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Reviews for What Revenge Brings

By : Kage
  • From lara5170 on August 18, 2015
    I can't believe I only just found this story but I'm glad I did. I really enjoyed this story, it's very unique, well written, interesting and suspenseful. I really hope this story isn't an abandoned one. I didn't check to see how old it is or when it was last updated and I'm almost afraid to look, afraid to find that it is long abandoned. I just hope it isn't and that I'll be able to read more.
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  • From Maru on August 18, 2007
    Update soon please!
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  • From ANON - purp1ebabe on September 16, 2006
    very interesitng story but when is the next chap coming up?
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  • From ANON - Katie on September 12, 2006
    lol! I don't mind. Maybe in my mind it's becauase I can argue that Kagome and Hiten aren't really real and they aren't really real siblings in the series, but I didn't mind. Their kiss was hot. I want more of that please. :P
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  • From ANON - Katie on September 12, 2006
    Why can't Kagome have children? That's not good. That makes me sad. :( That sucks. :( I want Kagome to have little baby angels with Sephiroth.
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  • From ANON - Katie on September 12, 2006
    Yay for Kagome! She had twice the amount of meat... I mean, SUBMISSIVES her father and brothers have! :D
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  • From ANON - Katie on September 12, 2006
    Don't hate me but I found another one of your errors. (Please don't hate me!)

    "If you can defend both yourself and a submissive than you pass the physical part."
    It should be "... submissive, THEN you pass..."

    and "rather then" should be "rather THAN"

    You keep switching then for than and vice versa. ^.^ Ah, and it's "could HAVE", NEVER EVER "could OF". "Could OF" will be forever and ever grammatically wrong.

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  • From ANON - Katie on September 12, 2006
    I vote to add Riku, Yusuke and teenage Koenma to the harem. I don't really care for Touya, Karasu, Kougaiji, Sirus and Conri, sorry. ^^;;

    Touya is from YYH yes? Where are the others from? Are they originals? If they are, I prefer the canon chars better. If they're canon characters too then I can't picture them in my mind so I have a hard time relating to them that's why I don't really like them that much for them to be in the harem. :D
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  • From ANON - Katie on September 12, 2006
    Monkeys attacking leopards... I thought it was really cool! XD But I busted out laughing when I remembered that Kim Possible Movie where naked mole rats fought against monkeys. lolol!

    I like this chapter because of Sephiroth. :)
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  • From ANON - Katie on September 12, 2006
    You also mistake your for you're.

    You're = You are
    You're wrong
    You're going to be sorry

    Your = possessive (yours)
    Your mistake
    Your family

    But I still like it... even if it has a lot of characters I don't know. Are they originals? I keep looking for the Reikai Tantei and Sephiroth instead. I like it better when the story centers around Ban, Hiten and Kagome too. :)
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  • From ANON - Katie on September 12, 2006
    You almost always mistake your plurals for your apostrophes.

    's = possessive
    Hell's Angel = Angel of Hell
    Hell's Angels = Angels of Hell

    +s = plural
    Hells Angel = Angel of Hells
    Hells Angels = Angels of Hells
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  • From ANON - Katie on September 12, 2006
    Kagome + Sephiroth = very gorgeous baby angels
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  • From ANON - Katie on September 12, 2006
    Raped Kagome makes me sad... and mad. Gang-raped Kagome makes me want to kill someone.
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  • From ANON - Katie on September 12, 2006
    Riku and Kagome together made my brain explode from squeegasm. Kagome straddling Sephiroth = me dead.
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  • From ANON - Katie on September 12, 2006
    That's quite an AWESOME star-studded cast you have there. *picks up jaw from floor* And there's more to come? I haven't seen any KH or FF characters yet. I'm afraid I would've died from fangirling if you introduced them all in one chapter. Bankotsu and Hiten's touchy-feely attitude with Kagome made me squee with joy, too.
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