha on September 04, 2010
    I have to say I really loved your FF I have read a few InuYasha FF and yours by for is the best. When Inuyasha dies i scream high holy hell and tweeted to my friends on twitter that i was screaming at the computer and wated to turn it off but something told me to keep reading and when I saw what you did to InuYasha bring him back I like freaking cried. I love the way your right and am very happy you wrote. i hope you write something Inu new soon, But I Loved your Story. Keep Writing!
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  • From TwilightInuyasha on September 03, 2010
    OMG!! You killed Inuyasha!!! *Dies* Now!!! I Loved this story and I wanted them to end up being together in the end and not his older brother. I Liked Cried but still!!! No!!! But really goo story so far. I thought she was going to use the jewel to bring back her fallen comrads. you get like a A+ so far minus the Inuyasha dying part. I hope he is Alive!
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  • From IGotTheCrazies on January 27, 2010
    holy crap. you make me so jealous! PLEAZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZE keep writting new stories!!!!!
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  • From Sieg on September 12, 2008
    Good story just some flaws. Like in chapter seven you state that Kagome mother is Ni chans daughter, but in the manga it states that only by marriage are they related. He moved in with her after her husband died his son. Also where are you at in the story.Because their journey nearing the end was nearly 2 years of traveling and Kagome was in high school by then not still in middle school. I am pretty sure that is also stated in the Manga.when you refer to japan don't you mean Sengiku Jidai seeing as it didn't get named Japan til later? i have just finished reading it your writing style is grand , but like i said previously thier were flaws. Tho they were not in grammar as much as they were in research. I do believe you did a great job and maybe if you ever think about writing that squeal you could have Inuyasha and Sess become a family like they should. I mean he can only call him a half breed for so long seeing as he carries their fathers blood more then he cares to admit.Keep writing i tell you.


    ~~Sieg
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  • From ANON - anterrian on September 18, 2006
    I just got finished reading this fic, I loved it. I would really like to know what could happen with sesshie and rin though. Thanks for writing.
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  • From ANON - d_metria1980 on September 14, 2006
    you know i liked this story i just had one small problem.....there was a little to much sex going on. being the big perv that i am i never thought i would say that. now i know sex in a story is the same as sex in life,(for me anyways)to much of it and it's no longer a treat. well other then that i really enjoyed it but wished fluffy didn't turn out to be a rappest.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 17, 2006
    Ramna 1/2


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  • From ANON - rin.dee on February 05, 2006
    holy wow frikken amazing!
    I LOVED IT!
    this is going in my recommended reading!
    great job!
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  • From ANON - Jessi on January 27, 2006
    just started reading this story and i have to say THIS is the kind of fanfiction i crave! lol. i just recently started reading Inuyasha fanfiction...before now i was hooked on DBZ fanfiction and well...unfortunately so far i hadnt been able to find any truely amazing Inuyasha stories. I am thoroughly enjoying this one tho! VERY COOL. I'm not done reading this one yet...unfortunately being in the military doesnt allow you as much time to read fanfiction as one would like to...oh well.

    but yes...i'm rambling...VERY COOL STORY...bottom line...lol
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  • From ANON - Melissa on January 17, 2006
    That was a very long story, but it was so wonderful. I read it for about a week. I loved it. Now I'm gonna try the sequal.
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  • From ANON - Rodisquall on January 08, 2006
    Pardon me while I grope for the right words... which I still can't find. So let me start by saying, "WOW!!!" This was awesome!! I pored over every chapter like a starving beast; I cried so hard when InuYasha died, and again when he came back to life. And you should've heard the growl I let loose when Sesshoumaru raped poor Kagome! But as hard as it was to read, I do agree that it needed to be done. You handled it just perfectly - everything, from the act itself to the recovery. Don't let the flames bother you. You handled it just fine. I never got the feeling that you did it for kicks. I could almost feel your revulsion as I read on. It only reflects how good a writer you are.... I'm a writer myself, and I can't work up the nerve to write such a scene. :-)

    I can't wait to see what else you have in store for the Inu Gang! Please, keep up the fantastic work!


    Rodisquall
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