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  • From ANON - Anon on September 19, 2005
    it's absolutely wonderful
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  • From ANON - Diane on September 19, 2005
    I'm really enjoying this & can hardly wait for more. I have noticed 1 thing though, when using out it should usually but not always be followed by of, as in; blood gushed out of her neck & you tend to use out by itself; blood gushed out her neck. Hope this is helpful.
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  • From ryukotsusei on September 19, 2005
    Glad Hiei took that bitch out. The nerve of her *growls* Hmm not this is becoming interesting.. Rin's interested in Yusuke, Yusuke is in love with Keiko, Youko just marked Rin but wants Kagome, and Kagome wants Kuwabara who is in love with Yukina. I gotta hand you a new crown. You are now the queen on Convoluted Relationships lol Good chapter, update soon please.
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  • From ryukotsusei on September 18, 2005
    well thats a good way to get the ball rolling with the two of them lol Youko needs to be slapped. Whatever happened to him being good with words? lol Seems to me its a case of open mouth insert foot. Good chapter, update soon please.
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  • From ryukotsusei on September 18, 2005
    Looks like the girls (and guys) are in a spot of trouble. Figures it was a set up. *shakes head* Maybe next time they won't rush headlong into something like this. Good chapter, can't wait to find out what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Alvida on September 18, 2005
    I probably should save this for my own fic but at the rate that's coming...

    Another issue with Yukina is it is very likely that she was sexually abused by Tarukane's (sp?) thugs. After all, they needed to hurt her to get her to cry. So not only is sexual reproduction a perversion, she may have had a horribly negative introduction to it.

    I was outvoted on Hiei/Rin, I take it?
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  • From ANON - sweettart on September 18, 2005
    ooohh... that makes sense :) Thanks for answering my question...
    Keep up the great writing! ;)
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  • From ryukotsusei on September 18, 2005
    Poor Kagome and Rin, they can't help who they've fallen for. Now if only both boys would notice that the girls did indeed like them. Good chapter, I look forward to the next one. Update soon please.
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  • From Katzz on September 18, 2005
    Well, suddenly throwing yourself in a guys arms and kissing him is one to show himhe's not unwanted ;)
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  • From Katzz on September 18, 2005
    Finally they are starting to see the problem of the retionship between Kazuma and Yukina.... It's more like best freinds thatn a boyfriend and girlfriend.
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  • From ANON - sweettart on September 18, 2005
    Good story, I can't wait to see how it turns out :)
    One question, though... Is it strange that Kagome calls him by his last name instead of his 1st if he is going to be her love interest?
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  • From ANON - qnofserenity on September 18, 2005
    This is great, didn't see the Keiko/Yusuke break up (Rin luv interest????). This story just keeps on getting better. I felt pretty sad for Kuwabara when he realized Yukina never thought of him as anything else but a friend. That really hurt him. Kag's will show him differently (snickers...). Again well written and most amusing. I can't wait for the Kurama reaction. Can't wait to read more and keep up the wonderful work (Uuuhhh.. writing.)
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  • From ANON - EatAPeach on September 18, 2005
    I like the way you're portraying Kuwabara. Most authors tend to make him overly oafish, but I think you've got a much more accurate depiction here--lovably goofy without being too stupid, and of course very honorable. Nice job! Keep it up, I'm anxious to see more.
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  • From ryukotsusei on September 18, 2005
    Man I feel for Kuwabara.. Appearently Kagome does as well just in different ways lol I can only imagine how that kiss is going to fuel both of their fantasies now lol Good chapter, please update soon.
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  • From ANON - EatAPeach on September 18, 2005
    I was wondering how you were planning on separating Kuwabara and Yukina, and I think you've handled it well. Leave it to Shizuru to put things into perspective (I just love her)! Well, good job--keep it up!
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