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Reviews for Inuyasha's two other secrets revealed

By : Bikutoria1313
  • From ANON - Rawben on October 26, 2005
    ohhhh nice! great idea w/ the woman thing! :D update soon!!!!1
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  • From on October 24, 2005
    all right!! now to get on with the truth or dare scene or whatever you call it!!! i know i'm ahead and so people you aren't SHOULDN'T have READ this PART!! lol.. sorry for my enthusiasm...i've been saying "sorry for my enthusiasm" a lot these days... i think it's because i know that what it is instead of callin it "my weirdness" andyway UPDATE SOON!!
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  • From ANON - PhIlIa on October 23, 2005
    no0o0o0o0oo0o0o, more more more!!!! >.< the story was getting too hot but now its ooooover.... ;_____; wont you make another one? i love your story its teh best!!! xD ~hugz~ 3some! >.>
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  • From ANON - Dante on October 22, 2005
    Haha, that's so mean, stripping Inuyasha like that. He needs to get his revenge and strip them back.

    D_
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  • From ANON - Alta Lemur on October 22, 2005
    Ok, that was a funny chapter. I'm beginning to wonder where the lemon scene will come in. I'm also wondering when Inuyasha will become human, since you mentioned it earlier.
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  • From ANON - mel on October 01, 2005
    oh oh oh oh oh! Please! write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - crystaladept on October 01, 2005
    Hmm... I couldn't help but notice in chapter two, that you made a reference to Gravitation, I think. Eiri Yuki is quite the popular romance novelist. Pity he's gay. Hmm... cliff hanger at the end of chapter three... you better update soon, so I can find our what happens.
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  • From Mitamay on September 23, 2005
    Ooooh, this is getting pretty juicy! Update soon, this is great! X3 EM
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  • From ANON - Storm on September 23, 2005
    OH YEAH *coughs* that was very good pls update soon this is...*thinks* .....awsome no its better then awsome better then great mmmm damn whats that word ~_~ i need sleep next time ill give a better review ps THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS FIC I HAVE BEEN WAITING FOR ONE LIKE THIS *gets hit over the head by her freind* o_~ ow

    Storm ~_~m

    UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE *gets wacked in the head...again* X_X oro
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  • From ANON - kit master on September 21, 2005
    -falls out of chair laughing- didn't see -laugh- that ending -gasp- coming.... -hysterical laughter- oxygen... I need oxygen. But he... excuse me SHE would look hot as a girl, and yea i'm bi and if it bothers you, fuck off
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  • From ANON - BakuraxMalikNum1Fan on September 20, 2005
    ::howls and whistles:: Great ficcy so far. Update soon k?
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  • From ANON - Dante on September 20, 2005
    !? Ok, I was not expecting that last sentence. Haha this is a cliffhanger that is going to drive me crazy until you update again.

    D_
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  • From ANON - Rawben on September 19, 2005
    whoa. that was a good one! update soon!!!! i want to see thier reactions!!!! yey!!! is this m/m/m? cause it should be ;) i can't wait for the next chapter!! i hope it's longer too!
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  • From ANON - Atocha on September 19, 2005
    WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF!
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  • From ANON - Alta Lemur on September 17, 2005
    Yes, they NEED to have sex. As for Kouga waking up, he can join in later when he feels better. Good story so far. Basically I'd make two criticisms. One being that once you allude to a plot device, don't overuse it. Continued mentioning of a "secret" with Inuyasha is straining the text. The second is that dialogue, especially internal dialogue, consisting of "did I really just say/do that?" can be just as tiresome and unnecessarily become dead weight to a written work. Otherwise wonderful story so far. Update soon.
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