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Reviews for As Death Gives Life

By : Rinseternalsoul

From ANON - Anon on March 16, 2010
This was a wonderful story. Extremely well written, you had me thinking about the characters long after I stopped reading. You gave every character you wrote about such depth, you made them love-able. The smut was hot, the plot thick, and the characters believable. Overall I give this story a 10 out of 10.
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From estelin on July 11, 2009
this was excellent. keep up the good work and writing.
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From inulover16 on January 17, 2008
That was a great ending to the story. I have read all of your work under your name thus far and have not as of yet go to fic that you are co-writing. It would be GREAT to read what happens to Shippo! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!! ^-^
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From ANON - sesshysdarkkitten on October 17, 2007
I just wanted to say that i loved this story from beginning to end :) You did an excellent job on it. I think you should do the story about Kebechet & Shippo, from the end it seemed like there could be a love blossoming there. It would be great to see how it turns out if you do it. :)
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From CharlieLevoy on March 21, 2007
Hey, I know it's been a long time, but I had alot of things happen lately that kept me away. However I am back now and apparently have a lot of catching up to do as far reading your stories. Any way, I absolutely loved this story, thought a part of me still wishes that Anubis had gotten Kagome instead. lol Oh well I still loved it and I'm glad you made this one. Till next time. ~C.L.~ 1001/1000 ^_^
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From ANON - The Empress on January 07, 2007
I loved this story. Not sure if a continuation of it with shippo and Kabechet is a great idea though....hmmm. But a Kagome/Anubis fiction would be grand...*drool*...*drool*. I just can't get enough of the dog God. ^-^. *salutes rins..*. love it bravo.
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From ANON - Tiffinie on December 27, 2006
I love this story. So far I have read it twice & I plan to read it again. In your profile u said u liked hellsing, I do 2. You can find some good fics about Alucard & Victoria at Destiny's Gateway Romance Fanfiction Archives. I found some really good ones there.
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From ANON - Cmsoccer03119 on August 11, 2006
first i would like to say that you deserve so many more reviews that you have recieved...but i guess ppl don't like to review. i was even alitttle reluctant to review. now....YES!!! YOU MUST DO A SEQEUL!!!! ps i f*ckin luved this story your a FANTASTIC writer and your a person after my own heart ;) its one of the BEST stories i have ever read!!! maybe even the best...idk its sorta tied w/ my favorite...its kinda funny to call it my favorite even tho i can't remember the title of the story or some of the story...all i can tell you is that it was my VERY FIRST fanfiction i have ever read(and it holds a VERY special place in my heart. even more once i can find it again)...that and its a sess/kag and sess kidnapped her to take her blood (every night i think) in order to regain his arm....but for the bloody life of me i can't find it ne where!!! oh, back to the point...ur right up there!!!!! i swear you let me kno that you write a book and i'll go out and buy n read it in a second!!! thats how good i think you are!! idk what its about all i would need to kno is that u wrote it!!
okay...ne ways...i hope that you relize how cool and talented you are
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From YoukaiObsessed on August 07, 2006
When I was checking the main page, and I saw this was updated--I know I got the classic anime eyes look. Ya made my night!

Thank you for such a wonderful story! I loved this from the beginning to the end!

I would love to see a continuation of this story. I would definitely read it. You are a wonderful writer.

Thank you again. Congratulations on the wins! You deserved them!

~Tainted~
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From ANON - Merely Truth on August 07, 2006
Dear friend,

thank you very much ! You've ended this wonderful story very well, and I always find your written very nice to read, without mistakes, with a lot of vocabulary and sentences going like a stream... I love that ! Even if I'm french, I can understand enough english language to appreciate (but excuse-me for my english ^~^).

About a sequel, you surely can write it, I'm confident in that, but : it seems to me that Shippo had never developed a strong and rich character to elaborate a story around him (sorry for Shippo !). He is very charming, but not extraordinarly interesting, for the moment in your story, and in all the Inuyasha's fanfiction that I already saw. In opposition with Kebechet.... pffff !!!! Take courage to write that !

Nevertheless, if you have a plot going through you special brain (yes, yes, I say it !), don't hesitate : I shall read the story with a lot of pleasure, as any other you may write !!! If you are interested, I did have an idea about a story with Inuyasha and Sesshomaru to develop... Ask me if you want...

Still, thank you very much for the emotions, the tears, the warmth in my heart (and elsewhere...!) that I felt by reading your stories !
A bient�t,

Merely Truth

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From ANON - sesshomaruforever56 on July 20, 2006
One of the best stories I've ever read. I only read Sess/Kag stories and I really enjoyed the one. Now I'm really jealous of Kagome, she gets the hottest guys..heheh*.
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From ANON - Flightoffancy on February 09, 2006
This is an amazing story. I have jsut read all 40 chapters and it took me about three days but it has been worth every minute. How do I even begin to review 40 chapters of bliss, excitement, romance, some of the very best lemons I have ever read (oh to be kagome!!!) sprinkled liberally with the best humor. I have laughed and cried with sorrow and joy. When she finally got to see her mother again I cried like a baby. My girls were laughing at me and I told them to just wait till they read your most wonderous story.

