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Reviews for To Find What Cannot be Found

By : kagehoshi
  • From ANON - Kage Otome (not logged in) on November 22, 2005
    Chuu!!! Wahahahahaha...I can picture that image so clearly in my mind...I can just imagine the types of pranks the guys have pulled on each other. *grins* Anyway, love Part 1, going on to part 2 now.
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  • From ParalyticDawnfire on November 09, 2005
    I, for one, wouldn't mind the little bit of help you could offer. Even if it is only a small tidbit at the end of each chapter. I write my own fanfics, but have always been displeased with being incorrect about another culture, and the little help provided by you would be a small blessing. Just one other thing I could use to better my own skills.

    As for your fic, I'm loving it. Well, both of them, really. I've been reading Kagome's Paths, too. I like that you follow your own plot, instead of everyone else's. There's only so many times you can read: "Kagome caught Inuyasha with Kikyo (or however you spell her name)" before you want to gag the repeat author with a spoon.

    If there was an author voting place on AFF, I'd nominate you for it. Not only because you're a god author, but because you're not a copy-cat. Tanks for that, by the way. And update when you can.
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on November 08, 2005
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Can the pairing be Hiei and Kagome or Hiei, Kagome, and Kurama please?
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  • From ANON - bluemoon_175 on November 08, 2005
    Your story is really really good keep the updates comming. I think you should make it a Kagome/Hiei or a Kagome/Hiei/Kurama. But keep the chapters comming. Whoo-hoo
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  • From ANON - kougalover123 on November 08, 2005
    i am enjoying this story please update again soon.
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  • From ANON - BananaFlavoredEskimo on November 08, 2005
    I'm so happy.

    I had such a long and tiring day today and reading your story while curled up on my bed just put me at ease. That and made me incredibly giddy (and giddy is not a term that i associate myself with)

    While reading your authors notes, i read that English isn't your first or second language. Despite that, your english is far better than many others i know of and it is their first language. Anyways, i was just curious and wanting to know what your second language is.

    My first language isn't english either, but i feel that practice makes perfect and reading aloud helps me a lot. That and listening to music in English. I
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  • From ANON - swasdiva on November 08, 2005
    Just noticed that I *had* reviewed this before, but apparently I was smoking crack because my first review was stupid. Sometimes it's hard to convey exactly how much one loves a fic. So yeah, uh...I love it! Some more!
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  • From ANON - swasdiva on November 08, 2005
    Have I reviewed this masterpiece yet? No? Really, then, I better start, because this fic is abso-freakin'-lutely amazing. It's not just that you've managed the impossible task of making me root for each and every male character existent in YYH to end up with Kagome, nor is it the haunting way you've built up her power without disclosing the events that brought her such control. Really, what impresses me most is the device you've crafted as a conhesive intro to each chapter. Your short character analyses, coupled with transitions into the current scenes, is nothing short of writing brilliance. Creating such a fascinating and immediately recognizable structure is something left to authors of published books. It draws the reader in by sheer word flow alone, then swings us right in the middle of a plot bursting with epic promise.

    I, myself, am smitten with this fic.

    I don't know if you have a particular couple in mind, if you're going to let each male have a chance, or if you're going to end the story with no couples (revolving around a theme transcendant of romance *though I don't want to know how that's possible. :p*), and frankly, that's not what makes me read. It could be a true Shakespearian tragedy and kill everyone off for a greater ideal for all I care. I just want to read more of this fic because the way you write is spellbinding.

    In short, I can't wait to read more.

    P.S. WTF?? How many languages are you proficient in, because your cadence and expressions are perfect. One thing about living in America is no real exposure to other languages. Ah well, glad you can effectively write what I can effectively read! ^_^
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  • From BelleVixenBitch on November 07, 2005
    Wonderful story...I love it.

    I'd never have guessed English wasn't your first nor second language, you write wonderfully. And if you do share tidbits for correct cultural info, I know I would appreciate it.

    Thank you and please hurry with the next chapter!!
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  • From purp1ebabe on November 07, 2005
    yea i like that idea you could give kags more than two mates!!! that would be really interesting.... anyways keep up the good work and update!!!!
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  • From purp1ebabe on November 07, 2005
    hmm... this is gunna be a very interesting story with all the guys wanting kagome plz do update soon i can't wait to find out wut's gunna happen next
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  • From ANON - Sayuri-chan on November 07, 2005
    What a great chapter! Much tension with the Hiei and Kagomeness...:: heart!! :: Anyhoo, it's another awesome chapter and I love the way this story is going, as for information you may provide for us, I, for one, would appreciate any information you could give. I am currently studying with my Sensei Green at my college, and am learning more and more language wise every lesson. I did take a culture class over the summer, but I would still love to hear anything you'd like to share with us. ^^ Keep up the great work on the story though, I love it!!
    Sayuri-chan~
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  • From DarkRainFiend on November 07, 2005
    I am really digging this story. I love Genkai's attitude and can see where she and Kagome could become very close. I do hope that you update soon.
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  • From ANON - Ryukotsusei on November 07, 2005
    *snickers* i love this chapter, your characterisations are quite lovely. I cannot wait to see how everything plays out now that she has started training, I'm sure Genkai will push her to her limits yet Kag's will more than stand up to the challange. Wonderful chapter, update soon please.
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  • From ANON - ParalyticDawnfire on November 05, 2005
    I like this fic ^.^ It's cute. Honestly, though, it's been so long since I watched Yu Yu Hakusho that I had to use Google to figure out who some of the characters were... How embarrassing.

    Anyway, I like your grammar and spelling. And the plot, can't forget that. I love your plot. It's new and never been used before.

    So... are you ever going to update?
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