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Reviews for Betrayal's Gift

By : LdyMoon
  • From ANON - Angel on August 28, 2006
    thank you for giving me a call back when i emailed you. I was so disappointed when the site went down for a good sec. i've missed so much of this story. when i found it at mediaminor i was so happy and then to find out that there are more stories posted here and that it was back on. I was a little confused when I first went in this site, but I bookmarked what I wanted and now i am hot to trot!!! ok, so much to comment on so i'll say it in so many words I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!! alright finally i get to see both Inu Yasha and Hotaru letting there walls down. Is Inu Yasha totally deluding himself? I love it. Anyway, I am so exicted to be reading this story again. These are oen of those that you can never let go unfinished. Update soon ok other wise I'm going to be like this again X__X n u dont want that now do u.


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  • From ANON - Mirokus dream on August 28, 2006
    That was so intense I had my boyfriend read it adn then we role played thanks a lot for the idea!!!!! I owe you big time!!!!!! update soon.
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  • From ANON - cm44256 on August 24, 2006
    Hey lady... love the story. I had alot of chapters to catch up on... but well worth the read. I look forward until your update.

    Chanda
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  • From YoukaiObsessed on August 23, 2006
    Ack! What a cliffy!-- I loved the way Inuyasha let her explore his body. That was great! The of course his explorations of hers. That was quite hot!

    Wonderful updates! This is a very good and intense story! --Thank you!

    ~Tainted~
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  • From ANON - Sorceress on August 20, 2006
    I love your story I can't wait for the next chapters, I am waiting to see if Iunyasha is in love with her and not lying to himself.
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  • From ANON - Cathy on August 20, 2006
    I'm sorry that I haven't been reviewing. I promise I've been reading but, to lazy to review. Where do I start oh my god! I am so involved with your story, this story is the best so far that you've written. Like I said different from your other stuff but this is the best. I love your original characters they have such life. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Ur fan on August 20, 2006
    Just wanted to say that this is an excellent story. Please update soon I'm looking forward to it.
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  • From ANON - chubbers on August 15, 2006
    oh poor inuyasha.... he was so close... who did deva kill? well, my first thought would be faye, cause she blurted her plans to hotaru.... but thats too obvious.... maybe some lower youkai and she's gonna blame it on hotaru? oooh i cant waaaaiiit! update soon kay?
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  • From ANON - Sorceress on August 15, 2006
    I can't wait to read the next chapter, to me it seems like Inuyasha is starting to like the girl and she him, she is going to be scared but she will come around. And I think that owl I forget her name kill that butterfly one Faye. I hate to say it but I don't like the owl and something needs to be done to her she is only trying to hurt the poor girl and she has been hurt.
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  • From ANON - silent pluto on August 12, 2006
    whoa ho ho!
    Now this stuff is getting juicy!!!!
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  • From ANON - blacicekitten9 on August 11, 2006
    more??? begging here!!!!!ihope deva gets whatever is coming to her!!



    great so far!!!

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  • From ANON - Mirokusdream on August 07, 2006
    oh my gawd!!! Deva is a coool character, how do you come up with such cool characters update soon.
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  • From ANON - Mirokusdream on August 07, 2006
    I just want to say thank you for updating and I cn'tn believe that they were fighting Im sitting at the edge of my seat. great jjob best story ever needs to be nominated.
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  • From ANON - Tainted Dreams on August 06, 2006
    Great chapter! Loved how she was awoken. *Dreamy--hentai thoughts*--Then how Inuyasha explained to her what happened to her earlier was wrong.

    Wonderful job as always. Thank you! --Hope to see more soon!

    ~Tainted~
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  • From ANON - chubbers on August 05, 2006
    ah, you made Inuyasha so naughty in this chapter... i love it!
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