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Reviews for Payback

By : Hrtofdrkns
  • From ANON - InuGrrrl on September 11, 2005
    I LOVE THIS ALREADY.

    I laughed my head off reading 'smack!' over & over.
    Just like the 'sits' in Hate...HILARIOUS! I don't like
    the beads either. I almost NEVER bring them into
    play in my fics & when i do it's not for the reasons
    that people are expecting.

    I find the sits demeaning to Inu. I despise the way
    she sits him on a whim or in front of nobodies like
    kouga. Grrr. To me, he's wild, free and beautiful
    in the feudal era. He shouldn't be sat like just any
    old dog.

    Don't get wrong. I love Inu/Kag pairings. That's all
    i write. But in my fics I refuse to let her humiliate
    him with unnecessary sits. You brought up very
    valid points about why you hate the rosary & i
    completely agree.

    I can't wait to read the next chap. It's about time
    they all get it. WOOT!
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  • From ANON - sirhcnotlih on September 11, 2005
    Now instead of killing and raping, Inuyasha is gonna spank everyone. Nice. Lol.
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  • From ANON - snowfall on September 11, 2005
    touche
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  • From ANON - Spud on September 11, 2005
    I so totally agree. Kagome may be my favorite female character, but she seriously needs some self-control when it comes to using the beads on InuYasha. The spanking was a good idea. Nice job.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 11, 2005
    I always felt bad for Inuyasha when Kagome sat him...AND he never ever rREALLY told her off. Also, he NEVER raised a clawed hand to her, and I think THAT shows how deep his feeling are for her...GOOD JOB!!! Please continue!!!
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  • From ANON - Blayze on September 11, 2005
    Ah, another anti-rosary, pro-Inuyasha fic. Marvellous. :) I find it interesting how some people have issues with this fic. Actually, it makes me laugh. 'Wah wah this is unfair!' and so forth brings a smile to my face. :)

    Rosary haters the world over, unite!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 11, 2005
    I believe the beads were necessary when the beginning of the series when Inuyasha and Kagome just met, but as the series went on, Kagome did use the beads on Inuyasha for highly trivial reasons. After a while, she used them whenenver he disagreed with her. I don't believe she meant to humiliate him, but she definately abused her power. Interesting story, though I'm glad you realized not all women are like that.
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  • From ANON - jacketslacker on September 11, 2005
    You. Are. My. Hero. Finally someone who agrees with me on those damn beads. Inuyasha is always made to look like an obedient lap dog. In my experience, they'd all be long dead in their sleep for sure. Keep writing the twisted fics to punish them and I'll keep reading. Let the pain continue for those who have wronged him.
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  • From ANON - Inufan on September 11, 2005
    Dude wtf is wrong with u? U'r a fuckin misogynist, translation = women hater. Kagome is a fictional character created by Rumiko Takahashi and it's pathetic to see a person obsess over humiliating and debasing a "fictional person." I'm sorry you got screwed over by the women in your life but you seriously have issues, especially those concerning defiling ppl. Oh by the way, Kagome doesn't "mess around or flirt" with Koga and Hojo. They are too blind to see that she's trying to let them down gently. you need to grow up and get help cuz your seriously fucked up.
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  • From ANON - Youkainu obsessed on September 11, 2005
    Good work as usual, keep it up! Can't wait for another story from you!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 11, 2005
    I think cutemiko didn't like hate and is still taking it out on you. Inuyasha had the beads off through most of Swords of an Honorable Ruler and I think showed he didn't need them. He also seemed quite upset with her for putting them back on him.
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  • From ANON - Doodler5000 on September 11, 2005
    I think those beads are the only thing I hate about the story. They might be helpful in certain situations (Movie 3, stopping Sounga from killing Rin), but they are used far too often in the series and ad nauseum in fanfics. Glad Inuyasha got a little Payback. Kagome is lucky he didn't do it publicly like she did to him.
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  • From ANON - Cutemiko on September 11, 2005
    okay first off, you really need to watch the anime or read the manga to know that kagome doesn't overuse the 'sit command.' alot of fanfic authors have her doing that but in the anime/manga she only uses it when he's completely out of line (like chasing shippo and trying to throttle him) or when he could inflict some danger onto himself and others and she doesn't want to see him hurt (like with koga or when he goes full youkai) or when he's just being a complete ass like breaking her bike (ep 160). second off, get a spell checker or a beta cause your grammar/spelling could use some work. and finally the whole 'humiliating thing' with the 'sit command' is not kagome abusing her power and she does treat inuyasha as an equal. she goes out of her way to help him and befriend him even when he is an ass at times. she's also a source of comfort (ep 30 something) where he says along the lines "when has it become so natural to have kagome by my side" which you would know if you paid attention to the anime/manga. but since you probably don't give a rat's ass and will continue to write 'fanfiction' i just hope it will be more along the lines of a 'story' than just tabloid shock value. that shit has already gotten old with "Hate"
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  • From StoryJunkie on September 11, 2005
    fuck, ya! (this weirdly enough turned me on) I'm a sick puppy, but thank god someone did this! I commend you from the bottom of my boots. putting her hands on her head was a nice touch
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