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Reviews for Learn to be Lonely

By : Torne
  • From kookookitty on January 23, 2007
    this was beautiful, many people are suckers for the waff and the happy ending and have to have it spelled out for them. in my own mind this is a frozen moment in time and the outcome can take any direction... all i have to do is imagine it.

    thank you,
    ginny
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  • From ANON - Crimson on February 01, 2006
    Wow. I didn't think crappy authors could get so conceited. "It is beautiful in its simplicity and perfection should not be tampered with." What the hell? Here's a note: it wasn't really touching. Or simple. Or perfect. It seemed really forced, like you were trying too hard to make it artistic. And your grammar and punctuation isn't very good. Overall, it was pretty mediocre.
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  • From xxPuppyEarsxx on January 22, 2006
    oh wow..!!
    i read your author's note and you're quite right.
    the simplicity of the fic shouldn't be tampered with
    it is beautiful in its own way
    and even though i would love it if you continued
    i can see why you would choose not too.
    i look forward to reading more of your stories
    thanks for leaving me feeling warm and fuzzy
    even if inuyasha cant tell kagome how he feels when shes awake
    he can always loosen up a bit as she sleeps.
    this was absolutely magical!
    - rin.dee
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  • From ANON - Karina on October 12, 2005
    I think this is one of the most beautiful pieces i have read in long while, I look forward to reading your oher fanfics :)
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  • From sodapop0006 on October 10, 2005
    This story was very sweet and sad... Although it would be nice to see the story continue on, I do feel that you were right not to continue. It would neglet the original theme and take away the meaning. Well done, however. :)
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  • From Torne on October 06, 2005
    Thank you to all of you who reviewed!!!!! It means so much to me, and it makes me want to write even more, oh and Rhiannon, I'm sorry I made you cry!! ~hands her tissues~

    ~Love Always Torne
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  • From ANON - Rhiannon on October 04, 2005
    This one made me cry. seriously, it was beautiful...maybe it was just the mood i was in or something but i couldnt help myself. Itd be awesome if you kept writing it but i like the way its short and sweet and the song goes well with it too...i dont think itd be as powerful if it was longer. anyways, awesome job :)
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  • From ANON - miz_witch on October 02, 2005
    Thank you so much for the props! *blushes* I'm glad that I could positively inspire you, even if it meant leaving your work alone. One should not tamper with perfection.

    Thanks again!
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  • From ANON - Ty on September 30, 2005
    Aww, what a sweet story. nice job :) :)
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  • From ANON - Destiny Froste on September 29, 2005
    Thats so sad, but very beautiful.
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  • From ANON - chanda on September 28, 2005
    I am not upset that your not going to continue this, I agree it was absolutly beautiful, I also know the song and it fit perfectly with this story, good choice....

    chanda
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  • From ANON - miz_witch on September 24, 2005
    I loved it and I thought it was perfect as a one-shot. You'll probably get a lot of people telling you to build on it, but I really would encourage you not to. Everything that needed to be said was said and it was beautiful in its simplicity.
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  • From ANON - If you stop my name will be your assaian on September 22, 2005
    No don't stop now, you have me in a trance please write more.
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  • From ANON - shippo on September 22, 2005
    OMG!!!!! please continue this story!! it's soooo awsome!!! i really like it. it would be an interesting story

    thanks
    shippo-chan
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  • From ANON - inugirl on September 22, 2005
    I love it! I love it! Keep going :), would love for him to learn how to not be alone :)
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