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  • From ANON - Ryukotsusei on October 04, 2005
    Oh i love it LOL That's it Kag's, give that baka kitsune a piece of your mind. Personally if I were Rin I would have told him to go to hell and seen if Hiei really was interested. Good chapter, update soon please.
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  • From ANON - EatAPeach on October 04, 2005
    ...Ah, I see said the blind man...
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  • From ANON - qnofserenity on October 04, 2005
    I'm totally enjoying this so far, awesomely written and done. Just would like to see more K/K interaction though. But love where this is going so far. Just would luv to see Rin have a really happy moment also (you know make the Fox really jealous). Anyways, luv what's written and can't wait to read more...
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  • From ANON - Sayuri-chan on October 04, 2005
    Hehe...serves Kurama right. That jerk! I still can't believe how much of a...a...JERK he's being! *huffs silently* Well, going out should be interesting, just as long as Houjo doesn't show up, things will be okay--that, and I have a feelings tension is going to still be running high between Kurama and Hiei. Things need to be cleared up, and soon, otherwise, an all out brawl will most likely take place. *sigh* Well, another great chapter. Update soon! ^_~
    Sayuri-chan~
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 04, 2005
    Thank you for updating this story. Although I read and enjoy all of your stories, I think this is my favorite. And to EatAPeach -- Koorime are all females and self-reproducing which is why Hiei is the forbidden child.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 04, 2005
    thankyou thankyou thankyou thankyou thankyou *squeels with delight*
    please update soon waited sooo long for chappy
    you are the greatest writer ever

    kurama should be nuetered
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  • From ANON - EatAPeach on October 04, 2005
    Damn, I have to say, out of all your fics I think that Kurama should definitely get the biggest asshole award for this one. Ouch! I think it's high time he did a little gravelling and explaining himself! And then, Rin should still kick his ass! Nice to see Hiei giving him a run for his money though. Hiei just cracks me up--gotta love him! And it's nice to see Kuwabara finally getting up the courage to face Kagome...even if it is in the form of a group date. Hey, everyone's gotta start somewhere! I'm still curious about Yukina's pregnancy, though. Hopefully we'll see more about this in the coming chapters. Great job! Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Vanessa on October 04, 2005
    Hey love the new chapter. Are they going to fall them to the resterant and make some kinda sence infront of everyone. or will they have an nice calm evening?
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  • From ANON - Vanessa on October 04, 2005
    Hey love the new chapter. Are they going to fall them to the resterant and make some kinda sence infront of everyone. or will they have an nice calm evening?
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  • From ANON - Ryukotsusei on October 04, 2005
    Oh now thats funny. Kurama had better watch himself, it looks like he has competition now. Good chapter, update soon please.
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  • From ANON - EatAPeach on September 27, 2005
    Wow, you really like to lay it on thick for poor Rin! Might be nice to see Kurama get shaken up with a little competition from Hiei, would certainly serve him right. You really have a knack for making him a total asshole sometimes, but it's nice to see him not proper and polite all the time. I do have to wonder about what's going on with Kuwabara and Kagome, though. It seems as though you've shifted the focus away from them, leaving me with all kinds of questions. Like who is responsible for Yukina's pregnancy for one! Don't leave me hangin' here, I gotta know! Plus, I'm anxious to see some interaction between Kagome and Kuwabara. Anyway, great work so far! Keep it up!
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  • From CelticFantasy on September 23, 2005
    This is such a great story Vivian, I hope you keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 22, 2005
    this story keeps getting better n better i love it ^^ i would love to see this turned into a hiei/rin/kur fic it would be soo great torture the fox for all the pain hes putting rin through please please update soon
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  • From ANON - werwuru on September 21, 2005
    *smack smack crack thud* "god all hell is breaking in there kurama really pissed off rin"

    inside of room kurama cowering in corner "please dont hurt me"


    great story
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  • From ANON - qnofserenity on September 21, 2005
    I felt for Rin this chapter, he didn't have to be that harsh to the poor girl. Even if he is jealous of Yusuke. Can't wait for Sesshoumaru to find out that Rin was hurt due to Kurama's words (we all know Jaken's got a big mouth). Again awesome story, loved how Hiei yanked on Kurama's chain. Just can't wait to find out who made Yukina pregnant. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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