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Reviews for Sesshomaru is punished.

By : Hrtofdrkns
  • From ANON - kasey on September 24, 2005
    i LOVED it, you must continue.
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  • From ANON - Peri Yiesley on September 24, 2005
    Hi! I was the person asking for this spanking in "A Paddle for Shippou"! To be honest, I love the idea but the execution is kind of lacking, like you didn't really want to write it. I don't see why you said Sess has to be OOC for his father to spank him, but Spud is right that it'd take much more to break his spirit, so unpleasant that Izayoi couldn't watch. He'd have to be held down, and he'd still give his father some good scratches and bites. The spanking action, which is why everyone read this, is non-erotic and way too vague. I couldn't picture it in my head.

    I hope this doesn't come across the wrong way since you've been under a lot of criticism lately, but this story needs some...tinkering? Get inside Sesshoumaru's head more and develop his emotions. How does this event affect his view of himself and his relationship with his father? Does Inutaishou expect this to solve anything? Does he blame himself, and why didn't he discipline him earlier? Since Sess is really "a small child", doesn't Izayoi feel a little bit obligated to replace his mother? This could be a rather interesting story if you'd put some more thought into it.

    Inutaishou plays favorites. He just brushes off the pain he caused Sesshoumaru by marrying Izayoi. No good father would stop loving his son, especially since he's responsible for how him. Yasha held Shippou and told him he still loved him, and Inutaishou should do the same. Instead of threatening to disherit him, he'd just grab him and throw him over his knee and promise more pain if he's disobeyed again. And then he says his entire life revolves around Izayoi and Yasha: does Sess not count or something? I get the feeling you don't like Sesshoumaru, but you're making me feel sorry for him!

    Sess could've killed Yasha after his father died when he's human, but something, most likely honor, stopped him. Anyway, Inutaishou raised Sess from birth so he would know what he's capable of and wouldn't give him the oppurtunity. And...uh, why is Sess acting like he's 5 instead of 15? He's a callous, arrogent, ruthless bastard in canon, but he's still a tough-as-nails badass. Sess would have fought in battles at a very early age and had combat training all his life, so he'd easily shrug off anything short of torture. Remember, how medival parents disciplined their children would be considered child abuse today. Sess would have been beaten half to death (with a whip) and locked in a dungeon.






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  • From ANON - sirchnotlih on September 24, 2005
    Got your E-mail and sent it. Reply here ASAP.
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  • From ANON - sirchnotlih on September 24, 2005
    Hehehe. Sesshy finally got punished! Hey wait, wasn't I supposed to beta read it?
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  • From Kougaschild on September 24, 2005
    now that was a good story but it made me cry.I mean when you spank someone's Favorite(In my case second favorite)you got to cry at least once. Ppl who say that he should have not cried need to take the experence and get spanked themselves cuz fyi ppl it hurts and when it gets done over and over again you will cry.so when yall say he should not of showed the emotion think back to your experence with your very own paddle.
    (This is my point of view and probably the author's)
    K_L_C

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  • From ANON - Spud on September 24, 2005
    Very nice. But... I don't think that Sesshomaru would actually let himself cry, no matter how young he was or how much it hurt. It just doesn't work. I mean, he's just naturally so passive. It's like turning a tiger into a lamb, and that's very well impossible, wether you tame it or not. It will always snarl at you if you pull its tail. So a more fitting reaction would be if he tried to claw at his father or the paddle, or some other violent action. I hope this doesn't sound like a flame. You already know how I feel about your fics, and this one is no exception. Ta.
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  • From ANON - InuGrrrl on September 24, 2005
    Ouch. That one had to hurt...heh.
    I live for these...lol.
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  • From ANON - Youkainu obsessed on September 23, 2005
    But he still turned out evil....heheheh that was great work!! Sess haters are gonig to hate you. Can't wait for your next story!! I'm starting to see a pattern....
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  • From ANON - Nightclaw42 on September 23, 2005
    Bwahahahahahaha. 'Bout time someone diciplined that brat. Don't get me wrong, I love Sess but he was in need of a good spanking. Who's next hmmmmm? How about Miroku? Inuyasha can drive home so to speak a lesson on how to treat women. *smirk* Keep up the good work.ja ne
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