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Reviews for .:: Full Moon ::.

By : ServantRider
  • From ANON - animegirl007 on September 24, 2005
    Good chapter.....I'm glad you glad the way it was formatted before.....It looks a whole lot better......keep the good work up!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - DragonsLore on September 24, 2005
    NO, NO, NO, NO, NO! That is not how it is suppose to work! You are suppose to keep writing and not leave us squirming in our seats- understand? Great chapter, I'm really likeng this story please update soon. (I didn't catch any errors)
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  • From ANON - Mmoirai on September 24, 2005
    I'm confused...but I'm also interested. I will just have to go back and read it again!
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  • From ANON - animegirl007 on September 23, 2005
    I like your story so far.....can't wait to read more....
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  • From ANON - DragonsLore on September 22, 2005
    This last chapter was better in length than the others, you write well. The only thing that I'm finding distracting is you keep popping up with people's POVs, like you have a list in front of you of each character that you want to speak, each person has had a POV now and I think it would be easier just to stick with either 1st or 3rd person rather than jumping back and forth. (Just a hint for your next story) But the story itself is great, I hope you continue and I will be looking for your next posting.
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  • From ANON - Mmoirai on September 21, 2005
    I'm not a fan of the short chapters at all. It took me five minutes to read your first three chapters. But, other than that, I think it has potential. Break up your paragraphs a little more, but keep up the writing! No, seriously...keep it up!
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  • From ANON - The Dark Child [Am a girl on September 20, 2005
    Not bad can you write more
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  • From oxcab on September 20, 2005
    I like it^_^ update soon
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  • From ANON - The Dark Child [Am a girl on September 19, 2005
    Loved where you going but sad Pleaaaaaassssssse hurry

    Part Angle [ another name of mine]
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