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Reviews for The Essence of Time

By : SayuriNakamura
  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on August 03, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - crystal on January 08, 2006
    UPDATE!!!! really like your fanfic!!!!
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  • From ANON - Animefreak242 on November 19, 2005
    Ch. 1 -Umm... You might want to proof read or get a beta. I don't know if you rushed through this, but there are a lot of mistakes (for one, a 'ningIn' is a carrot, a 'ningEn' is a human; second - a youkai is a demon (you typed 'youkai demon')). They (meaning Kagome and Hiei) were out of character.

    This seemed more like those cliche S+K fics where Kagome runs from Inuyasha and Kikyo (after she finds out he 'cheated' on her - though they're not dating...) and magically finds Sesshomaru, whom comforts her, in the forest. Needless to say, I'm surprised. Your other fics were really good. = ( What happened?
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  • From ANON - MysticalElf on October 27, 2005
    Please write more!!!!
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  • From ANON - CM on September 29, 2005
    YATTA! AWESOME UPDATE! keep up the good work ne?
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  • From ANON - Kougalover123 on September 27, 2005
    ooohhh i love how you have portrayed hiei in this. is this just a kag/hiei or is there a chance for a kag/hiei/kur? i can't wait to read more please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on September 18, 2005
    I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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  • From ryukotsusei on September 17, 2005
    Another good chapter, I really like what you are doing with this story. I hope that Hiei comes to remember exactly what it was about her that touched him so long ago. Though I have a feeling it will take a while for him to be able to show her that he does care since he's had five hundred years alone since she had first met him. I look forward to the next chapter. Update soon please.
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on September 14, 2005
    I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - karlina on September 13, 2005
    please write more you have a very interesting story going on.
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  • From ANON - Lady Kio-tye on September 13, 2005
    I am not a big fan of Hiei/Kagome fics because good ones are so hard to find. But I think this one will be a great read. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - MidnightTimberWolf on September 13, 2005
    That was so sweet.... I enjoyed reading it.... I hope you continue I would enjoy reading more...
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  • From ANON - Ox King on September 12, 2005
    Woohoo, that was an awesome first chapter. More, more (chants). Please. :-) Kagome-Hiei fics rule.
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  • From ANON - CM on September 12, 2005
    AHHH ITs ONly ONE CHAPTER! Graaarrr! Lol. I got so caught up in it I clicked where the next chapter button would go and it WASNT THERE! lol. Keep up the good work! BOOYA!
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  • From ANON - inuyashagirl5 on September 12, 2005
    I reallly like it! ^^
    Please update as soon as you can!

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