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By : Rinseternalsoul

From ANON - Flightoffancy on January 30, 2006
This is the most amazing story I have read to date. The characters were true, the idea was fresh and original and the new characters were well rounded and every bit as complex as those we have loved for so long. Sesshomaru was positively diabolical and oh so hot(copping a feel, good grief) and I have always thought Naraku was hot even though he cruel, evil, mean, backstabbing and vicious. The story was detailed and captivating. I read the whole thing this weekend, from start to finish. I got absolutely no housework done. I usually never sit down to read until I have my work done because if you get a good story you just can't stop. My daughter wanted me to just check out the first chapter but I was hooked and couldn't stop. There have been few other stories that I have been so totally hooked on.

You are an amazing writer, I bet you get that all the time. Your LEMONS are quite breathtaking. I had to get away a couple of times just to catch my breath. I was so hoping Anubis would manage to get at least one time in on Kagome. I don't think she would have regretted it. Oh to be that kind of slave. I just loved the fullness of the story. You left nothing hanging, had plenty of humor and passion. I especially loved Tala. A very unique character. You are very methodical and precise. I have started on some of your other stories and cannot wait to see what you will dazzle me with next.

Fantastic job, your very humble groupie, Deborah, at pegasus4@bellsouth.net
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From ANON - Midget on January 19, 2006
TWELVE?!?!?!?! God Inuyasha did good! Lol, that was a really nice ending. And Good for Anubis and Asami, was it? And all the pups Kagome and fluffy had! That was cute. lots of babies everywhere! Lol. I still don't get why Kagome didn't come back for over two years but meh. It was still very very awesome! Thank you so much Rin!

Much love from Midget
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From ANON - midget on January 19, 2006
"Soon after a *steak* of white passed through the streets..." Midget: ... steak? Steak, steak, hmmm... Ahuh! Streak! That's what she means! Lol It took me about two mintues to figuire it out., it was funny. I'm thinking, Mmmm, white steak. I mean, A piece of Sesshoumaru would taste pretty nice I reckon. Mwhahaha. On to za next chapter!
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From ANON - Midget on January 18, 2006
You were right, this lemon was hot!!! ^__ I like, next chapter!
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From ANON - Anonamous on January 03, 2006
This story is great. Very ammusing in parts. I don't really know how else to describe it. (as typed below i have stayed up all night reading your fics)

If you don't care about my usual ramblings then skip the rest. (with the amount i type I won't blame you)

I am a total fool though i decided to pull an all-nighter and read some of your fics on adultfanfictions.net - I am very impressed with the ones I have read so far though i forgot to send in my thoughts on them(maybe i shouldn't be here cause of my age but thats what the warnings are for).

The following has absolutely NOTHING to do with your fics.You don't have to read the rest(sorry I just kept typing, tells you how smart I am in the morning)
Once again you really don't have to read the rest.
Really it's not important i just had to relieve some stress and wear myself down some.
Seriously just skip to the closing If you want, you don't have to read it.
It's not even something to do with you.
O well I guess it's my own fault for typing it, but you really don't have to read someone else's thoughts on "paper" i'm sure you have more important things to think about than some strangers random concerns and ramblings.

*******unrelated ramblings begin*********

Don't read unless you want to be angry with me for incoherant babilings.

I am so stupid, it is currently 9:00 a.m. I decided that I wanted to watch a sunrise only being as stupid as I am I stayed up to watch instead of getting up to watch. oh well the damage is done, my body is going to hate me when I have to return to school next week it is so out of whack. Well now that i think about it, it shouldn't matter anyway I usually spend around half of my first class with my head on the desk. I don't really understand how I do it but that class has my highest mark. (it's in the 90s) I guess the reason I do well is my love of science and knowledge, I find that being a bookworm I read many informational books as well as pointless fiction and real life stories. I lead such a weird life i guess. I'm not 15 yet I'm in grade ten i have the second highest science mark in my class(92), I watch things rated for someone well beyond my age (bloodsport-movie rated R i think), I watch pointless childish cartoons and anime,etc.(Inuyasha, Yugi oh), I watch shows like CSI-Crime Scene Investigation, I read things like your fics-which are rather good-, I read mystery stories, adventure stories, romance,etc. basically any story i get my hands on. I just have the strangest interests of anyone. Also even though i despise learning languages in classes i find i have a knack for picking them up, I know french from school, some spanish, chinese, and now from looking at tons of inuyasha sites i have picked up quite a bit of japanese. I'm terribly sorry for all the trouble i just seem tohave to ramble in e-mails.

