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  • From ANON - Anon on September 20, 2005
    whens sesshy coming into the mix

    love story plz update soon ^^
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  • From ryukotsusei on September 20, 2005
    Silly critter. Didnt it know that people are supposed to eat squid not the other way around? Glad both of them are okay. Good chapter, update soon please.
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  • From ANON - Katzztar on September 20, 2005
    I just thought of something, if Kagome was fertile and got pregnant, then if Kuwabra got together with her, she may fells he's doing it out of honor and duty, not love....
    Time will tell if she's pregnant or not, after all one time is enough for a human female...if it's timed just before the woman ovulates.
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  • From ANON - Katzztar on September 20, 2005
    Kurama better talk to Rin soon if he really thinks he's gotten something to treasure, besause she doesn't think he really wants her.

    Gahhh,,,,,,, if soemthing's not done soon, Rin is going to feel like Kagome did when Inuyasha was with her,,, a replacement... whoops, Rin already feels like that. Kurama need to talk to her...fast! Before the freindship between the girls suffers.
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  • From ryukotsusei on September 20, 2005
    somehow I don't think that's going to be the last she hears from Kouga on the subjext. She might wanna ask Hiei if he wouldn't mind keeping a watch over her while she sleeps at night. He might enjoy the chance to beat the shit out of Kouga while Kuwabara tries to figure out what he's going to do. Poor Rin, now we need to see if there's a marinade out there where one of the ingredients is liquified heart lol. Good chapter, update soon please.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 20, 2005
    please please update soon i soo love this story please please update soon^^
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  • From ANON - The Telepathic Hawk on September 20, 2005
    I just wanted to let you know that I really, really enjoy your story and want to invite you to keep it up! Please don't be like some authors and not finish and keep the readers hanging for all eternity, especialy not with such a good story! It would make me very unhappy. So, just one last time, Great Job! I love the pairing. They are going to end uo together aren't they? Kagome and Kuwabara, I mean.
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  • From ryukotsusei on September 19, 2005
    Something tells me that if Kouga or his wolves approach Rin again they are going to have an extremely pissed off kitsune to deal with. And I'm quite certain that Hiei would be more than happy to help in their destruction. Poor Rin, I think we went past the puree feature on that blender. Perhaps Liquify is a better setting. Good chapter, please update soon.
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  • From ryukotsusei on September 19, 2005
    Poor Kagome, her hearts gotta be a bruised bloody mess right now. The only thing left to do is dump it in the blender and hit puree. Good chapter, please update soon.
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  • From ANON - kiki on September 19, 2005
    *applause and shouts of encouragement*
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  • From ANON - qnofserenity on September 19, 2005
    Oh. talk about twisty relationships. That was awesome, didn't see the Suichi/Rin chappie (loved it)... Kouga is going to throw one hell of a fit, i can just see him trying to beat up on Poor Kuwabara... Although, Kagome will put wolf-boy in his place. Wooohooo... again keep it up. Awesome story and awesome plot, it just keeps getting better.
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  • From ANON - Katzztar on September 19, 2005
    Ch.22 was well done. They seemed to be very incharacter, from Rin's fear of wolves to Kouga's obsession with Kagome.

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  • From ryukotsusei on September 19, 2005
    glad Hiei was able to keep Rin from falling to her death, I don't blame him for being pissed from looking at her memories. Good chapter, update soon please.
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  • From ANON - k on September 19, 2005
    please update i stayed up all night waiting for the next chappie at least give us one for today
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  • From ANON - Sayuri-chan on September 19, 2005
    !!! Ah! I love this story so much!! :: huggles computer :: So good! And as for Kurama and Rin...wow...Sesshoumaru will promise much death to him if he decides to hurt her. Kagome chan! The lemon was so believable! I can see Kuwabara kun being all shy--hell, he hasn't had a girl that would really want to do those kind of things to him. *grins* That was BEFORE Kagome...^^ Well, it's awesome so far, please write more soon!
    Sayuri-chan~
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