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Reviews for Betrayal's Gift

By : LdyMoon
  • From ANON - DEAD SCREAM on February 09, 2006
    Uhhhh what just happened the baby is dead what ____BLINK _______BLINK______ DID I read that write or am I just dazed and confused now don't answer all at once if you say lady moon I'm dazed and confused I'll believe it cause right now I can't believe the baby is DEAD and that just breaks my heart........now my cat thinks I'm crazy cause all I can do is just cry right now......update soon ........ :( wahhhhhh I think I need more tissue.
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  • From ANON - Glaze on February 09, 2006
    Is it alright to look at the screen now where in all of the 7 hells did you get all that emotion to write such a chapter.....please keep it up.
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  • From ANON - DARK TOUCH on February 09, 2006
    What the Hhhhellll is going on I leave your story just for a moment and I come back and you done killed the kid thats so sick its so depraved *sigh* more more I tell ya I love it well I really hated that part it felt wayyy and I mean way to freakin real.. I will have to keep on my game to see when you UPDATE so hurry up......
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  • From ANON - Kougas rival on February 06, 2006
    Damn that is some pretty fucked up shit there but it was a very good chapter any woman who has to go through something like that where did you get this material in yor head them muses must have been feeling violent. I'm still like damn
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  • From ANON - Tainted jewel on February 05, 2006
    Unbrake my heart plz u have to update my friend told me that this was going to be sad and she was all silent about it I wasnt expectign it to be like this. I cant think breath or even feel right now how do you do it, how did you make me emotionally feel for this girl? Un do this hurt you caused when you wrote this chpt and make me happy again.
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  • From ANON - Angel on February 05, 2006
    A TWISSLER!!! YOU SAID I'D BE TWISTED LIKE A TWISSLER! YOUR PREGGERS FOR CRYING OUT LOUD AND YOU KILLED A BABY! I'M LIKE SO CRYING RIGHT NOW AND IN SHOCK. SHES SEVERLY BEATEN AND THEN AND THEN SHE KILLS THEM WHICH THEY DESERVE BUT, YOU DID IT.

    OK, now that I can stop screamin I am so sad and now I don't know what is going to happen to her. I cant believe I have to wait another week for the answer. I'm still like @L@ I am so numb now I wont be able to sleep with this on my mind. I'm going to be so sad at school now thanks alot. But that was a very good chapter I just wished you put in the next one saying that Inuyasha is going to take care of her now.
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  • From ANON - Angel on February 05, 2006
    :D that was a good chapter had a lil bit of everything. I feel so bad for Inu everyone on his case the big fight between him and sess was classic.
    So I'm goin to turn into a twissler huh? I'm off to read the next chappy.
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  • From YoukaiObsessed on February 05, 2006
    Wows- What a dark chapter! I was kind of expecting that, but the way you did it was really good. Dayum, then the way she killed those men.--Ohhs so Shippo saw all of this. Wonder if he will tell Inuyasha, and what his response if and when he finds out. Good chapter!

    ~Tainted~
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 05, 2006
    i amlost gaged when i was reading the part where yuy killed hotaru's baby! i still have a lump in my throat..... but for some reason i knew she wasnt going to have it.... how do you come up with this shit?
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  • From ANON - linda on February 04, 2006
    GIRL LET ME TELL YOU...I gasped, I cried, and I'm just now starting to breath again! That was your most powerful piece of writing ever. My husband even had to stop and read it. You should get the best writer of the year award, and it's only February!

    And by the way, I needed my asthma pump for this one!
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  • From ANON - Linda on February 04, 2006
    Darn, I was hoping I would be able to review before you posted your new story tonight. Oh, well, I guess that just means I am the first one to read chapter 20 : )

    I think 19 was great! Definatly true to each of their characters. I wouldn't change a thing. Although, I hope to read more about Hotaru and Inu Yasha soon.

    I haven't had a good day and was upset to see so few people reviewed. I say if the next chapter doesn't get at less ten reviews hold a randsom for a dozon! HA HA HA *evil laugh* That will get some of your readers typing!
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  • From ANON - chocolatte ookami on February 02, 2006
    PLLLLEEEAAASSSEEE UPDATE! THIS IS GOOD
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  • From ANON - Kougas rival on January 30, 2006
    That's cool you don't want to let me know if I am right or not, but, I think I'm right. I'm right right? Ahh bet you didn't fall for that. I am so tempted right now to put my anwser down here, but, I don't want to ruin it for anyone else who is reading this story.

    My favorite scene in this chp is the way Sesshomaru kicked ass on the youkai insulting his brother, it was so in character I could see it happening vividly, the way Inuyasha responded was classic Inu. Waiting with patience for your next chapter.
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  • From ANON - cathy on January 30, 2006
    Well, that was a cute chapter with Ayame she is so sweet. You show that Inuyasha has a real family now. The closeness he has with Ayame was so endearing I was like "AWWW" The festival sounded like a big to do too. Well, this was another good chapter, you don't need me to tell you and I can't wait to be twisted up like a twizler.


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  • From YoukaiObsessed on January 29, 2006
    *Falls off cliff, and lands on muses.. think I may stay here for a bit* I was checking something, and saw that you updated! Damn should have worn my rock climbing gear to get back up the cliffs! Things are building up. Then the pushing for Inuyasha to get a mate. Hehehe- I swear today is cliffy day! Good chapter--Hope to see more soon!

    ~Tainted~
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