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Reviews for Betrayal's Gift

By : LdyMoon
  • From ANON - Peacemaker on January 16, 2006
    Hey, sorry I haven't reviewed in awhile but the story looks great and it is starting to have a very well written plot. Thanks for the heads up on the new chapter and I can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.

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  • From ANON - Angel on January 15, 2006
    I'm so like going crazy here myself she's pregnant!!!!! Now she's another person!!!!! And her grandmother was pushed!!!!!!!
    God girl you can write a freakin story. Hell yeah I'm so ready to find out what happens next.

    ps on your pup, sorri to hear that you had to give her up, U'r still a good momma, you sent her off to someone who would love her, though you made the greater sacrifice for her comfort, so, that makes you the greatest momma in teh world!!! ::smile k ::
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  • From ANON - Paul on January 15, 2006
    This is an interesting story. I didn't know you were so creative. I hope that this girl has a better life, but if she ever needs a lawyer to file her claim and take up her case, she should call on me. I'd have that little rat bastard in a cage somewhere. Anyway, she has some problems she also has a dual personality that keeps the story very interesting. And Inuyasha well, he's still Inuyasha I wonder how your planning on making it work for these two.
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  • From ANON - chanda on January 15, 2006
    Oh I'm speechless, didnt expect that. I'm glad that she had a heart to heart with her father. I hope she can forgive her mom as well...not to mention that she is now pregnant...

    Look forward until your next chapter.
    Chanda
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  • From ANON - chubbers on January 15, 2006
    im glad youre still updating! im not sure where your going with this story, but i hope she doesnt have the baby...... im sorry you had you give away your puppy, but at least you sent her to a good home. amd you did try your best. just think of it this way, maybe if you didnt have her she would have gone to a bad home where nobody took care of her but never bothered to give her away. i believe you did the right thing, considering your puppy's feelings, and not wanting to keep her in her kenel all day. cheer up!! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Tainted Dreams on January 15, 2006
    I was prepared b4 hand and had my rock climbing gear on! I have learned to do that now with you. Hehehe!--Interesting chapter, specially with her having a split personality--so to speak. Ohhs and being pregnant, poor thing. The pushing her Grandma down the stairs was a shocker! Nice twist! Good chapter!

    ~Tainted~
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  • From ANON - gigi on January 14, 2006
    update soon. like to see more.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 14, 2006
    Hey! Update please!
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  • From ANON - Cathy on January 10, 2006
    Oh my word...I don't know what to say, I mean I don't understand why that girl had to go through that, I know she was mean, but, it should have been Ken for hurting Hotaru, Fuu didn't do it. You will explain right?

    However, it is still a good story and I am really looking forward to seeing what in the world you have planned. I've never been at the edge of my seat before for any of your stories.

    Keep them up.

    BTW, I'm sorry to hear about your puppy, I wish I could take it for you, but, I already have a big puppy. A black lab. Unlike you I don't have little children and I am not expecting so I understand that you have your work cut out for you. If your husband will hold off maybe you guys can wait it out until she calms down she is still just a baby. I know it's hard, but, poor baby she doesn't understand that she is being naughty.
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  • From ANON - The real Hotaru on January 10, 2006
    YES.... It served Fuu right. I think everyone feels justice was served. Like they say what goes around comes around, so how does she liked them apples? I can't wait to see what Ken is going to go though.
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  • From ANON - chubbers on January 09, 2006
    heeey good stuff so far! i personally think that ken boy should have been in that situation instead of fuu, but its your story. i cant wait to see what happens next! hopefully miroku (i cant remember how to spell his name) will get a nice little beating from inuyasha!!! hope you update soon!
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  • From ANON - angel on January 08, 2006
    Oh my gawd, Fuu....well...she got what she deserved I guess, I only wonder now what happens to the guy. Good chapters update soon.
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  • From YoukaiObsessed on January 08, 2006
    Awww Hotaru was acting out against Inuyasha. I felt bad for the both of them. Ohh hell I was not expecting that with Fuu! Good chapter. ---That is it, I am putting muses at the bottom of these cliffs of yours, so when I fall off... I will have something nice and sof... okay something to land on! *innocent look* Hope to see more soon!

    Tainted
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  • From ANON - chanda on January 07, 2006
    I do hope you find your puppy a good home... wish you the best of luck there.

    Great update, harsh punishment. Hopefully the person who actually did the crime gets one hell of a beating as well.

    Chanda
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  • From ANON - penpaninu on January 07, 2006
    heartwrenching and good!
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