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By : kimisan
  • From SayuriNakamura on September 18, 2005
    Kuwabara kun! :: huggles :: Crushing blow, but it had to be done. Yukina seems like she would rather not have anyone than someone who wanted more and couldn't have it. She'll let him go...hopefully. But Hiei's reaction might be not be for the better...although, if she let Kuwabara go, then it wouldn't be a problem. But if he ends up breaking things off and it hurts Yukina...then Hiei might just have to go and kill him...and that would be very devistating to all the fun steps him and Kagome have taken so far! Ah, you must write more! I'm addicted to your story!
    Sayuri-chan
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  • From ryukotsusei on September 17, 2005
    Poor Kuwabara, guess that just told him where his relationship was going with her. Maybe Kagome can make him happier. Good chapter, please update soon.
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  • From SayuriNakamura on September 17, 2005
    Ah! This is great! I've NEVER seen this pairing before, and it's totally awesome that you're doing something original. And you're doing an EXCELLENT job with it. Suggestion for Rin pairing? Definately Hiei. Cause he's so much like Sesshoumaru...well...somewhat. If there's anyone who can open him up, it would be our sweet lil' Rin. That, and she's got spunk, and not afraid to inflict pain...hehe (points to Yusuke) Well, it's a totally schway story so far! Update as soon as you can!! =)
    Sayuri-chan~
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  • From ryukotsusei on September 17, 2005
    Oh man that's got to burn Kurama's ass that she willingly kissed Kuwabara lol *snickers* That'll put a kink in his tail. Good chapter, please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 17, 2005
    yuske/rin please
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  • From ANON - tomy on September 17, 2005
    Well i've talked to my friends about this story and where its going and we agree that we would like to see a rin/kurama pairing

    the story's great so far and thats just are input

    p.s maybe sesshiles could be alive in makai and find out about rin so there could be some rivalry between kurama for rins affection

    love your story

    tomy
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 17, 2005
    rin/kurama
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  • From ANON - Kazuma\'s FanGirl on September 17, 2005
    Let this teen Rin ge together with a teen Shippo
    please no Kurama or Hiei they're so full of themselves. They need to be taken down a size

    OHHHHHH I got an idea! Let it be a f/f pairing!
    Let Yukina like Rin, that would YUkina out of the equation for Kagome and Kazuma to get together. After all, Yukina comes from an all female society, that needs no males for procreation. So being with another female for company is natural for her.


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  • From ANON - Katzztar on September 17, 2005
    Ch.14
    GAH, After Yusuke destrying the well, I wouldn't count him as a freind so quickly but add hit to teh sme shit list as Krauma and Hiei .. at least for a few days.
    Well, Rin told us what happened to Sango and Miroku, but what about Shippo and Kirara? Are they still alive in the Makai??

    I would love to see a grown Shippo take interest with this version of Rin,....
    Unless you plan on setting her up with someone else. At first I was thinking of Yusuke but it seems he and Keiko get alonf fine in this It is nice to see a x-over that would keep Yusuke and ?Keiko together. Ugh, I don't want to see Rin with Hiei or Kurama either though, but if she has a personality similar to Hher lord's she may hold on to grudges for a long time XD

    I do hope that Shippo isn't dead, I would like to see him come back, with the way they make demons grow slowly, he would most likeky be areound '18' in growth. But what I miss is the protectiveness he has for Kagome.
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  • From ryukotsusei on September 17, 2005
    Kurama's lucky she didn't continue through with her attacks on him. I'd say she difinately picked up some of Sesshoumaru's mannerisms lol Good chapter, update soon please.
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  • From ANON - Alvida on September 17, 2005
    RinxHiei, of course. Yuusuke's taken and Kurama always gets the girl or the guy or the whatever. I guess Koenma is another option but who wants a father-in-law like Enma?
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 17, 2005
    If it's not going to be a Rin/Sesshoumaru, then how about Rin/Kurama. Being human she can relate to his human side, and having spent so much time with Sesshoumaru, she could probably wrap Youko around her little finger. Also, it would be the perfect opportunity to get rid of Eri.

    Really like how you are portraying Kuwabara. He is much more mature in your story just like he was at the end of the series. Look forward to your next update.
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  • From ANON - j on September 17, 2005
    rin/kurama

    rin/sesshoumaru
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 17, 2005
    great
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  • From ryukotsusei on September 17, 2005
    Hmm that isa good question as to how he knew she was nude unless he saw the close dropped to the floor or something. Either way, I hope he enjoyed however much of a show he got lol So Rin might be coming back, I wonder how she will fit into everything. Good chapter, update soon please
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