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Reviews for JOURNEY

By : SesshysJadedSamuri
  • From ANON - skanme on January 21, 2006
    mamakei
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  • From ANON - STINKUGLY on January 21, 2006
    Yhaoo, you go girl..........elriconeechan. What the fuck have you got to be squealing about. I gave her some very constructive information and she..........a least is mature enough to know it. After I showed her what I was talking about, she hasn't written me back and it's been 3 days now. I think she is considering what I had to say. But I will say that had I known this was a public notice board, I would have come off a lot differently. But as for you, you don't know shit about what has gone on here and as far as I am conserned, YOU can stick your YAHOO up your YZOO.

    STINKUGLY
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  • From ANON - wawe on January 21, 2006
    xdrty
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  • From ANON - elriconeechan on January 19, 2006
    hah!you go girl..kick his/her/it's ass!!
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  • From SesshysJadedSamuri on January 16, 2006
    This is a response to STINKUGLY. First, I do not appreciate the content of your review. This is a fanfiction, and my story, and if you don't like it, NO ONE IS MAKING YOU READ IT! Lots of other people on several different sites enjoyed it and have told me as much. If you have any suggestions as to how to make it better, feel free to let me know, but just coming on here and saying that is sucks is not only rude and inconsiderate...it makes you look like a total jerk. Don't get me wrong, I do appreciate constructive criticism, but what you wrote was not constructive in any sense of the word.

    Second, a word of advice....when you post a review like yours on a public domain where other people can read it, YOU MIGHT WANT TO DOUBLE CHECK YOUR SPELLING. You misspelled AIN'T, and couldn't even spell your own name the same way at the beginning and the end of your review. So in the end, you not only came off looking like a jerk, you also made yourself look somewhat foolish.

    This was the very first fanfiction that I ever wrote, and for a newbie, I don't think it was too bad. I understand that there are bound to be flaws. Even the most experienced writers mess up every now and then. I am also certain that there are people out there who are not going to like what I wrote. That is their perrogative. No one is forced to read this.

    Finally...this is fanfiction, and it is my story. I wrote it the way that I wanted it. The whole point of a story is to tell it...that's what authors do - they tell a story...if you want to be shown a story - go to a theatre or turn on the television - that's what movies are for...they show you a story.

    arigato,

    sesshys_jaded_samuri

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  • From ANON - STINKUGLY on January 15, 2006
    Man this is so full of shit it anin't even funny. And the story is no good either. You are telling me a story instead of showing me one. SHOW, me what you are talking about. DON'T tell me what you're talking about.

    STINKGULY
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  • From ANON - Bridget on January 11, 2006
    OMG I freaking love this story. I read it on fanfiction.net. But seen that it was uncut on this website. This is one onf the 2 best stories I've ever read. I read alot of stories on a bunch of sites. But so far only this one and another story by someone else has actually captured my interest. I'm so sad that it is over now....none left to read. But thanks for this wonderful story. And the whole time I was reading it I could so picture Kagome as a beautiful Indian girl.
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  • From ANON - inu_lover1978 on November 29, 2005
    THAT WAS A GREAT STORY. I FEEL IT WAS MOST ORIGINAL. I CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE OF YOUR STORIES DUE TO THE IMPACT AND ORIGNALITY.
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  • From ANON - kari konoko on November 26, 2005
    hi:


    this tory is awesome, and it actually has a PLOT!!!!! unlike most stories on this site, this is reallly good so i hope u continue to write, sess kag stories so i can read them(lol, i only read sess kag). Good job!!



    kari konoko
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  • From ANON - chubbers on November 26, 2005
    OH MY FRIGGEN GOD! that story was awsome! after reading this im still shook up over what happened to Sango! *bows* yyou are truly a master! the only part i didnt like was what happened to sango...... not because it was bad writing, but because it was soooooo depressing! "snaps to you!" for such great work!
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  • From ANON - Kokuei on November 23, 2005
    Ahhh....this was so good. I haven't read it in awhile I've been so busy. It was really good I enjoyed it very much.
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  • From ANON - Menna on October 29, 2005
    Ok...so i'm over the death...but still pissed off. Good job! This story ruled! (using 'ed' like when you used to write this.)
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  • From ANON - Menna (Verry Pissed off) on October 29, 2005
    YOU KILLED SANGO!!!!! HOW DARE YOU!

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  • From ANON - Tara on October 27, 2005
    Hi S J S,
    I really REALLY enjoyed this story! I particularly liked the way you developed the characters and although I was sad about Sango I really liked what you did with Kikyo.

    Of course from a totally selfish point of view I also Really appreciated how often you updated. I'm looking forward to reading the rest of Loneliness and Absolution...

    Tara
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  • From ANON - Linda on October 25, 2005
    Hi!
    I tried once more to write you at yout e-mail adress but I recieved an e-mail, that my mail was not delivered. How I promised in my other review to Loliness, I started reading Journey and I will tell that I am enjoying it. It is something unexpected. I mean the place where it happend and Sess is OOC. Classical, but I am well entertaind. It is 4 in the morning and I am still reading. I saw the two knew chapters and know, that the story is at end. I can´t tell much because I am only on chapter ten, but what I read until now you are doing pretty good. I love it how is Sess acting in this fic (well I have to admit I like him more in Loliness, but i am suspected this is because it is full new to me and I am not used to it). But I am becomming used and think it was a good idea of you to place them to Amerika and what I desire is, that you mention the problems from Japan people living in Amerika in the Second world war. This is something what gives the oportunity to think what have happend.
    Until now the story is amazing and I recognized the character of Miroku and Naruku without to know their names. Zou did a verry good job in describing of them both. So I downloded know the two last chapters and will tell you thanks for the early updates. I really appraciate it.
    Please if you have time write me back at my e-mail adress. I tried to write you a mail, but it failed for the second time. If it will not be possible to use this mail, you can try to mail to my university accaunt : a0201265@unet.univie.ac.at
    I am so glad that zou are writing and didn´t stop. I enjoy your stories zou see. And I don´t think I will go to sleep this night. Well, meybe i can take a nap before lunvh. I am now to deep in your story. This knightreading is really going to kill me with the time. I have tio be crefull not to be caught when some of my perents is going to visit the WC int the knight.
    Bey LINDA
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