********Ok thoughts over, sorry for rambling to you********

i am so sorry

Gomen nesia I really just like to put my thoughts on "paper" and If you read them so so be it if not I've at least put them somewhere.
I'm terribly sorry for all the stuff i seem to leave you with in these e-mails that is unrelated to the review.

This story is GREAT I stayed up all night and read your fanfics, so sorry for my incoherant ramblings ealier.
Once again so sorry for all the non-review junk i put here.

Sincerely,
A fan of the your works that in this e-mail is anonamous

ps. i think i might have told you my real name in another review some other time o well =)

so sorry (again)
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From ANON - whaleon on October 19, 2005
lol excellent story like ure others and an excellent ending XD
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From ANON - ldymoonluvsinuyasha (not logged in) on October 12, 2005
Ok, I have finished reading this story in two days. It is 2:27 am right now and I just had to write this. I don't know if your going to read this review since you have finished this story and started another, I haven't even read the other reviews to see how many reviews you recieved for this story, but in the chance that you do go back and check for new reviews like I do, well, I decided to write you. This story rocked! I like everything about it, even the portal thing like a star gate type of thing. Mixing the Egyptian and Japanese cultures together was also different. I really enjoyed your portrayal of Anubis. He sounded Hot. I also noticed that you had mentioned your husband in your A/N. This is the first time that I had encountered someone like myself who is married and spent a lot of time writing a story that their husbands whined from lack of attention. Anyway, I truly enjoyed this story and I love Tala. He's a cute pet in a foreign kind of way. :) I also enjoyed how Midoriko is a demi-goddess and was banished and that Kagome not Kikyo was a descendant of Midoriko, since the jewl was born in her body. Kikyo was only a protector, not an inheritor. I just like the story, I know I said that already, but I said it again.

Thanks for writing something so different and kind of sci-fi at the same time it was a breath of fresh air.

Ldymoon
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From YoukaiObsessed on October 03, 2005
Epilogue~ Aww I really loved the ending to this. Yet another great story you have gave us readers. Thank you again for giving me the pleasure to read this wonderfully, well thought out story!

Tainted Dreams aka YoukaiObsessed
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From YoukaiObsessed on October 03, 2005
Chapters 36-40~ OMR poor Naraku!! *Gets dust buster (again) to suck up dust particled Naraku. Will piece him back together later.* I know he had to die. Ohhs another great fight scene! Wahoo.."Whom do you belong?" Gawd that was so HOT! He is such a hot lover! Aww I loved when they reunited. (With her friends then her Family) Lovely ending, I am off to read the Epilogue now.

Tainted Dreams aka YoukaiObsessed
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From ANON - Megan Consoer on October 01, 2005
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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From ANON - Minori on September 24, 2005
Hawt story.Update soon. ^_^
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From ANON - Megan Consoer on September 24, 2005
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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From YoukaiObsessed on September 24, 2005
Chapters 31-35- Naraku has been busy. I figured he would do something to get Kagome. The Inuyasha and Ayame lemon was very HOT!! I was so glad to see him with someone. The battle between Seth and Sesshoumaru was really good. Ohhs I cant believe Seth is dead. Ut-oh I have a feeling the dark hottie is fixing to be killed. Wonderful chapters once again!!
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From ANON - Megan Consoer on September 23, 2005
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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From ANON - Megan Consoer on September 22, 2005
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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