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Reviews for Complicated Childbirth

By : fadingsun
  • From ANON - The Seeker on January 04, 2006
    "death fic" means ANYONE dies in this sense! PLEASE!!!!! reconsider! I beg of you!
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  • From ANON - Tammy Wright on January 03, 2006
    Will Inuyasha die. Please no!
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  • From ANON - Ace on December 30, 2005
    Very good as usual. I am glad to see that you are going to continue the story. Obviously you have still left the ending very open to the idea of someone dieing. In my opinion it would make more sense for someone to die but of course it is up to the author. I'll be keeping an eye out for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 29, 2005
    Ok....by the way, great fic. Lovely, erotic, hot.
    This is a real mpreg fiction, in other words you do write about the birth.
    Not like other fics where the father gives birth in one second and that is it, the end.
    I mean, births hurt and last a while..let's get real.

    I love it, good job. If you are going to kill somebody....Kagura or Kouga then, not the family.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 29, 2005
    What?
    Death fic? Oh crap!

    Well, the baby better die, not Inuyasha otherwise Sesshomaru will kill the baby and that would be quite an odd plot.
    Now, I sense you will kill Sesshomaru, after all there is no ultimatum-requisites about his death. His death would not induce anything such as Inuyasha killing himself or the baby...Inuyasha would just move on.

    Crap...death fic. Kill the baby and if possible, write a sequel where Inuyasha gets to give birth to cubs with a sort of happily ever after ending.
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  • From ANON - Becca on December 28, 2005
    I like the fic and all, but if you're going to kill off one of the characters, let it be Inuyasha. Sesshoumaru is suppose to have Tensaiga at his side. In the anime and manga, Sess always had it with him. Don't think me rude or anything. I just don't like fics with sad and depressing endings. Don't think I hate this fic, I'm reading it because I'm hoping that it will end on a some what happy note.

    -----------------------------Becca
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 26, 2005
    This is really depressing and incredibly painful.

    You have talent, but I think you dragged the whole birthing thing out way too long. You can only have Inuyasha going through so much pain and agony and near-birthings and Sesshomaru battling so many demons and comforting him so many times before you being to loose interest.
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  • From ANON - dah on December 21, 2005
    Awesome chappie! I really liked it.. and it looks like inuyasha is about to die.. poor bastard. :P Maybe I shouldn't be so happy? Anyhow, I really liked the hole pup and sess scene, and this chapter was as good as the ones before, or even better. Thanks, and please update soon! :D (and about the death fic vs. non death fic, not every story have a happy ending. Of course people like happy endings, but this style of fic you have created, it wouldn't not suit very well. And if you kill Inu yasha (as it seems now) it will truly affect Sesshoumarus mental situation, and you can use that to sequel. for instance: What if Sess truly loss his self? and do not take care of the child? What if Sess would think that inuyashas death would be the kids fault? Or what if sess would become ultra protective good father, but the child would crave more? And then Sess would have to ,for example, remarry?)
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  • From ANON - Glaze on December 21, 2005
    Fadingsun please please don't kill anyone off let someone help poor yasha and they just have the baby then you throw in that the placenta hasn't come out that's all right I love been scared to death and I have never wanted a pairing to have a happy ending such as this in fact.....when you said that there might be someone to die it dawned on me I have never read a story like that and I don't want to so please with sugar on top save everyone ok we all wanna feel happy happy joy joy thoughts....ok Please update more I know I will be waiting with baited breath to read more much more about this great story and remember don't kill anyone ok........
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  • From ANON - Kiara on December 21, 2005
    Hey, great chapter! You wanted to know if the baby's death would make it a death fic and I think it would because as I see it the whole fic is surrounding the circumstance of his birth. However, I still don't want any three of them to die. Anyway, its totally up to you about who dies since its your fic and you have to like your writing first. So, yeah, please update soon. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!
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  • From ANON - Princess Sin on December 21, 2005
    i was so happy to see that the baby is all right but what
    about inuyasha. you can't let him die now. not after
    all the pain and heart ache . . .and pain that he went
    through. i think he deserves some happiness. don't
    you. but i still say it can't be a deathfic because of
    the tensiaga.
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  • From ANON - yoblossom on December 20, 2005
    .... does that mean that Inu's going to die? *ssad face* how sad...
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  • From ArchNemesis on December 19, 2005
    Excellent work as always...

    I can't wait for the next chapter. It seems that Sesshomaru & Inuyasha are having some problems with the birth. You have more twists and turns than most plots I've read. Can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon!

    Nemesis ^_~
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  • From ANON - Twilight on December 19, 2005
    Great update. I find myself dreading and looking forward to them at the same time. Although, I know it's not going to happen, I wish they could live happy ever after with their son and have a castle full of babies. Alas it's not to be.
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  • From ANON - petpeeves12 on December 19, 2005
    You caould make another story with all of the back ground story and how all of this happened.
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