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By : Houseki

From ajj77sunhawk on February 28, 2010
AFf readers are bad on reviewing, sigh! Anyway I was bored so I went and just looked at old fics came across yur and I wanted to say good story, plot and writing style. Sorry you didnt finish the meeting story- cheers
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From LadySesshoumaru on September 29, 2008
i really like this fic..... i find it endearing and sweet.....inu and kouga together are so cute,sexy, and wickedky hot especially since inu is seme......please update soon.

much respcet

Sexy Sesshy
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From ANON - Maytia_TheSorecess on September 28, 2008
i have been waiting to see this update forever i cant wait to see what they to do that has kouga-kun so nervous and what that other wolf tribe tries to do to get inu-chan to leave kouga-kun alone.......PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!
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From ANON - ren on September 28, 2008
hehehe yess.. happy birthday Home! i am glad you got another chappy out for it...very good, Miss Houseki.
it is cute that Kouga cant undress himself *laughs*
still able to worry about the clothes when all that is going on... damn good control Kouga.
yuummmyyyy nekkidness... i love the bathing scene.
"Kouga was panting slightly from the pleasure he was receiving" i love how feral and hot that sounds.
"Inuyasha grinned triumphantly at his lover�s string of swear words directed at him, all with love, of course." hahaha of course
effin hot lemon dude. like srsly
and that a hungry stomach had made itself known..that is funny to me.
good chapter. and you know i am going to say "motto motto!"
so..
MOTTO MOTTO ONEGAI!
hehehe
i cant wait to see what happens next! woot woot wooooooot!
hurry and write more yo
*chu*
ren
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From ladygizarme on September 28, 2008
yay, so glad you wrote another chappie so soon! (gotta get it in for the anniversary/birthday ne?!!) and that was a hot interlude, i must say (as much of a tease as it also was, to hint at what happened "next" in the past, but not tell us yet!!) and, dude, their interaction is so cute! haha, inuyasha luffs undressing kouga so much that kou forgets how to do it properly himself? *gigglesmirk* and them washing each other was very sweet/sensual. me like! the smut was hot, and i gotta say...i love rimming in lemons, but i couldn't help but giggle at: Inuyasha dipped his head in to take a sniff of home. that made me giggle, dude, cuz it was SO DOGLIKE lol *loves inuyasha's doglike tendencies*

kyaaa, what're they doing in a couple weeks??!! *has suspicions but doesn't wanna say unless you throw in a twist that makes me HORRIBLY WRONG* lol....

nyaaaa, write more now! pleeeaaaasseeeee!! i wanna know what happened/happens next!!

&hearts
~ lg
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From ladygizarme on September 26, 2008
yayayay, FINALLY a new chapter! how CONVENIENT that you posted this after that lil discussion of ridiculous xovers and how i needed GOOD inuyasha yaoi..lmao..

so, of course i read the chapter first to beta..but i really wanted to reread the whole fic before reviewing cuz..er..i sorta forgot what the last thing that happened was -_-; heh..SO!! in the last chapter, you had left us with a rather ominous cliffy! i see how, after rereading it, that you had done the last scene in kouga's perspective alone, and then this new chapter is all about what inuyasha was doing while kouga's was doing his own thing in the last one. WOW dude..gahh, i just love the chemistry in this fic. it *almost* makes me wanna read more inu/kou fics but...i just don't think they would appeal to me like yours does!

ok so, before all the drama with the birds started: i LOVED inuyasha saying 'aye', it was totally cute. i love how that sounds in his voice in my head. the image of inuyasha spraying that stuff and running away fast CRACKED me up, hehehe. LOVE the play on words with shippou smelling something "fowl" xp then *gasp* inuyasha saves his man from the bird demons! i love kouga's clan immediately letting inu handle the sitch lol. and, once again, DOCTOR INUYASHA TO THE RESCUE!! haha, too cute. carrying kouga away bridal style--very sweet. and shippou's threat to the northern tribe-- &hearts!! also, "his inuyasha was growing up" heeheeee, too cute! i love how mature shippou always seems/talks in his monologues (even in the show) compared to how childish inu sometimes is lol

and now you leave us with a rather ominous end: the northern tribe out for shippou and inu's demise. hmm, somehow, i don't think they will succeed xp BUT I WANNA SEE HOW THINGS PLAY OUT, LIKE *NOW* SO WRITE MORE SOON!! and by soon i don't mean within the next year >.>

XD
&hearts u!!

