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Reviews for Betrayal's Gift

By : LdyMoon
  • From ANON - chubbers on December 24, 2005
    okay i dont know how often you read your email, but i heard you were having problems training your puppy, so i thought i would try and help ya a little.... loooove the stories! kepp up the great work!!!
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  • From ANON - silent pluto on December 24, 2005
    Wow, i love your story. I'ved got a sneaky suspicion about hotaru. In truth she is a freak, but what the hay? lol Nice story, keep updating, it's great.
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  • From YoukaiObsessed on December 24, 2005
    Ohhhs Sesshoumaru is a voyeur! Poor Nari--I was surprised that Inuyasha sold her! Loved the chapter, lots of buildup in it. Cannot wait to see where you are going to take this!--Ohhs another video game player. I did not know you was into those also! In a little more than 24 hours I plan to have my fingers wrapped around the new Kingdom Hearts game, and Mortal Kombat. I am like a kid waiting to rip those packages to shreds. Shame on me, being an adult and acting like that--Hehe!~~ Good luck with the puppy! I am so glad to see that you updated! Thank-you!
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  • From ANON - Slacker on December 20, 2005
    Another great chapter. I'm curious to know what in the world was with the papers at the end though. I also can't wait for some major confrontation between Inuyasha and the family. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - InTent rEadER on December 20, 2005
    Update soon good chptr.
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  • From ANON - Angel on December 20, 2005
    WHAT WAS IN THE LETTER!!!!! HOW CAN YOU WRITE THAT AND NOT TELL US YOUR SO EVILLLLLL!!!!

    No really your kewl, I didn't mean that @ all. Kewl cliffy just makes me want to beg for an answer right now. PLZZZZ UPDATE, you know you wanna.

    Merry X-MAS to you and your family, hope santa gives you great gifts, oh wait, he did you have the Inuyasha game. Hope my boyfriend buys it for me as my secret santa. ~~ shifty eyes~~
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  • From YoukaiObsessed on December 19, 2005
    I felt bad for Miroku, when Kagome said she wasn't 'in love' with him.--Oh hell, what a evil assed cliffy! Ohs what does that letter say? Hope to see more soon!
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  • From ANON - linda on December 18, 2005
    Just drive me crazy way don't you? How many reviews are we talking here? What did that note say? What link to the past did it have? What must she do? I think I have gone mad, Finsh the next part NOW!!!!!

    Oh, Yeah, great job : )
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  • From ANON - jaken should be master on December 18, 2005
    Seems to be lacking action. Move on from the filler and get this story moving. Great set up. Please write more.
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  • From ANON - chanda on December 18, 2005
    I loved it, was that a suicide note? Oh I just had to ask... So they will return to the past. Oh I cant wait.

    Happy Holidays,
    Chanda
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  • From ANON - Linda on December 17, 2005
    You were right when you said this story with Inu Yasha was going to be hot! However I'm sure all of your readers had to feel bad for that poor girl. I mean for crying out laud she was in love with the man and he just throw her out of his bedroom becuase she told him so. That was pretty harsh. But at the same time we feel bad that InuYasha was hurt that deeply. All I have to say is "you are the queen of rollor coaster rides!"
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  • From ANON - Thr real Hotaru on December 16, 2005
    Sorry, don't get me wrong, I do feel bad for the girl and him as well. Poor girl! I just know she was crushed into tiny pieces. I feel sooo bad for him, it's sad when someone can't fully feel the joy of love. However, I know things are going to change now that Hotaru (me) is in the picture. I know it will be hard and painful but than when isn't it?!
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  • From ANON - The real Hotaru on December 16, 2005
    WOW!!! Like Paris Hilton would say..." That's HOT! "

    Oh, HAHA, I also like the way he kicked that "bitch" out of the room for saying she loved him. That was classic.
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  • From ANON - Moon Angel on December 12, 2005
    Inuyasha is so hot yet I feel so bad for him. I wonder how this is going to turn out. He obviously still has feelings for Kagome that he hasnt put away yet and he is going to have feelings for Hotaru. Im at the edge of my seat here wondering what is going to happen next keep up the good work. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Angel on December 12, 2005
    Wow I sit here and fan myself I could totally see him and it is a vision to behold. Update soon. Oh and I am going to watch Narnia too. I read the books so Im totally excited.
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