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Reviews for The Better Man

By : kimisan
  • From loretta537 on January 31, 2009
    this is a great story so far, i love it. i'm surprised that sessy (or anybody else) didnt geld kurama. i was disappointed to find out that although the story is 36 chapters and hadnt been updated in a while that it is incomplete, i just assumed that such a long story would be complete. i hope you update it one day soon.
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  • From Huntedrose on July 04, 2007
    Awwww...just when I was all caught up in the story, it stopped! Darn. Thank you for a few enjoyable hours, however! I guess I'll just have to finish it in my head. ;)
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  • From ANON - anom on August 28, 2006
    I can't wait for more, it's that great of a story
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  • From ANON - mikopunzl on August 23, 2006
    I had a few doubts about this pairing, so much so that it took me a while to read it. So far so good, though. I think that this is the strangest pairing a person can do for YYH. Hopefully you'll finish this one day, cause I'd like to see a good, finished story about Kagome and Kuwabara. I love your style of writing!
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  • From ANON - peach on December 16, 2005
    *sigh* and i thought that there was a new chapter of this wonderful fic
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  • From ANON - willowsnap on November 04, 2005
    WOW!!! I just started reading you fanfiction and suprised to see such a uniq pairing. Im a big Kuwabara fan and Im happy that hes going to get the girl and not be portrayed as the ignorant idiot in a story. Please please write some more chapters.
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on October 07, 2005
    I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Nefra on October 05, 2005
    Oh my god! I have been on the edge of my seat waiting for an update to this story. Personally I'm overjoyed that someone is finally giving Kuwabara a chance to get the girl. All in all he's not THAT bad looking, he's honorable, chivalrous and he would love any woman he ended up with unconditionally. Now tell me, who wouldn't want a man like that? Now, this whole deal with Kurama is just making me want to pull my hair out. I think Rin should shove the stick that's stuck in his ass up a little further and make him cry for Mommy. I love everyone's favorite kitsune but he's just acting like a jerk. Kinda reminds me of Inu Yasha for some reason. LOL! The scene with a drunk Kagome telling him where to go was absolutely priceless. She told him exactly what was on her mind and what he'd put poor Rin through. I'm also glad that Rin turned her face away when he went to kiss her. Of course having him want to kiss her after finding out what Kagome said would make her think he felt obligated. Plus...he degraded her in a very bad way. No wonder Sesshoumaru wants to keep him away from her. Hope you update very soon. Again, I'm waiting on the edge of my seat to see the conclusion to this very addicting story.

    Ja ne!

    Nefra
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 05, 2005
    i have read all your stories and this is my absolute favorite

    your doing a great job update soon
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 05, 2005
    plz update soon love the story
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  • From ANON - Vanessa on October 05, 2005
    love the chapter, I know Rin was really hurt and all but i'm glad that she didn't let him kiss her since he said that to her and it seem like he felt obligated to do more than to do it because he wanted to him just realizeing that Kagome had said the truth and then telling Rin that Kagome was right and that he needed to remedy that is the most hurtful thing he could have said after saying he wanted to start over so i say go Rin. And don't you being giving Kurama any type of loving until he can fully explain to you why he was acting that way besides his excuse of Yusuke and her were flirting he should also tell her about how he felt when he found out about Shessomaru had her and how Shesso's possesiveness and gaurdianship of made him feel. plz tell me that type of stuff is going to show up?
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 05, 2005
    Good chapter. Poor Kagome. She's going to be miserable in the morning. Hope Rin and Kurama actually try to get to know each other not just have sex. The way you developed Rin & Yusuke's friendship was nice and I think Kurama should try to get to know her better. Especially since he apologized for IF he hurt her feelings. After what he said, he should know he did. Will be watching for your next update.
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  • From ANON - EatAPeach on October 05, 2005
    Ha! That was freaking hilarious! Bet Kagome's going to want to kick her own ass in the morning! Oh well, everyone needs a good embarrassing drunk now and then. Nice to see Kurama do some much needed apologizing, if I were him I'd be walking on eggshells for the next, oh I don't know...forever. Anyway, great job! Keep up the good work, and please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Katzztar on October 04, 2005
    Hehe I loved Keiko's retation to when Kurama said that Rin may love Yusuke =
    "Good! For a while there we were all starting to worry that she might actually be in love with you."
    That line is priceless!

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  • From ANON - Katzztar on October 04, 2005
    Wonderful chapters!
    Hehe I loved the scene with Hiei sniffing Rin. One thing, I'm not full youkai soo....what did it mean?

    Now on to my favorite pairing = Kazuma and Kagome.
    About time Kazuma asked her out for a date. But she got stinking drunk. Well one good thing did come out of it, Kagome did make a comment of seducing Kazuma, tht should tell Kazuma that she does like him.

    As much as there been on Rin, I want Kagome to get lucky. I can't wait for more action between Kagome and Kazuma.
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