~ lg
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From loche606 on September 25, 2008
oh my tezuka! it is so awesome to see this updated! i squee'd with glee dude.. like srsly!
hehehe a tall shippou cracks me up for some reason. i bet he is totally cute.
�Aye. Scope out the land, ya know?� that is totally cute. Inu sayin Aye... hehehe cute cute
�It just doesn�t add up. Sure, the demons have become a bit more peaceful lately, but this is just downright strange. There�s barely anyone around,� THIS is SUCH an Inuyasha line! wow.. i can hear him saying it.
"I have to spray and run otherwise it gets on me " hahahahahahaha!! i can totally see this too..
like... inu gettin some on him and FREAKING out.
mmm actiony goodness.. i love chapters like this..
Ahhh the Wind Scar.. that overused, but still awesome move.
awww he is so gentle with Kouga's wounds! cuteness
ohhh my Shippou and his threats!
"His Inuyasha was truly growing up." that is effin cute! (i wonder how many times i can write cute in one review!

Yeah.. good luck Northern Tribe! whatev... Inu will Adamant Barrage you and THEN you will be in trouble!
awesome chapter. i am glad you got your muse back *chains muse to your ankle*
cant wait to see what you come up with next!
love ya
renaru

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From ANON - KikyouKagomeKougaInuYashaItachiNejiNarutoSasukeSakuraTemariAngel on January 07, 2007
That was awesome! And I agree, there really aren't enough InuKou Fics. I love this fic! Believe it!
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From ANON - JewlzGem on October 18, 2006
Awesome. A cliff hanger too. Sheesh I cant wait for the next chapter. This is one of those stories that keeps you on the edge of your seat, just waiting to find out what happens next. Great work and I am very interested to find out how you pull this all togther.
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From ANON - cm34 on September 27, 2006
good
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From ANON - cm34 on September 27, 2006
a mess double time
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From ANON - ladygizarme on May 15, 2006
waaaaahhh how could you end it there??!! *sob* ahhh but i'm so PROUD of you!! you wrote a MY SIZE chappie :p it was a great one too, full of sexual tension and sweet longing... ahh the guys trying to deny their feelings is cute.. i really loved the part where shippou drew inu and kouga together.. and i love the attention to shippou's artistic ability too ^___^

inuyasha and the star part gave me a beautiful imagery.. i kinda had goosebumps thinking about it... and kouga and the blanket.. lol! so kawaii... hmm does the northern tribe suspect anything between kouga and inu yet?? will they? i suppose that'll be addressed in the future though, since they'll hafta get kouga outta that marriage :p

oh yeah, and i really liked this line:
"draping his arm over the Inuyasha he wished was there"

now kouga's unconscious again! i wanna know what happens next!! pleeeeaaassseeee don't leave us all in suspense too long *sobsobsob*

and now that i've read some inuyasha again, i wanna write on unexpected ally ... HA!! you know how it goes :p

love ya woman, hurry up and write! *cracks whip*

~ Crys
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From ANON - WeIrDpErSoN on May 10, 2006
*glares at last review* For some fucked up reason, my last review didn't show up, so here I am again! Now, I just love your story, and your right, there aren't enough Inuyasha/Kouga stories out there. I'm so glad that you decided to write this. It's really interesting and entertaining. I can't wait for more, so keep up the amazing work. ^.^
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From ANON - Rawben on May 10, 2006
omg! that was adorable!!! i love this story!! it's very well written too!! nice job!! i hope you continue!
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From ANON - ladygizarme on October 25, 2005
yo girl, thought i'd give it a lil readthrough again now that it's NOT 6am... *cough* anyway, i like that you're goin back to tell the story of how they got together, and it seems to me shippou's already suspicious of inuyasha's intentions for going to see kouga... does inuyasha know his intentions yet? lol! but now you've ended on somewhat of a cliffie! arrggggh and i KNOW how busy you are so... graaah you're such a tease :p *uses goddess powers to make 40 hr days so you have time to write* heehee (say that laugh in the eiji way.. can't you just *see* the half-cocked cheeky grin??)

*huggles* good job, i'll try to be patient for more...

~crys
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