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Reviews for Betrayal's Gift

By : LdyMoon
  • From ANON - Tainted Dreams on August 02, 2006
    This is such a intense story. I never know what is coming or what to expect. I love it!

    Thank you for the update! Wonderful job on this chapter/story.

    ~Tainted~
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  • From ANON - Murtagh on July 30, 2006
    woot go authur! keep it up man
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  • From ANON - mirokusdream on July 30, 2006
    WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!I DONT KNOW WHAT TO SAY IVE READ FROM BEGINNING TO WHERE IT FINALLY STOPED ADN IM LIKE SPEECHLESS!!!!THIS IS A FREAKIN GREAT STORY THE BEST SO FAR THAT IVE READ & THE LAST CHAPTER OH MY GAWD INUYASHA AND MIROKU FIGHTING!!!!! I COULD SEE IT UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!

    DID YOU GET THE POINT!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - anon on July 28, 2006
    I rented Kurumi at blockbuster video but of coarse they dont have the entire thing so your so lucky that you have a video store by you that lets you watch them! I could only rely on CN to watch my anime and from what I understand when I read things on the web that they dont do the show justice.

    Ok, for Inu Yasha, I love him! Oh what he did to that female demon was so cold and yet so sexy! Arouse her than punish her! I loved how you implied that he lost his dominance to Hotaru by breaking eye contact. Dont' they say if you allow your dog to win by breaking eye contact that they feel they dominate you?! Please update soon!
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  • From YoukaiObsessed on July 27, 2006
    Kuma was such a catty assed bitch! Lawd--I wanted to smack the frock out of her.--Sadly there is some women like that, that will implant bad ideas into your head. *Swats her*

    I felt bad again for Hotaru when she read the note. Then there being no words of love for her.

    I cannot wait to see what happens when they go back through the well!--Lovely update, thank you!

    ~Tainted~
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  • From ANON - chubbers on July 25, 2006
    "be kind, please rewind" ha! iremember that! although i never did rewind them ;). i loved this chapter! i hope kagome doesnt do someting stupid and try to keep hotaru with her when she returns.
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  • From ANON - Blackicekitten9 on July 25, 2006

    Update soon please?


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  • From ANON - Blackicekitten9 on July 20, 2006
    Update soon please?

    Interesting storyline to say the least. I normally read all there is and then review.... I like it. Different pairing and differently written than most of what I read when I am not working on my series. I hope you add more soon.

    Will check back for more.
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  • From YoukaiObsessed on July 17, 2006
    Ohhs... right into rough sex! *Crosses legs-Starry eyes* Ehs- I know I am a pervert! Haha!

    I love the original characters you have. You always do different ones from what we normally see.

    Inuyasha really went off on Kagome and Miroku. I cannot wait to see what happens next!

    ~Tainted~
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  • From ANON - chubbers on July 15, 2006
    are you gonna kill of miroku and kagome? oh that will be so sad...... thanks for updating!!!
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  • From ANON - Tainted Dreams on July 12, 2006
    Geesum-- I was not expecting that! *blinks* Ohhs this was an intense chapter.

    I like how you brought Inuyasha and Kagome together. As she will wonder if she really saw him or was she going through some sort of drug induced stupor.

    Hope to see more soon!

    ~Tainted~
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  • From ANON - chubbers on July 10, 2006
    oh your so evil, you killed grandma! im just kidding, you know this is the first time i've read a story on here where the grandma dies. and i love how you made Inuyasha cry after he was being an ass for so long. ITS ABOUT TIME YOU UPDATED! :)
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  • From ANON - ldytrista on July 10, 2006
    this story is an attention grabber, it's intense and keeps me wanting more. Can't wait for next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Tainted Dreams on July 04, 2006
    Kagome really put some bad ideas in Hotaru's head about masturbation. Poor girl, being caught then the talk about it. Then basically being told it was wrong to until marriage.-- I love your flashback scenes and how you piece everything together.

    I loved the part about the aura between Inuyasha and Hotaru. The double masturbation. How yummy!--Thank you for the update!

    ~Tainted~
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  • From ANON - OriginalSinner on July 04, 2006
    Oh sweetpea! I am so slack... I don't get much of a chance to plant my bum in front of the computer (school holidays... heheheh... where'd you say you put that valium sandwich?) Anyways, I've only just gotten around to reading chapter 2... well chapter 3 really but you know what I mean ^_^. Wow... what a deep chapter that was. Poor little Shippo... how traumatising for him to not only lose Sango from his life but then have to watch Kagome and Miroku get dirty with eachother and screw up his poor little kitsune head.... And how's Miroku's introspection??? Naughty damn houshi... Kinda made me feel a bit sad for him AND Kagome. Your first chapter had me feeling like Kagome had gotten her cumupence (is that even a word? I think it is but I'm sure I spelled it wrong *doh!*) But then, I kinda started feeling sorry for both Kagome and Miroku in a twisted kind of way in this chapter. So Miroku gave her some nasty STD did he? Feral monk *hehehe* And Kagome's still a certified pill freak... but poor Hotaru... I could just imagine how she felt seeing her mum and dad lose the plot at eachother over both being unfaithful to the people they truly loved. Imagine being the offspring of a dalliance of debaucherous desire. Poor kid...

    I'm hooked already... can't wait to read more... Top stuff chickybabe...

    Peace,

    The Sinner ~_^
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