Anubis is mouth-watering, Sesshomaru is both physically and emotionally devastating and Kagome just gets everything good (I hate her). Anubis was an amazing new character as was Kat. I thought she was both unique and precious.

I have read "The House of Lemons" and was truely amazed and thrilled. I think my favorite was about Kagome's new piercing, but as good as those lemons were, I think you outdid yourself on this story. Congratulations on your nominations. You most certainly deserve them. I love reading the little "things" and the beginning and ending of your chapters. You sound so insecure about your writing that you sometimes remind me of another extrodinary writer - Demonlordlover - who also worries if she is taking the right path within her stories. You are quite magical and very original. You (and a few others that I follow faithfully) are what I like to call "my sweet reads". I can't seem to stop reading which gets me into a lot of trouble.

I loved the part when Kagome gave birth the first time and Anubis was there. He was so touched and deeply caring, I was very glad that they included him in the raising of his daughter.

I also loved Lord Buhito and his incorrigible brood. Those chicks were positively maddening and I am surprised that Sesshomaru didn't do something drastic, I wouldn't have minded a few beheadings.

I love the very sweet way you brought Kat and Inuyasha together. It really made the story that there wasn't the usual "Kikiyo hates the world and Inuyasha" stuff. It made the story warmer and closer, like family.

But what I believe I love the most was that you kept every single original character of the series true to form. They never once falter and did something or said something that I believed to be "or of character" for them. I take my hat off to you for keeping this like a continuation of the series and adding enough new characters that just blended in as if they had been there all along.

Jiyuu(?) was perfect for Rin and Shippo turned out to be a real hottie. Thank you so much for having the time and the patience to give us this wonderful gift. My email is pegasus4@bellsouth.net. My name is Deobrah and I look forward to reading much more from you. In fact I have already bookmarked all of your other stories.

Til the next installment. Yours truly, Deborah.
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From ANON - Animefreak242 on January 31, 2006
Great chapter as always. *claps* I love action and violence! WHOO!! ^o^ --Not that much...-- But I have a question. You put Inuyasha, Miroku and Sango on the castle wall, correct? Then how could they be fighting with Sesshomaru in the next scene? ANd then they're back at the wall again later. Weren't the protecting the gates the whole time? Or is Sesshomaru's sight tha good that he can see Hiraikotsu from where he is? It's just from the way described the marching and Sesshomaru's intent to keep them away, I thought the battle was being fought further from the castle then it's outer wall. Just wondering about that.

Ok. I know that when Kagome had Kebechet it started another arc (for lack of a better word), and the focus is switched from her, to her daughter. But you seem to be glossing over Kagome now. She's almost a side-character to the story in which she was once a main one. It's a little wierd. Well, that and the fact that along with being almost overlooked (what does she do all day?), she has no opinion. Everything's about her family now. So... house wife-ish (i.e., coming to 'cheer Sesshomaru up' because of his 'feeling off' in the last chapter instead of the possible warning of things to come) . *shakes head* A complete 180. Many of the thoughts you've had about Kagome (other characters thinking of her/her mannerisms) have been reflecting on how she's hardheaded and strong-willed, yet none of this is exibited in her behavior as of late (the past 6 chapters). She's not overly worried about this war, whom may be behind it, nor their motive. Kebechet is the one who notices things, comforts others and shares knowledge (I know Kagome would be less experienced in that since she isn't a Goddess, but still). It seems like when Kebechet was born she took in some of Kagome's powers as well as all of her personality, and in turn roles. I don't know, maybe I'm looking too much into this, or maybe the skips in time that you're doing are more to highlight Kebechet as a point/person of focus for this story. It just seems... Strange.

Well, other than the confusing part and the Kagome-Kebechet thing, I love this story! But you knew that already. *gives you a cookie* I hope you update when you can. I hope the next chapter's not the last (or second to last). I don't want this story to end! But if it does, you have to write another one!

Oh, one more question - Can you put the amount of time that's passed between one chapter and the next? I'm thinking three years between the first two, and about seven or eight between chapters 37 and 38, but you can never be sure.

JA MATA!!
~Animefreak242
aka
KawaiiGirl
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From ANON - lost child on January 28, 2006
wonderful. I really like this chapter. Can't wait for the next one
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From ANON - Laini on January 27, 2006
HOLY SHIT that battle kicked ass!! i hope jiyuu will be ok..he is..right?? ugh,lol.plz update soon cant wait to read more!^_^
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