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Reviews for Betrayal's Gift

By : LdyMoon
  • From ANON - Ur Fan on September 11, 2006
    U R such a tease!!!!!! I loved it I know I was reading and when he said not yet I fell out my chair!!! Than boobie sex ooohhhhssss it was good.
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  • From ANON - joy on September 11, 2006
    holy crap tat was good plz update >>>>> plzzzzzz >>>> now
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  • From ANON - chubbers on September 11, 2006
    wooo hoo another update! you have no idea how mant fricken times a day i check this site for this story..... im obsessed what can i say?
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  • From ANON - Sorceress on September 09, 2006
    Another wonderful chapter I can't wait to read what happens next, Will Inuyasha fall in love with her, and tell her, could he let her go when he does? If she has his child would he really not care? Hmmm to me Inuyasha would stay with her and let Kagome and Moruka know that she is going to have his child which in itself would make Kagome mad as hell, because she loved him and wanted it to be him who she has a child for but to know that her daughter is going to get Inuyasha a child would be more then hurtful and if he wouldn't let her see the child as well now that would be something to think about.

    *Hugs*

    ~Sorceress A.K.A Sabrina~
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  • From ANON - joy on September 07, 2006
    holy fuk ... did u know i took off a day of college pretending i was sick just to read ur story ... lol wow... i must say this is a great story iread it all in 1 sitting ooooooh boy happy day for me ... 7 hours of reading like wow plz continue with this blessed story
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  • From ANON - Not suppose to be doing this now on September 06, 2006
    Shhh, I'm in class pretending to be doing my typing work. Anyway, I've been reading this story and it's fantastic it should be nominated. Why isn't anyone nomininating the story???? I guess I'll have to become a part of this group just to do that. I think it's well written and very visual. I loved certain parts in every chapter, from chapter one I felt Inu Yasha's hurt, anger and betrayal and in two I felt and remembered being teased in middle school and high school, so, I believe that you have your feelings down and everyone reading can feel along with the characters. May I use your story as a project of mine at school. I promise I'm not stealing it. How long will it be before your done cause I would really love to use it.

    I'll send you my email and we could discuss it.
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  • From ANON - Ur fan on September 06, 2006
    Hitomi is so cool she needs to be running the show!!! I'm an Hitomi/Inu fan all the way woot woot!!!
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  • From ANON - chubbers on September 06, 2006
    yyaaaaay! an update! im glad your still working on this stor i looooove it!
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  • From ANON - chanda on September 04, 2006
    Oh, my a nasty cliffy. Love it. Look forward until your next update.
    Chanda
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  • From ANON - Sorceress on September 03, 2006
    Wow this just keep getting better and better I cant wait to read your next chapters
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  • From ANON - Angel on September 02, 2006
    I"m feeling like this right now =^__^= That was such a ooh, I just wish that were me in there with Inuyahsa pushing me up against the freakin walls. Gawd that was hot!!! MORE MORE MORE MORE.

    Ok like for real that chapter was all good but now Hotaru might die since Inuyahsa knows whose behind it all. Can he really kill her? Maybe if he does and Sesshomaru uses his sword to bring her back she could be healed and then Inuyasha reallizes hwo much he loves her nd they get together. oh thsi is why I'm not the writer and you are that was so boring, well, hurry up and let em see what you have them doing so I wont have to come up wiht lame ideas. :) hurry hurry


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  • From ANON - Cathy on September 02, 2006
    I must say that Hitomi is quite a character. She is totally different from Hotaru with her boldness. And goodness you have them breaking mirrors, isn't tht bad luck at least for seven years? I liked how Hotaru's transformation caused Inuyasha to come out slightly as well. Good chapter can't wait for the next one.
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  • From YoukaiObsessed on September 02, 2006
    Wahooo--I am reviewer number 200! Congratulations!

    Ohhs--I loved how they got her bad side out. Then onto some rough loving. --The back and forth between the two personalities was well done.

    Great chapter. Hope to see more soon!

    ~Tainted~
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  • From ANON - Ur fan on September 02, 2006
    Your story keeps building up and I can't wait for the finale. Give me more. Hitomi was just hot. I think I like her too. If there is a way for Inuyasha to have both of them please consider this idea. I think that would be cool.
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  • From ANON - The real Hotaru on August 28, 2006
    OK I'm so way behind in my reading that it's not even funny. I'm only on 21.

    Your story seems to have a life of it's own. Hotaru is a prisonor and if shippo trys to help her he will be killed. Inuyasha is so cold hearted that it's almost shocking. Drama, drama, drama I love it!!! Keep it up.
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