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Reviews for Lost Time and Bloody Betrayals

By : kimisan
  • From ANON - Katzztar on September 25, 2005
    Oaky, I've waited until ch.10 to review for a good reason.
    I wanted to see how you portrayed Yomi's personality 1000 years ago. At first I feared that it would follow other fics that have him act as he does in the current era.
    But By ch.10 I see you have him act as the show said he acted back then, He's head strong and brash. Those other fics also have Yomi blind and have three ears back tehn, he didn't.

    I'm glad to see that you have Yomi in character as he was 1000 yrs ago.
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  • From ANON - Lady Banshee 999 on September 25, 2005
    "Well, you could have atleast left some money." ~ HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!! OMGS! Love it. Really great chapter. Can't wait to read more. *walks off laughing muttering* "Flip a god damn coin" HAHAHAHA!!!
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  • From ANON - Kage Otome on September 25, 2005
    Grr...What kind of jackass leaves a girl alone after sex?! Well, with the exception of Prostitutes and stuff...Err...Yes, well, I hope she gives them a lashing of some type...Keep up the good work!
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  • From purp1ebabe on September 25, 2005
    woah they both just left her alone in the room after fucking her.... wow i feel bad for kags she thinks that they are just using her again and that they dont care bout her
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  • From ryukotsusei on September 25, 2005
    Men Hmmphh... Figures they'd both leave her there like that. Good lemon, she's lucky in one way but damn.. Her mates could use a bit of work in the compassion dept. *Thwaps both of them* Update soon please.
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  • From ANON - Kage Otome on September 25, 2005
    *Grins* i love it, Naraku is positively evil and the two are both wanting her and Kagome thinks none of them care/love her, I love this!
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  • From ANON - me on September 25, 2005
    in the 1st chapter kagome was verry well in character except for the cussing we all know sweet lil kagome doesnt cuss
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  • From ryukotsusei on September 25, 2005
    Man I don't know how she does it. I think I would have slit my throat or something lol Well, it should be interesting to see how this plays out and if jealousy will be a fact on anyones part other than Narakus. Good chapter!
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  • From ANON - Kage Otome on September 25, 2005
    Ooh...And the plot thickens.
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  • From ANON - Ralina on September 25, 2005
    Gah I try and draw an arrow and the computer reads it as html! Anyway in parentheses was (Understatement of the year) with an arrow pointing to the previous sentence. As always it's a pleasure to read your stories, and I also wrote that I'm looking forward to the next installment. Fabulous job!

    Ralina
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  • From purp1ebabe on September 25, 2005
    ooo she got marked!!! that really suks poor kags now naraku is her mate... plz update soon
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  • From ANON - Ralina on September 25, 2005
    Where do you come up with these ideas? That is pure genius! The only solutions I could think of are the obvious kill Naraku, have someone else mark her, or *My personal favorite* kill her off and have Sesshoumaru bring her back to life with the Tensaiga (I wonder why no one else thinks that - boom she'd be alive again good as new - no marks or anything). Then again with her bonded with the jewel that might be risky. Can she tell where Naraku is at all times now? One has to wonder how far Naraku thought ahead on this, maybe there are some dare I suggest it 'good' side effects? **Shudder** Being mated to that creep would give me the willies. (
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  • From ryukotsusei on September 24, 2005
    Poor Naive Kagome, she really has no idea does she? She's going to be pissed when someone explains it to her lol Good chapter
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  • From ANON - Lady Banshee 999 on September 24, 2005
    YES! This story so rocks. I love Kagome with a backbone driving the men nuts! Your other stories have her wallowing in suffering while the guys take on the, I'm above you, you suffer, attitude. LOL, I hope it's the other way round with this story. Don't get me wrong. I LOVE your stories, but I am hoping that the attitude is on the other foot this time. Can't wait to read more. LOL, I got a hoot out of her reaction to seeing them again. TTFN!
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  • From ANON - Ralina on September 24, 2005
    Kagome rocks!! Kicking Yomi's butt, and yelling at Kurama... it's time for the males to sweat and feel the angst! I absolutely love how you characterized her, she feels so alive in this story. Wonderful job as always, waiting to read more.

    Ralina
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