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Reviews for Complicated Childbirth

By : fadingsun
  • From ANON - loke on May 10, 2006
    Thanks for updating on your story. I read it! It was awesome. Sad but good. I realized that you really are going to kill someone off, so I won't push for a different ending. Even though I have no saying in your decision, and even though I love Inuyasha to pieces, if I had to choose, I would want Inuyasha to die.

    Why? Well, because that way Sesshoumaru will always have a part of Inuyasha with him in there son. And he can still have an heir to raise as the ruler of the Western Lands. It sounds heartless, but Inuyasha will always live in their son, Sesshoumaru will have comfort in that right? Besides, if Sesshoumaru were to die, what would happen to Inuyasha and the pup, they are to weak to help themselves. And Sesshoumaru is the likely person to rule and raise their son.

    Besides...I always wanted to know how Sesshoumaru would act if Inuyasha were to die.

    lol...I got carried away.

    I know it's not my decision. But I hope you...hehe..nevermind.

    I just love your story.
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  • From ANON - dah on March 16, 2006
    no.. no ..yoy can't kill them.. not now.. *sob sob*
    no no
    ..
    anyway, if you really feel like killing either of them.. please let it be Inuyasha.. Sess is just too wonderful to die. You can't kill Sess!
    ..
    I think it's useless to tell you how much i love this fic? Well, if you didn't know already, I love it! It is one of the most beautiful fic I have ever read.
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  • From ANON - Princess Sin on March 15, 2006
    i just finished reading chapter 7 and it had me cringing in pain
    throughout the story. but it was great. please please pllleeaasssseeee
    don't let one of them die. how about trading naraku's life for
    theirs. that would be a fair trade. right.
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  • From ANON - djl on March 15, 2006
    cool beans.... that was a great chapter.... I love this fanfiction... too bad next chapter is the last... anyway until next time
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  • From ANON - Despairingly Pregnant Male Fic Reader on March 15, 2006
    You are a scary author. But I'm looking forward to the next chapter. And maybe the next fic.
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  • From GrayWolf on March 14, 2006
    I don't think you should kill any of them!!! >.< if there is a death I hope its the baby.

    Good story!
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  • From ANON - vampress on February 13, 2006
    WOW!!! This story is oooh so good! It only lacks more chapters anxious to read more soon. Excellent writing, loving the drama & action. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 02, 2006
    wow u weren't kinding when u said this wasn't the usually birth story. I absouluty love it. :D Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Tryst on January 31, 2006
    Ahhhh. That is so very ahhh. MMMM. You got me seriously rethinking some aspects of my fics, but what the hell, thats what fiction is all about. update soon.
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  • From RoSharla on January 28, 2006
    hey i like this story, keep up with the good work, and i almost cried when inuyasha was getting hurt so much from birthing. so he has the same thing as a guy and female has 'down there'??. please continue this story. thanks.
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  • From ANON - joy on January 10, 2006
    ahhhhh this is amazing i cant wait for more
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  • From ANON - SP777 on January 09, 2006
    I think I can HONESTLY say I'm MENTALLY exhausted from reading your story. :-)
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  • From Ichigosan on January 09, 2006
    I would like to say that I have found your story to be a very interesting read. It is rather gory, but I’m not so much opposed to that. You have certainly spent a great deal of time researching the birthing process, so again very impressive work in that respect. At any rate, I did notice one little item about the end of chapter six. Your statements about the birth of the placenta not happening, or not occurring before Sesshoumaru cleaned up Inuyasha has a small flaw. Specifically, the umbilical cord should still be hanging out of Inuyasha’s anus, unless somehow it managed to retract back, which …yeah. Plus with Sesshoumaru having done all that cleaning up, he would have definitely noticed. Just something to think about.
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  • From Ladyanimelover on January 08, 2006
    Almost to bloody for my taste but I like it, its defently diffrent which is always a good thing. Cant wait for your next chapter
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  • From ANON - ice on January 07, 2006
    all i have to say is whoa and it was intense i did like it and i would love for u to continue
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