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Reviews for Complicated Childbirth

By : fadingsun
  • From ANON - kiotana on September 25, 2005
    what!!!!! i am not calm now! you must update!
    and i think the reason it was taken off ff is because there was too much graphic...ppl keep telling me that so i guess it must be true. what a rip off!
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  • From ANON - nicole on September 25, 2005
    Wow. Never read a birthing of any of Inuyasha's children before that was so detailed. It was intense. Good story. Can't wait to read more. Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha are totally in there. It's cool that their first child is a boy, that way they have an heir. Totally waiting anxiously.
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  • From Yugidarkangel on September 25, 2005
    The chapter was good! Please update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - Blaze on September 25, 2005
    Loved it please write more love it you are awesome I just want a health baby I'm on the edge of my seat now....Can't wait till you update again........Please keep up the good work...
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  • From ANON - Rawben on September 25, 2005
    yey! great chapter! but poor inu!! ...ouch...
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  • From ANON - Japhia on September 25, 2005
    WHAAAATT???!?!!!! Push it back in? I suppose that would help in repositioining it but he could really hurt Inuyasha by doing that. I think this is a great story. I don't see a need to tell why they are mates. They are what they are and that's all. Please continue. I love reading this before work.
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  • From Yugidarkangel on September 20, 2005
    I love the way the you wrote this fic!!! It's the best!!!!! Please update soon!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 18, 2005
    It would be nice if you explained the situation before jumping headlong into such an unnatural theme such as male pregnancy. I mean, even the yaoi is really forced and stilted. Unfortunately, most of the readers are in the 13-to-15 range and as such are incapable of commenting maturely about this fic. In all honesty, it needs work. A lot of work. I suggest getting a beta. Keep writing though, you can only get better.
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  • From ANON - Shinra77 on September 18, 2005
    Wow that's a amazing story.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 16, 2005
    another great chapter! i really like this... but i dont know why... is that strange?
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  • From ANON - kiotana on September 15, 2005
    update!!!!!!!!
    i have reviewed and i was happy about an update but you really got to update !!!...........again!
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  • From ANON - nicole on September 15, 2005
    That was a good chapter. Very Intense.
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  • From ANON - yoblossom on September 15, 2005
    you evil evil evil person! you can't just let Inu-Yasha stay like that! he need's Shessy! Bring him back! right now! i'll still be reading, ause i wanna know what happens!
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  • From ANON - Atocha on September 15, 2005
    I'll give you a review just dont kiddnap the fluffy one!!! Inu Yasha needs him right now!!!
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  • From ANON - Rawben on September 13, 2005
    lol, it's hard to keep sess in char, but i think if he kicks some serious ass soon then that'd be good. is the demon coming up a bad guy? sess can kill him. ;) great chapter! and i really liked the part about the baby's blood...interesting...
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