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Reviews for Alternate Realities

By : Diayma
  • From ANON - sma_orlando on December 26, 2014
    Please finish this story. It's seems like it's going to be good.
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  • From Sessholord on June 08, 2009
    Oh Please update soon!! This seems sooooooo cool!! I want to know what happens next! I think it is very cute, hehehhe Inuyasha's the one protecting Sesshoumaru-sama? CUTEEEE!!!! Lol.
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  • From Sessholord on April 25, 2009
    You really need to update on this story!! It is quite interested^^ I want to see how everything ends up! Please continue this.
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  • From on January 23, 2008
    dude, that is so fucking awesome!! i love that! you are writing more right? pretty fucking please!!!!
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  • From ANON - doe on August 08, 2006
    This sounds interesting! Continue?
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  • From ANON - Ru-shin on September 16, 2005
    It's intresting thus far...keep writing, it was a little short for me to tell you if I liked it or not. But it definately sparked my intrest! :D
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  • From ANON - Rawben on September 16, 2005
    i love the pairings! but having sess and inu switch places is messing w/ my mind! :P
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  • From ANON - Princess Sin on September 16, 2005
    yeah, that was great. it's so strange seeing sessy as the half breed and inu as the
    full demon. it's wild. it's crazy and i just love it. i would love to see more. there
    will be more. right.
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  • From ANON - Kaorustalker30 on September 15, 2005
    Wow. This... has the potential to be really good, but the idea itself will have you treading a very thin line - in other words, getting the point through is going to be quite a challenge without confusing anyone (that is to say if you give this story an intricate plot). Personally, I love the idea, although at first I have to admit I was a bit sketchy about it (I still am somewhat) but I really do like this beginning. I'm a tad bit concerned though, (which really means I'm actually a little confused) as to *how* exactly you are going to discern hanyou Sesshomaru from youkai Sesshomaru (and the same for the Inuyasha's). I mean, when they all meet are you going to say "Youkai Inuyasha glared at Hanyou Inuyasha" or are you going to do something entirely different? I'm a little concerned about this (even though it may seem like just a small complication) because saying Youkai Sesshomaru or Hanyou Inuyasha can get awfully repetitive - especially when doing dialogue or description. Most alternate (but existing at the same place and time) realities go through this issue, but its a bit easier in those cases to just say Future (whoever) and Past (whoever), even though that can get repetitive as well. Oh, and I'm wondering - does Youkai Inuyasha still look like Hanyou Inuyasha (but without the ears) or does he have the maroon stripes that their father has? And does Hanyou Sesshomaru look like Youkai Sesshomaru, but just without the stripes and with ears (and with the crescent moon)? IMO, the moon is unique to Sesshomaru (like a birthmark), so I figured whether he's Hanyou or Youkai, he would probably have it. You'll probably get to that in the next chapter (do I seem too anxious? Sorry) Ack, I DO NOT mean to discourage you, and I'm probably thinking way too ahead for my own good, but I was just wondering...

    Anyway, I do love the idea and would like to see where you go with this. I very rarely review, (because I write too damn much and always analyze both what I see and what I have yet to see) but this interested me so much I had to say something -.- I will be looking forward to your next chapter.

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  • From ANON - Dante on September 15, 2005
    Cool story, I like that addition of koga and the reversal of attitudes in the brothers.

    D_
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  • From ANON - Nanaka on September 15, 2005
    this is pretty good so far.... i admit i didn't think it would be, but it is..... i'm glad i decided to read it and i hope that you'll update it soon
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  • From ANON - The Seeker on September 15, 2005
    Interesting idea, I've never seen anything like it.
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  • From ANON - rin136 on September 15, 2005
    interesting. I can't wait untill they meet! LOL this would be funny. Till you update I'm going to imagin what will happen! (even though it might not happen) TTFN!
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