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Reviews for Complicated Childbirth

By : fadingsun
  • From on November 24, 2005
    I think the baby should die! I don't think Sesshomaru or Inuyasha died, they should be badly injured but not killed. I think it would be better if the baby died, and they find out Inuyasha is not able to produce anymore children. Well anyway that's my idea, I hope you update soon!
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  • From ArchNemesis on November 24, 2005
    Very intense. God, I never thought that I would say but I’m glad that I had kids before this fic came out. Excellent work! Can’t wait for the next chapter. Looking forward to it. I'm not giving my opinion of the character death (only if you don't get a good reader response).

    Nemesis ^_~

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  • From ANON - Caitriona on November 24, 2005
    I don't want either of them to die!!!!! If you have either of them die, the other will most ashuredly follow. If Inu dies, Sess will follow him. If Sess dies, Inu is far too weakened to survive the trip back to the castle alone.

    This story is compelling in a strange way, and I have enjoyed reading it. Especially the interaction between the two fathers. I think I would also like a clearer telling of the back story that is mentioned in the previous chapter.....but not if you kill one of them off. :-(

    But realize that I will read and review either way. Thanks for writing and thanks even more for letting us know when you have updated!

    Caitriona
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  • From ANON - Princess Sin on November 24, 2005
    i would say that it shouldn't be a death fic. i say that because sesshomaru has the tensiage. if inuyasha or the baby die
    he would be able to bring them back. Right! i say that because i don't like death fic. there too heartwrenching especially
    when you want the characters to be together. but if he can't then it would (i'm sorry to even say this) but i would say
    the child. you may think it's cruel but he will be able to have another and hopefully they will know about a C section.
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  • From ANON - Jade on November 24, 2005
    Aw, such a terrible cliff hanger! this story seriously has me on the edge of the seat!

    Personally, I don't WANT any of them to die...but logically the one to go would probably be Inuyasha. Just because...well, come on. lol. Maybe the pup, too...but I think he would do fine. Sigh...this is becomming such a sad fic.

    When this is all done, I think you should write a side-fic about Inuyasha's time with Naraku. It would be interesting, to say the least--and people always review torture stories! That's if you're feeling up to it...
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 24, 2005
    also: you need to change the warnings on this, i wouldn't have read it if i had known you were going to off someone ... :(
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 24, 2005
    what? are you serious? shit! death? damnit! :(
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  • From ANON - Michelle on November 23, 2005
    It took me a little while to decide what I think is going to happen...Well, it seems like no matter what you do, Inuyasha's going to die...It will be very sad, but why can't Sesshomaru just use the Tenseiga?It's just not fair that no matter what someone has to die!It's unfair!But...I guess if someone has to die, make it Inuyasha.Sesshomaru's too strong to die and even if their son dies, Inuyasha's proably in so much pain that he dies anyway.That's my opinion.
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  • From ANON - Erik on November 23, 2005
    If either Inuyasha or the little one must die, it should be the little one. I feel awful saying that, but at least in such a case, they can try again. Inuyasha and Sesshomaru could try to have another pup. But I would love it if both Inuyasha and the pup could live. I can't speak for everyone, but it would be soooo sad if one of them died
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  • From ANON - loke on November 23, 2005
    Don't kill the baby, their son. Sesshy or inuyasha will not be the same!!!! Kill of the bad guys, maybe kagura.
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  • From ANON - loke on November 23, 2005
    Are you tell me that you're going to kill of Inuyasha or Sesshoumaru? Please tell me that you're not serious? AHHHHHHHH!!!! Please no! You are a great writer. I totally love this story, please don't make me cry at the end. Why can't they be together. Okay...I'll calm down, hehe...chill. I'll respect it, because it's your story, it's really good. I have to say, one of my favorites, I just hope that you don't kill sesshy or inuyasha. That's just sad. Just wrong.
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  • From ANON - Kiara on November 23, 2005
    I like your story but please don't let Sesshoumaru, Inuyasha or the baby to die. Killing any one of them would be really cruel and horrible. I really want a happy ending even if it means they will suffer during the story horribly. If you really want to kill someone kill Kagura and/or Kanna. Bye.
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  • From ANON - djl on November 23, 2005
    cool chappie as all of the others... if someone must die... please kill off the pup...if Inuyasha or Sesshomaru died that would be really bad in my opinion... anyway please update as soon as possible... I cannot wait to see the next chapter so do not forget to send me the link. Thanx very much
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  • From ANON - Fluffy\'s Mate on November 23, 2005
    NO DEATH!!! COME ON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 I don't want anyone to die!! SHESH!!! I've been reading this long.....XC'''
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  • From ANON - Twilight on November 23, 2005
    WOW!!! That was powerfull stuff. My heart is still beating fast. I'm not a huge fan of death fics, especially where babies are concerned, it just seem fair somehow. It is your fic however and if you say someone must lose their life so be it. I hope your other readers can give you an answer to that question.

    Please e-mail me when the next installment is complete.

    Twilight
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