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Reviews for Betrayal's Gift

By : LdyMoon
  • From ANON - demon bait on December 12, 2005
    Let me start off by saying this CAN I BE HIS SEX SLAVE!!!!! i promise to keep my feelings all to mself he will never know that i luv him. inu yasha is just so hot and you made him even hotter. cant wait to read next chpater.
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  • From ANON - Colleen on December 12, 2005
    IT WAS SO AWSOME SO FAR WHEN R U GONNA PUT THE NEXT ONE UP I LOVED IT I WAS SAD WHEN IT ENDED AND THER WAS NO NEXT CHAPTER, I CANT WAITE TO READ THE REST OF IT, COUNTIN AND WAITIN ON IT.^_^^_^^_^
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  • From ANON - youkailover on December 11, 2005
    Kick ass story. update soon liked to see more of this.
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  • From ANON - Cathy on December 11, 2005
    My word he is so cold he is still the same Inuyasha but cold. I love how you have that he buys and sells slaves and that he picked up that habit from his brother. I felt so bad for that demon slave girl. I wonder how is he going to fall in love with Hotaru what is going to make them fall in love? I can't wait to read so update soon.

    Cathy
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  • From YoukaiObsessed on December 11, 2005
    Ohhs Inuyasha buys and sells slaves! I love it! Wahoooo on the dirty talk! Inuyasha is a naughty boy! Hot lemon! I find him extremely hot like you have him!--Ut-oh she said those three little words to him. I felt bad for her, and for him later. --Thank you on the kind words, I really haven't done anything. Hope to see more soon!
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  • From ANON - chanda on December 10, 2005
    I liked your update, Inuyasha is very cold, and he still loves Kagome, this should be very interesting. Very excited on what you have in your next chapters to come.

    Look forward until your next update,
    Chanda
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  • From ANON - Angel on December 10, 2005
    Wow Hotaru is just so powerful, she has to be Midoriko's reincarnation right? I'm soooo excited about your next chp. Can't wait to read it. I actually came on to see if chp 11 was posted. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Moon Angel on December 07, 2005
    I see that my review didn't post because of the "glitch" so I'll do it again. Please UPDATE SOON! I can't wait I mean I feel all these emotions its like watching a sci-fi fantasy movie on lifetime or something I'm like GOD! I go to bed thinking what your next chapter is going to be like.
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  • From ANON - Cathy on December 07, 2005
    Well let me start by saying this update soon. I can't wait to read the lemon with Inuyasha. The name by the way is unique and beautiful for your daughter. Please email me the update alright.
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  • From ANON - InTent rEadER on November 27, 2005
    You had me with the title so I was intrigued I was further pulled in with your summary. Curious now I read chapters 1-10 and I must say:

    YOU FREAKIN ROCK MAN! I mean damn your female character is riding a roller coaster life and I'm just along for the ride and dog boy is now what? A freakin bad ass demon dressed in silks and armary and shit. You have a good imagination are there other stories you've written? Its like I'm there ya know?

    Your ass better update soon!

    UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Angel on November 27, 2005
    Alright I had gotten comfortable reading three chaps in a row and now I wish there was another one since you left it OPEN! You are the queen of cliff hangers. Another good chap. Hotaru is so intense with her powers, more so than Kagome was when she arrived in the past. Kagome needed Inu Yasha to help her out and it seems that Hotaru can handle her business. Well, you said you left clues as to who she is...is she Midoriko reincarnated? Since I know she is not Kikyo she doesn't look like Kikyo.
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  • From ANON - Angel on November 27, 2005
    chapter nine was great! Shippo seems to be really good looking, like he's about 15/16 yrs old? Still, he seems yummy and Inu Yasha wow, he's like Sesshomaru now! But there is still a gentle side of him he can't change completely right? Hotaru is going to soften him up. Anyway, Inu Yasha is so very hot hot hot hot!!!
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  • From ANON - Angel on November 27, 2005
    First I want to apologize that I haven't reviewed in a while. With school being out I went home for the holidays and as usual some drama, turkey, gossip, forgiveness and then everyone is happy. I haven't been able to get to a pc :P

    ok, chapter eight I was floored Kagome needed to kick Miroku's ass, she saved his damn life! No matter what their marriage is like he should keep his damn dick to himself! ok I needed to let that out. I've got some real issues here. I'm off to read the next chappy :)
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  • From ANON - Linda on November 27, 2005
    I like how you put this one together with "is this a dream?" and then the little girl who turns demon and trys to eat her, to top it off her powers are really strong. Great job as usual.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 27, 2005
    More! I comand more human sotry teller! I canot rest till this tale is finished! *shifty eyes*
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