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Reviews for Betrayal's Gift

By : LdyMoon
  • From ANON - chubbers on July 02, 2006
    i didnt notice you addes 2 new chapters...... you know its funny cause i was thinking about this story a few days ago, and i was thinking that if i was writing this story i would add a cave scene where they're trapped cause of a storm... but i was thinking a thunder storm. i guess great minds really do think alike! this story is why i keep checking this site..... update soon please! -------p.s. had i known you posted the chater before this last one i would have reviewed... sorry for not noticing
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  • From ANON - Cathy on June 25, 2006
    Gotta say two things 1: thanks for emailing me and telling me this sight is back up because I sure had no idea 2: I love this story, I love it so much, I am happy to be reading it again. Chap 23 was good, got to see from her point of view and oh, the friction starting between Inuyasha and Hotaru great great.
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  • From OriginalSinner on June 24, 2006
    Thankyou for your review sweetpea ^_^… I followed your link her and kinda got stuck on your story. It’s really, really good! And I’m so happy that there’s a shitload of chapters still for me to read! Don’t you hate it when you start getting into a story and then bang… no more chapters and you’re waiting forever for an update?

    Anyways… Chapter One… Kagome the mole… who would’ve guessed it hey? With Miroku to boot. Reowrr *scratching claws* Yup… can’t say I’m a huge fan of Kagome…

    But THEN… Hotaru! She’s Kagome’s daughter!? Cool… So does Inuyasha get with Hotaru? God’s I hope so… Eat that Kagome you has been! *teehee* And Kagome is a pill freak! I love it! Then again I have kids too so I can understand her dilemma (can’t wait till the lil’ darlings are teenager *choking on tongue*) I loved the whole dropped another pill and continued to cook dinner. Man… that’s gonna be me in 12 years time *doh!* Anyway, I loved the angst of this chapter. Kagome regretting her actions and all. Very good sweetpea.

    K… off to finish reading… Good stuff ~_^
    The Sinner.

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  • From ANON - chanda on June 24, 2006
    Ah, the joys of motherhood...lol. I have a seven year old, I can relate...

    Okay I'm very much enjoying your story. And oh yes the madness, boy oh boy. Sure look forward until your next chapter.

    Chanda
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  • From ANON - Tainted Dreams on June 24, 2006
    Gawd-- you are going through a very busy time right now. I hope everything will slow down for you. Take care of yourself!

    Another good chapter from you. I felt bad for Hotaru, and what she is facing. The her fears when she woke up naked.

    -- Looks like her and Inuyasha are beginning to fall for each other. I cannot wait to see where you go with this.

    ~Tainted~
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  • From ANON - Tainted Dreams on June 23, 2006
    I am so sorry I am so late in reviewing. Things around here have been beyond crazy lately. Anyways--I loved the two newest chapters.

    I was shocked by what was going on with Ken and what happened to him in the end. The flashbacks were wonderful and wonderfully written.

    Lawd-- I sat there kinda stunned for a moment reading that, before I knew it the chapter was over with. I was like NO-- not yet!
    Thank you for the updates!

    ~Tainted~
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  • From ANON - chubbers on June 19, 2006
    i love this story! i cant wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - fanfic reader on June 19, 2006
    I just have to say "OH MY GOD!" This story is so kick ass, when I read the part about Hotaru (I hope I spelt it right) getting raped I was like woah, it was so real, but now we have his version and though it was still rape the pictures that went through my mind I can't breathe I can't wait to see what happens next! Hurry and update!
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  • From ANON - chanda on June 16, 2006
    Hello remember me...lol Sorry its been a while since I last reviewed and for that I'm sorry. I had a couple of chapters to catch up with, still love your story. I look foward until your next review.

    Chanda
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  • From LdyMoon on February 13, 2006
    Hello everyone, I want to thank all of you who've reviewed the story. I've noticed too that some of you that haven't reviewed in a while reviewed after the last chapter. I am happy with the response that I have received from the last chapter. Now as some of you may know I am in fact pregnant and about to have a scheduled c-section in five weeks, so for me to write something like that well....I have no excuse but that she can't have the baby. I have other plans for our Hotaru. Keep reading and it will all unfold for you. It was indeed a very hard chapter for me to write since I place myself in the charaters shoes. I actually cried, so, I thought it was good, but I wanted to see what you all thought and it worked.

    As far as updating the story, according to the web sight I can't download anymore chapters until March first, so, until then keep thinking about what is going to happen next and than on March first come back and read to see if you were right.

    Again thank you and sorry about not being able to update, but in a good way this allow more people to review the chapter neh?

    luv LdyMoon
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  • From ANON - airbender on February 10, 2006
    Ok can you say OOOOhh my gosh where did that come from what are you trying to make me do now beg for you to write more and you know the baby was a tear can you say jerker I look around my room and think wow I got to leave the computer to breath for a moment then I come back I don't know thinking maybe if I stay away from the comptuer you want kill the baby.....but yet again I read the baby dead.......you have me caught in the game (meaning this story of your) Do I HAVE TO SAY IT AGAIN ......... well I guess I do ,,,,,,,,UPDATE WOMAN UPDATE. lol I'll be waiting by the computer to see if you have written anything yet..........so keep those stories coming.
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  • From ANON - Cathy on February 10, 2006
    I don't know where to begin, I am so stunned, shocked, hurt, I had to reread what you wrote just to make sure you wrote it. You've never written anything like that before. I was so unprepared. My husband came home and saw me crying. I told him to read it and he couldn't even make a comment. Let me tell you something, I had to wait a couple of days to write this review. I couldn't write it then because I was too distraught. Please, when you update, please let something happy happen. And please explain where this came from. This was still a good chapter, it was just to realistic. I could see it happening. I can still see it in my head and that lump in my throat comes back. LdyMoon, please update soon and please let it be happy.
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  • From ANON - air bender on February 09, 2006
    love it wahhhhh yes I'm so happy I'm gonna stop crying write more but make it more happy please.
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  • From ANON - Deep Blu on February 09, 2006
    I use this name because I love the ocean but now I really feel blu after reading that chap hell's bell woman I can't even look at the t.v. right now cause if I see a kid I think I would really cry and my boyfriend is still cursing ..
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  • From ANON - Alice with Chains on February 09, 2006
    I can't breath its caught in my chest and I think I'm gonna cry where did you go within your soul to pull something like that out........ok I Will have to now keep holding my breath and wait till you update.
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