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Reviews for What Revenge Brings

By : Kage
  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on August 04, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Tushuri on July 23, 2006
    I can't wait to see what happens! I hope you update soon!
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  • From Bibsta on January 21, 2006
    wow. this story keeps on giving! i love it. Im glad Kagome is begining to open up to her feelings and dealing with her pain. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - jem89 on January 21, 2006
    OMG! This story is great! So complex and yet simple in a way. You are an absolute genius. Please update soon :)
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  • From ANON - Angelwings on January 17, 2006
    Juhu ^^ I`m so happy for this Chapter. Its awesome. I wonder what the others will do now that Kagome is up ^^ So please contine this Story and update soon ^^ I Love all your Storys and have all under favourites so please don´t disapoint me and contine with your Storys ^^

    Forever your Fan
    Angelwings
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  • From ANON - celticicegoddess on January 07, 2006
    wow........thats pretty much that comes to mind. WOW! i'm crying still. you are a great wuthor. i hope you update and continue to write whether it is this story or others. you have a great talent for drawing people in and helping to create the scene in our minds. you story rocks. peace
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  • From ANON - Angelwings on December 30, 2005
    Juhu Great Chapter ! I Hope for a Sesshomaru/Kurama/Hiei/ Youko Pairing but I Love the other Boys too ^^ ( They are all so sexy >.< drooooooll ^^)
    Please update soon ^^

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  • From ANON - Shanta on December 27, 2005
    Love it!!!!!!Please update soon. email me.
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  • From ANON - Animefreak242 on December 07, 2005
    I like this story. I wonder who the 'violet-eyed' guy was who took 'Kun' away. There wasn't even a struggle. He just got up and you switched scenes... And doesn't Kagome's family know about Kun? Or is he a complete secret?

    I have a few complaints: You should really proof read it when you have the time. There are a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes throughout the chapters. You also don't put the characters names in most paragraphs. The only ones you've constantly named are Kagome, Hiten and Bankotsu. You always write 'he' or 'she' instead. You've done this throughout the enitre story and it's really annoying. I actually thought someone would point this out by now... It's difficult (until the end of the paragraph and/or dialogue) for readers to know who you're talking about (Ex.: "But at least he had one redeeming trait.

    He was almost disturbingly determined to succeed in whatever he put his mind too. No matter how many times he’s failed. For example: beating Sesshoumaru in a fight. Doubtful but he was stubbornly, pig headed and determined to one day better his brother. Sibling rivalry--how beautiful."). The only way the reader knows who you're talking about is because you mention Sesshomaru and beating 'his brother'. You also mention the IQ bit, but unless the reader is really paying attention and remember that particular scene they won't know who you're speaking of. So please refrain from using 'he' and 'she' excessively.

    In any case, I think I'm done. The plot, though a little far-fetched (which is not always a bad thing), is well thought out. Pleaase update soon.

    ~Animefreak242
    aka
    Kawaii Girl
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  • From ANON - azurephoenix on November 25, 2005
    Wow...that was amazing...This is the first time I read your story and I could not stop. Please update soon
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  • From ANON - Kura-kun\'s-lovr on November 24, 2005
    Wow, girl! I can honestly say that was a great fight scene! It was so orginal and I loved Kagome's true form. Thanks for updating also, I know this was probably a bitch to add to. But nevertheless it was wonderful. Talk to you soon, darlin'.

    Ja ne

    Kura-kun's-lovr
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  • From ANON - Ryukotsusei on November 24, 2005
    Love the new chapter. I'm almost tempted to draw a picture of Kagome in her true form like you described. Maybe If I get the time lol Glad to see that she won, I look forward to the next chapter. Update soon please
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  • From Bibsta on November 03, 2005
    Update sooon! I want to see Shessy and Kags have a great round of steamy sex! And i really want to see this battle! I know Kags can do it but im assuming there shall be a twist! 0_0 100000000000000/10
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  • From ANON - RedDeath on October 25, 2005
    Yes!!!! Love it. Can't wait to see what the battle is like. Up date soon!!!!
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on October 17, 2005
    I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters? Can the pairing be Sess and Kagome or Sess, Kagome, and Inuyasha please?
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