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Reviews for Complicated Childbirth

By : fadingsun
  • From ANON - Jade on December 19, 2005
    Me here, again. Haha. I was looking over your AN again, and I thought I would answer one of your questions. If you killed off the pup, it would still be a death fic, yes. I believe so, anyway. The pup may not be a main character, but he is a character, and I think that's all that matters. Also, just because he's not a main character, doesn't mean he's not important to the plot. Because, if you get down to it, he could very well be the most important character in this story. That's the way I see it, anyway. Haha, I hope that helped you any.
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  • From ANON - Jade on December 19, 2005
    I want to thank you for taking the time to send out an email for the updated chapter. It was very kind.

    I liked this chapter, it was long (which is always a good thing) and the detail was amazing. You seem to have looked up the medical terminology for this fic, which always makes it an interesting read. Although the concept is really out there (I've never been one to read MPreg fics because they just seem too unrealistic) you geared it up to the point where it was easy to ignore that fact. Congradulations.

    As for the whole "who should die" situation, I think that should be entirely up to you. I know the readers are important, but you have to keep in mind that it's your fic. Above the readers, you are the one that has to be happy with it. You should just do what feels right. If you had an idea in the begining of the story, maybe you could go with that. Keep in mind that no matter what you choose to do, there will always be those people that don't agree with you. But that's something you'll have to be willing to ignore because, despite the people that don't like it, there will always be those loyal fans that do like it.

    Haha does that make any sense? I think I'm ranting.

    Anyway, I'll be looking forward to the next chapter, and I hope you have a happy holiday, too!
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  • From ANON - djl on December 19, 2005
    First of all, I would like to apologize for my one review where I was talking about the update. I did not mean to rush you. I just was anxious to see the next chapter. Second, really good chapter... I cannot wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - PrincessSesshyMaru on December 08, 2005
    Gah! Don't kill Inuyasha. If someone has to die make it Sesshomaru. It would be better if you killed Kagome but since you wont. But it would be to sad if you killed their son and Inuyasha so kill Sesshomaru. It pains me but it would be so sweet if Sesshomaru died protecting his mate. :( ~PSM
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  • From ANON - Carrie on November 28, 2005
    Oh goodness, I don't think anyone should die except those annoying youkai who keep going after them! :( That is hard to even think about with this story, they've been through so much already, I feel they should all make it out alive....but that's just me. So I guess, I wasn't really any help, haha.
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  • From ANON - petpeeves12 on November 27, 2005
    exciting! To bad Sess didn't think abaout giving him a c-section. Then again acording to these circumstances he wouldn't have the time.
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  • From ANON - Snowfall on November 27, 2005
    So, why does someone have to die? Obviously, Inuyasha is very close to death and would be the logical choice.

    Snowfall
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  • From ANON - D/H on November 26, 2005
    Well, why not NO DEATHS..Great story and that one part about Inu dying and telling Sessu to remarry totally made me cry...

    Ohh, It's BEEN a LOOONG while since you've updated, haven't you??


    Anyway, hope the next update wont be tooo long...

    I mean, i know you're going tooo TRY too kill off Inu or Sess and that's just boring..Why not have a happy ending..Why going the other way???
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  • From ANON - Purinsu Arashi/Storm on November 26, 2005
    Well I have to say this is a great story, I'm a bit perplexed that some one has to die, I read thru the Reviews
    Some say use the Tenseiga

    But I remembered that in the story...

    "Inuyasha knew all along that Sesshomaru adore children although he never admitted it. Hence, this request was a surprised but not unexpected. He could still clearly remember that fatal day when Rin and Jaken were absorbed by Naraku when she attempted to retrieve Tenseiga for Sesshomaru while Jaken tried to protect her.

    Not only did Sesshomaru lose his Tenseiga to Naraku, but also loss the two people he greatly cared about."

    He kind of lost it in chapter three. Though I do think I like the one reply that stated someone other than the Two fathers and new-born should die, Kagura..
    I give that person points.

    If I had to choose someone to die, which I rather not, id say someone needs to pop up and help and die defending to two lovers.. Anyone.
    I don’t remember who all is still alive; maybe kouga can die honorably saving them in the nick of time.
    (Assuming he is still alive in this fic)

    Personally, I think the fate that has been set and playing out should have some form of pleasant ending.
    As stated in other reviews, and I agree, If inu die Sess will follow, and vice-versa.. They can't die and it be only one death.
    i think someone else would be best. Maybe when they get to the mountain it can have a different affect and heal Inuyasha, you can twist it to be a bad thing and make it heal to fast having Sesshomaru no choice but to hurt inu to save the baby from being crush in-between (in and out).
    I don’t really know, I’m not a good writer, in fact I can’t write to save my life.
    Though I really enjoy this story, it will be sad if one of the three dies in the end.
    But please don’t stop on account of me, I will read till the end.
    Keep it up, you are an inspirational writer.
    ^_^

    Storm.

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  • From ANON - dah on November 26, 2005
    if you absolutely must kill someone in this fic, then kill inuyasha. Because killing the baby would be too cruel, and killing Sess would prove no point. But your fic is very good, not something what I would read normally but perfeckt for this evening. And the way you have written it only makes it better. Do continue writing this, and other stories too.
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  • From ANON - Aini on November 26, 2005
    me again... KILL KAGURA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! KAGURA MUST DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SHE MUST BURN IN HELL WITH THAT WHORE KIKYO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!... ::cough,cough:: don't kill anyone... except for Kagura... please Sun-sama! ::bows on knees::

    Aini-chan
    (loyal servant to sess/inu)
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  • From ANON - Aini on November 26, 2005
    ::sniff,sniff:: please don't make anyone die!!! i want a happy family!!! with sess and inu and the baby!!!! please please please please pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!! don't kill anyone!!! PLEASE SUN-SAMA!!!!... T_T... don't kill anyone!... it's a good story... relly good... great in fact!... but i've read too many death fic with sess/inu pairing... and i don't want it anymore!!!... could u give me a happy ending with them still alive and a family... with 2 kids... their son and a daughter later on mayb?.... that would b a nice story!! please Sun-sama!! ::bows low:: T_T...

    Aini-chan
    (loyal servant to sess/inu)
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  • From ANON - inufangirl007 on November 25, 2005
    if someone has to die, don't let it be inu or sess! They've sufered enough! please update soon.....
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  • From ANON - kiotana on November 24, 2005
    O.o! MORE*zombie* MORE!
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  • From ANON - evilkitten on November 24, 2005
    NOOO! PLEASE don't kill them! I beg of you, after all this torture the least they deserve is a happy ending.
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