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Reviews for Betrayal's Gift

By : LdyMoon
  • From ANON - Miroku's Dream on December 14, 2006
    sniffle sniffle I can't believe it's almost over!!!! But it was soo good looking forward to the end of this week! I can't wait to see what happens.
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  • From ANON - Cathy on December 12, 2006
    Oh my word this was such an intense chapter I feel so bad for everyone. What is going to happen next I wonder. I am so sad to know that there is only one chapter left. This is one of my favorite stories by you. It is the best drama story to date and I'm not just saying that.

    I was cracking up about your son that is so funny. But don't feel bad he'll grow out of it soon and go like "normal people". Trust me I had three boys who didn't want to use the potty up until kindergarden.
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  • From ANON - chubbers on December 10, 2006
    oh its so sad the story is coming to an end! *snif*snif* im so proud of you for completeting this story! this is my favorite story ever!
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  • From ANON - not your friend on December 08, 2006
    How could you kill Shippo, Hotaru and Kagome? Your a mean person! I hate Hotomi, I hope she dies a VERY bad death. Keep up the good work.

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  • From ANON - Anon on December 08, 2006
    This is a great sotry pleae keep it up write lmore soon
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  • From ANON - I am on December 08, 2006
    I can't believe that I am totally stunned...I say this because you threw so many curve balls I didn't have time to hit any. First: I was not expecting Hotaru/Hitomi to be the shikon no tama...that was brilliant I loved how you brought out that the jewel always finds its way back and it came back through Miroku's seed back to it's protector in an infant....I've got to give you a five to ten thumbs up for that originality! That is brillance in its making folks right there. I'm surprised more people haven't commented on that! We've all been wondering or at least we've all believed at least for my part that she was midoriko or something but not the jewel itself. Two: The way you made the knowledge of what they are how can I put this well how Hitomi took advantage of the situation now knowing why she is the way she is and how she decided to come to life by taking Shippo's yet again and this time for real I was like damn it's for real this time. Third: The scene with Kagome keening for her daughter that was felt I saw the agony and the heart brake well from all the party. It was the best chapter I beleive.

    I do need to make one comment though and it's not a biggy...the little section where Shippo is concerned was a bit confusing I understand what you said but I read it twice just to make sure. You might want to go back in and look at it.

    Overall this story...is one of the best stories with originalality that I've read in a long time.
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  • From ANON - Angel on December 07, 2006
    @.@

    What the %$&**%$@ happened!
    OMFG! How can you do that!!! how can you???? T__T

    I'm a german donut with powered sugar on top! I can't think of what that thing is called at the moment CUZ I can't think...I've past a twizzler!
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  • From ANON - Hitomi's Cheerleader on December 07, 2006
    HELL YEAH THOSE TWO BITCHES GOT JUST WHAT THEY DESERVED!!! MUNCH ON MUNCH ON!
    But I od sense that the waek one will return nad probably stronger ugh.
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  • From YoukaiObsessed on December 06, 2006
    o_O I was not expecting that to happen. This is getting more and more intense.--What a evil cliffy you left it on too.

    Great update--hope to see more soon!

    ~Tainted
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  • From ANON - chubbers on December 06, 2006
    i noticed in the area where shippo gets turned into dust *tear* you were using present tense (is that how you spell it?) and then after he dies you went back to past tense... you know for example: inuyasha says v.s inuyasha said.... it confused me for a minute, than i figured its probably just a mistake. just thought you might want to know... oh yeah and i loved the part where hitomi chomped on hotarus heart... yum! hahaha... ever read queen of the damned? no im not talking about the stupid movie im talking about the book. that how they take the queens power in the book. ah, i love it. *muah* update soon honey!
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  • From ANON - chubbers on December 06, 2006
    i noticed in the area where shippo gets turned into dust *tear* you were using present tense (is that how you spell it?) and then after he dies you went back to past tense... you know for example: inuyasha says v.s inuyasha said.... it confused me for a minute, than i figured its probably just a mistake. just thought you might want to know... oh yeah and i loved the part where hitomi chomped on hotarus heart... yum! hahaha... ever read queen of the damned? no im not talking about the stupid movie im talking about the book. that how they take the queens power in the book. ah, i love it. *muah* update soon honey!
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  • From ANON - Kougas rival on December 06, 2006
    How can you do that!!!!!!! Do you know what you are a homicidal fanfiction maniac is what you are!!!!
    But its so good I'm at the edge of my computer chair waiting so hurry and post k.
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  • From TheRealHotaru on December 05, 2006
    ................I had to stop reading................How could I go on................But then I knew I had to know what happened..................In the end I was........... SAD ............... SAD .......... SAD ................... How could you do that.............Where is your heart..............You've made me so depressed............and yet..........I need more!
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  • From ANON - The Black Miroku on December 05, 2006
    "OH MY GOD!" HOTORU IS DEAD? NNNNNNNNOOOOOOOO!

    Buot anyway, I'm loving this story the plot keeps you coming back and its full of unsuspecting turns... 100 out of 10!
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  • From ANON - Cathy on December 04, 2006
    Why why do you do this to me??? This was a heartpounding chapter I just can't wait what you bring to me next. I am speechless utterly speechless. This story should be nominated. How would one go about nominating a story. Well there were serval of your stories that I think should be nominated. But this one other than your songfic are my favorites.
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