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Reviews for The Portal

By : Rinseternalsoul
  • From YoukaiObsessed on September 21, 2005
    Chapters 26-30~~Mmm the lemon and inu buffet, I would definitely make sure to stay and sample that over and over again. Ohhs the way he was talking to her when he was all demonic, that was HOT!! Wooowwees that made the blood flow to all the right places. Again the way you described the clothing was very detailed and wonderful. Ohh cliffy at the end there!!*swats it* Dayum Anubis is a hottie also. So many hotties... so little time~~Now I have to go read the other story with Anubis in it. Talk about sneaky, you have me hooked and wanting to go and read more about Anubis!! Wonderful job on this!!
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on September 18, 2005
    I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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  • From YoukaiObsessed on September 17, 2005
    Chapters 21-25~~ Hehe.. I just loved seeing Naraku so happy. The conniving hot bastard that he is!! I just heart the dark hottie and all his badness. The fight scene between Sesshoumaru and Seth was great! I felt bad for Inuyasha again, having to go explain what happened to her Mother. I was glad that Ayame comforted him though. Ohhs now what is Anubis going to do? I am sure the dark hottie Naraku will be up to something again soon. Wows what a mesmerizing story this is!!!

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  • From YoukaiObsessed on September 17, 2005
    Chapters 16-20 ~~Your attention to detail is amazing. From the clothes everyone is wearing to the way the rooms look. *Snort* On getting her drunk. What a deliciously HOT lemon that was!! *fans self*
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  • From ANON - Sunshine on September 16, 2005
    An absolutely excellent story! I wait patiently (barely) for the next chapter! I wonder if Kagome will get with Anubis? I cannot say I wouldn't find it intriguing. Thanks for the great tale!
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  • From ANON - DarkMystic on September 16, 2005
    ^_^ The story was really funny, and I was laughing my ass off when sesshoumaru and naraku took their shirts off, and kagome was drooling. *Smiles.* It was really funny. But damn that naraku, he just had to go and be a tatle tail, and tell Seth. Grr I could just smack him, that is if i wasnt afraid he would choke me with a poof of miasma. *Shakes her head.* Naraku is a meany. Anyways, I think you did very well on this story, and its been really good up to this point. I was wondering also if you could email me when you finish the next chapter, I thank you in advance if you do so.
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  • From ANON - Thornedrose on September 15, 2005
    Please update soon.
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  • From YoukaiObsessed on September 15, 2005
    Chapters 11-15~ Aww its sad what the rest of the party are going through. The little creature transforming was great. Hehehe on the dialog between Sesshoumaru and Naraku at the end of Ch 12 about her 'negotiation tactics'. Really good job on the 'tales' of this strange land. I love how Sesshoumaru always shuts her up with a kiss *snort*
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  • From YoukaiObsessed on September 15, 2005
    Chapters 6-10- Ohss- haha Sesshoumaru copped a feel on Kagome!! The little creature is so intriguing and cute. Ohhs pyramids? Interesting!! Haha on the she 'was thinking'. Mmm the kiss and Naraku's jealously. Nice cliffy ending in chapter 10. Thank the stars there is more chapters for me to read. You really have woven a detailed story here. It is obvious that you have put alot of thought and work into this.
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  • From YoukaiObsessed on September 15, 2005
    Chapters 1-5 ~ Ohhs first of all~ Wahoo another story from you that I get to put my hentaified little eyes and hands on. I love the build up in this. The dialog from Naraku “Let the games begin.” Rawr!! Ohhs the 2 hotties was having jealous thoughts about each other!! *Falls off chair--the part about a stray.. haha (Huggles Naraku)*
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 15, 2005
    great story wow its soo diffrent form other kag n sess fics i read being traped in an other world with nuraku omg poor them n just when kags n sess get together there's an other dog demon who wants kags too o.o plus his half bro who wants to kill sesshy thans wow wat a great story please oh please update soon i really enjoyed readiing it
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on September 14, 2005
    I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - chanda on September 12, 2005
    This story kicks ass! please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Snowfall on September 10, 2005
    I was reading your fic last night when the usual 4:00 am maintenance came and I couldn't get connected. Well, I finished today and that was one amazing and very hot lemon. I liked the way you teasingly led up to it. Phew! So hot. Interesting storyline. I'm curious as to what Inu will think. I hope this turns out to be most hentai indeed! Great writing by the way. Oh, I thought it was very funny in the beginning when Sess though "She must die" LOL

    Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on September 10, 2005
    I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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