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Reviews for JOURNEY

By : SesshysJadedSamuri
  • From ANON - labelle on October 04, 2005
    very sad but i love it, please continue
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  • From ANON - hiro on October 03, 2005
    I have been reading and very much enjoying. I like the theme and plot and how you are going about it, but if I may, I would suggest digging in more into the characters. I feel like there is so much you can do with this fic to make it amazing, dont get me wrong its great as it is but it needs a little more substance. You could try making your chapters longer and be a little more detailed, you know, the setting of the story. Remembe in English class when they talked about writting that you have to answer: when, where, who, what, how, well just like that but adding the setting, the atmosphere, theme and time. Im sure you can do it. But please, dont stop and please dont take this as a flame, Im also an author on this site and I assure you that the least that I want is to offend a fellow author, especially one of the few who's caught my interest.
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  • From ANON - Danielle on October 02, 2005
    OMG you better update ASAP, or sesshomaru will attack you..... wait..... that's not really a bad thing, is it? ok, let me reword it.

    YOU BETTER UPDATE SOON OR SESSHOMARU WILL IGNORE YOU!!

    that's better ^^
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  • From ANON - Silent Death on October 02, 2005
    You know, I really love reading your stories. They are very different and This is another one I love. Keep up the good work!

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  • From ANON - mary on October 02, 2005
    please continue with story. I really liked it. It is a smae you had to get kill of sango. PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Kokuei on September 30, 2005
    This is definitely different from anything I've read before with this coupling. It's very intriguing and I love the originality it has. Keep it up and update soon!
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  • From ANON - amber on September 29, 2005
    you are doing a wonderful job i hope you update soon either here or single spark! thanks so much

    amber (Midnight_Goddess)
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