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Reviews for Betrayal's Gift

By : LdyMoon
  • From ANON - The real Hotaru on January 29, 2006
    Sorry I didn't review sooner I had a car accident last Saturday. Both cars have no hope, but on the bright side no one was hurt too badly. My arm still hurts so this review will not be too long. I think you did a great job on both stories. I see your plot just keeps on thickening. I totally loved your pairings and you can bet I'll read your next story, after all you are my favorite writer!


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  • From ANON - Kougas rival on January 26, 2006
    Just wan ta say this story is kicking ass. I read like all the reviews and read the story based on what they said. To the person who wrote that they think they know who Hotaru is

    I know who she is too. I hope I'm right.

    keep up the good writing
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  • From ANON - madluv2u on January 25, 2006
    For anyone trying to find out just who is Hotaru really, go back and re-read some of these chapters. I was just reading the whole story together and there are so many clues. I know for a fact who she really is and if you find out you'll look just like this> *O* I know I did! Just please not post it and mess it up for everyone else OK. This story is so darn good I think when it is completed I'll have to read it one more time straight through!

    By the by- Best to you and the baby! But PLEASE make sure this story gets finished! *smile*
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  • From ANON - Linda on January 24, 2006
    OH...MY...GOD!!! You have no idea how good that story was. Shippo is going to be a dad! Rin and whats his name!Sesshomaru and Ayame! Five pups, with three of them being girls! This story might have been short but it is packed with "OH MY's!" Great job!!!
    And thank you for saving my life and up dating when you did. That was close ;)
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  • From ANON - Cathy on January 23, 2006
    I just wanted to say thank you for updating and I am so happy that you gave us all a break with the hardship, though, I am waiting to find out what happened to grandma. I think Sesshomaru and Ayame would make an excellent couple. She has enough innocence and childish charm like Rin and she's full youkai. I would love to read that story. I wish you can start writing on it now. Oh, and how about a story on Iruka and Rin? How they fell in love and got together. OOHHH that would make a nice challenge.....

    Anyway, keep up the good work and I hope that you can get the story finished before the baby comes.

    Cathy
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  • From YoukaiObsessed on January 22, 2006
    I loved how Inuyasha was training Shippo. Then how you explained about his age. Then going into the whole chromosome explanation. Now Iruka sounds quite hot! Ohhs Ayame had 5 babies at one time! Ohs 1 at a time is hard enough. Poor girl! *faints at thought*- I love the pairing, but you know me, love alternate pairings, regardless if its M/F, F/F or M/M. Loved the chapter!~~ Take care of yourself, update when you can!

    ~Tainted~
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  • From ANON - Moon Angel on January 22, 2006
    Sorry haven't reviewed in awhile I've read but been too busy to review. I have to say, (1) good job on this story so far so many things have been going through my mind, the hospital gang bang, dual personality, near abortion, I mean you are throwing every dark thing in this story and yet you balance it off with some light banter as in this chapter. (2) I think that Sesshomaru is a little out of character here, it's just my opinion, but, I can understand why he would be. He's got his brother back as a full demon, Rin is in his life and he's married to Ayame who is as sweet as can be, so, how can he stay hard all the time when he is finally surrounded by people who care about him (3) I love the fact that Sesshomaru is with Ayame, I don't see them paired too often, if ever? Are there pairings with them? I don't think I've ever read one. Anyway, that would make a good story.

    Congrats on your impending delivery day and don't worry too much if you can't update as much as possible, you have your hands full. But, please don't forget to finish this story like some others out there who start such a great story and take forever to update or just forget to update at all. That is one of the things I hated about "A Single Spark" hardly any of the stories are complete and I hate reading incomplete stories. I just thought I throw that in there, really there is no pressure. ::yes there is::
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  • From ANON - Angel on January 22, 2006
    Oh My Freakin Gawd!!!!! I love Sesshomaru and Ayame 2gether!!!! I am so there to read that one too. I love the playful banter between Shippo and Inu I could see them when there older acting just like that! OH and the cool blue eyed guy with the black hair sounds cool and he's married to Rin!!!! That's the youkai from like chapter two or something when Inu went to see Sesshy. I wonder if any body picked that up?

    Update soon and BTW, Yeah you have to review even after your baby is born, maybe while your at the hospital you can write to distract you from all the pain huh?


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  • From ANON - chanda on January 21, 2006
    *L* A/N: yeah me too.

    I like the pairing I didnt expect it so thats even better. Loved the chapter really gave it some nice flare.

    Chanda
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  • From ANON - JAKEN IS MASTER on January 21, 2006
    INTERESTING. IT SEEMS THAT SESSHOMARU IS LOSING HIS EDGE AND BEGINNING TO DOUBT HIMSELF. I AM A LITTLE DISAPPOINTED THAT THE GREAT SESSHOMARU IS OPENING HIMSELF UP TO BE BEATEN BY A PLAYER SO NEW TO THE GAME AND TO ADMIT DEFEAT TO SHIPPO AND TO INYUYASHA.
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  • From ANON - Cathy on January 17, 2006
    Alright I've absolutely lost all my nerves. I am shocked that she's pregnant and that she has a split personality like a sybil or something! Her grand mother!!!! The only person she ever felt to have loved her is now in the hospital badly injured while the split tries to abort the baby!!!!

    I must say I can't wait to see what happens next yet I'm scared. I'll be looking forward to your update.
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  • From ANON - Linda on January 16, 2006
    I wounder if anyone else noticed that when Hotaru want to the doctors office she sign in under the village healers name "Naoko" ? Great story all together. The whole thing was full of bad and shocking news. I Well, I have some pretty bad and shocking news too...I'm go to DIE...If you don't up date soon!I...need...more!!! (--^^--^-^------------------------------------------------------) < This will be me at the hospital on sunday. You have until than, to save me!
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  • From ANON - Linda on January 16, 2006
    I can wait to see where this going with Inu Yasha! What is he planning? On the second half of the sorry I feel bad for Fuu. I konw it was her plan to hurt Hotaru, but I think her going crazy would of been all the punishment she needed. I guess I'm just to nice. Anyway, you did a great job!
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  • From ANON - Linda on January 16, 2006
    Sorry I have not reveiwed in a while but I had some family matters to take care of. I'm happy Hotaru is home. This whole chapter was touching. I don't believe Inu Yash was in the house. I thought he was going to kill them when he saw the wedding picture. that flash back was off the chain. Now let me read the other.
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  • From ANON - The real Hotaru on January 16, 2006
    You are the Queen! As if we didn't feel bad enough for poor Hotaru, now she's with child. Are you tring to make our hearts bleed for this girl? How much worse can it get for her? The one person she feels really loves her she pushes down the stairs as her alter ego. Not only that, but then she tries to kill the baby. She must feel lost right now. And just when you think her family life might get better it turns out she has a new found hate for her mother. I know its only going to get harder for her. All the pain this girl has been through you BETTER give her a happy ending!!!
    @_@ Hotaru
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