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Reviews for Betrayal's Gift

By : LdyMoon
  • From YoukaiObsessed on November 27, 2005
    I am glad some friendly people found Hotaru. I loved how she was able to defend herself! Ohhs that's going to be interesting on how her and Inuyasha get together! Hope to see more soon!
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  • From ANON - chanda on November 27, 2005
    LOl I still say its weird, but I will continue to read this... I am not flaming. I love your discriptiveness ( if thats even a word) very well written.

    well I am strapped in my seat and awaiting the ride.

    Until next chap,
    Chanda
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  • From ANON - GABRIEL on November 24, 2005
    This is a really good story so far. I love it. The fact that Inuyasha is more like Sesshomaru kicks ass, hopefully he will at least keep the looks he has now. U really flipped it when Kagome cheated on him, even I got angry. Hopefully u will keep on with the great story that im already a fan of. Peace and have a nice Thanksgiving. 1.
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  • From ANON - Cathy on November 23, 2005
    I was not expecting Inuyasha to be so mean, I mean I know he was supposed to be mean but he's mean! I have a question though, why couldn't they smell Miroku's blood? Or do they just think it's Kagome's since she was the only other person to ever come through the well? Can you answer that question? I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter, will Inuyasha learn Hotaru's parentage and how would he react? I just hope that everyone has a happy ending.

    I hope that you and yours have a happy thanksgiving as well!

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  • From ANON - Cathy on November 23, 2005
    Oh my God! I knew it was going to happen, I knew Kagome would be pissed off. I know I was when I found out my ex was cheating on me. Oh my and poor Hotaru, she tried to committ suicide didn't she? I saw that you held the story up for ransom you evil woman. I'm sorry I couldn't read your story any sooner, I've been busy with the family. Had to go and see them for the holidays. Anyway, I'm off to read chapter nine.
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  • From ANON - Slacker on November 22, 2005
    Let the drama begin. I kinda wanna see Inuyasha confront Kagome and Miroku, and either tramatize them with words or burn the shrine and well house or something. Much suffering is needed and deserved.
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  • From ANON - the REAL Hotaru on November 22, 2005
    -ME-
    Heart beating fast
    Slow to exhale
    Mouth dropped open
    Eyes opened wide....

    Inu Yasha meets Hotaru!

    OK, InuYasha sounds hotter then ever!!!!!!!! (Yum Yum - lick lips - all hot and bothered) Little Shippo all grown up doesn't sound to bad him self! ( If only I was younger & a Cartoon of course)

    So they smell Kagomes blood in her. What about Miroku's? I just know eventually Hotaru and InuYasha are going to get together even though he can't stand the smell of her right now. I think that would be great. They both need someone to help find love, hope, and trust in their heart for the human race. After all it was humankind that hurt and hardened their hearts to the world. Maybe together they will have peace. I don't think it would be wierd for them to get together after all He and Kogome never did anything.

    Hotaru
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  • From ANON - Linda on November 22, 2005
    GIRL, like always you out did your self! I hope all ends well, although I'm enjoying the ride. I'm looking for the clues you are leaving though out your story as to who Hotaru really is, but I must say who ever she is - she rocks!

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  • From ANON - the REAL Hotaru on November 22, 2005
    First, I would like to start out by saying, I've read most of your stories and I think you almost put the real writer to shame becasuse your stories are so good. I wish she would let you take over from where she left off. I think you would do a great job writing out the story lines and portraying each of the characters. With that said, now I'd like to comment on this story. I felt bad for kagome but I'm happy she took action and kicked Miroku out. I know it had to be hard on her after all this isn't what she pictured her life like, although she should of expected it. I love your cliff hangers! Hotaru and her moms old arrow "WOW". Can't wait to read chapter nine.


    @
    ) Hotaru
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  • From YoukaiObsessed on November 22, 2005
    Ohhs so Inuyasha and Shippo found her. I feel bad for Inuyasha, I can understand the way he is feeling right now.--But Hotaru is not the one to blame. Poor girl has been to hell and back, a few times. Great update, at least the cliff wasn't as high this time!
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  • From ANON - Sere Eternite on November 21, 2005
    This is a coolie story, email me back when u update I really like it
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  • From ANON - chanda on November 21, 2005
    Happy turkey day to you too... Chapter 9 was great, Inuyasha has every right to be bitter, although it would be weird if he hooked up with Kagome's daughter...

    We will just have to wait.

    Until next time,
    Chanda
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  • From ANON - tOUCH mE nOW on November 21, 2005
    Loove it, I am so into it.There's Betrayal, its Spicy, and of course dark slap my mouth and call me happy I love that kind of combo so keep it up............
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  • From ANON - MOON PRINCESS on November 21, 2005
    WE HAVE MET YOUR DEMANDS SO HAND OVER THE NEXT CHAP NICE AND SLOWLY NOW LOL COME ON GIRL GIMME GIMME GIMME.......
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  • From ANON - Alice with Chains on November 21, 2005
    You need to hurry up and I just wanna say that I Love your story and I appreciate your writing skill now I don't wanna sound all stuck up but did we meet your quota of how many folks that wanna read the next chap cause girl I have my box of tissues and my box of chocolates with me so I'm ready to read.......
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