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Reviews for Betrayal's Gift

By : LdyMoon
  • From ANON - SEA STORM on November 21, 2005
    HELL'S BELL'S the freakin girl got raped I mean I feel so bad that I had to step away from my freakin CPU I felt that intrusions what the hell is wrong with that Boy he is sick...... you know the old saying payback is a bitch........I know this slime will get his and more come on girl finish the story and Inu needs to start being flipin more nice It wouldn't kill him ya know.......
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  • From ANON - Dark Touch on November 21, 2005
    Wow Ldy your are so awesome lovin this story and guess what my girlfriends are all like into Inuyasha now just from reading your story. Oh they told me to tell you that they loved your other story especially the sex scenes yeah I know they are just hard up lol so please keep it comin or did we reach our quota and are you gonna post the other chap up. *BLINK* bLINK* with pleding eyes.....
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  • From ANON - You know you wanna? on November 21, 2005
    Ok right well I read some of your reviews and I basis a good story on that and from what I'm reading in your story you are Kicking serious A.S.S. girl keep up the work it keep my evenings much more interesting with my hubby lol......so keep the writing up. sigh sigh sigh oh and I have also been reading your other stories.......great stuff.
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  • From ANON - Breath Deep on November 21, 2005
    What the HELL, this is a kick ASS story so yeah we want more. So you know what to do WRITE (ha ha pun on words but any way) right lol so keep those little hands ah writing lol.........
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  • From ANON - Amber on November 21, 2005
    *shifty eyes* Woot!
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  • From ANON - Brandy on November 21, 2005
    please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Slacker on November 20, 2005
    I'm tired of the drama with the craptastic parents. Bring on Inuyasha. Bring on the vengeance and his new demon form and power. Give me chapter 9 or give you death.
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  • From ANON - Sekkei on November 20, 2005
    Update please!
    Hurry for some Inu yasha moments ^^!
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  • From ANON - chanda on November 20, 2005
    I just read your fic today and let me say what a ride it has been. Indeed. Very well written, and would love to read some more.

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  • From YoukaiObsessed on November 20, 2005
    Ohhs Miroku confessed to Kagome!! Oh poor Hotaru having to witness them fighting, and blaming herself. Ohh nice buildup on that cliffy... so the arrow falls in the well, with her blood on it. Hmm.. wonder if Inuyasha or someone else is going to pick up that scent? *Damn cliffy--swats it* Haha! *Puts on rock climbing gear, time to climb back up the cliff!* Hope to see more soon!
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  • From ANON - Linda on November 16, 2005
    I don't know what to say. The pain. I feel so sorry for her. Once again you out did your self. Your stories are so real it makes it impossible not to want to hurt somebody. I'm sooooo happy that purple light of hers is kicking some major butt!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Linda on November 15, 2005
    This story might have been short but it was good. I'm also happy you e-mailed me to let me know you updated your story. My computer is giving me some major problems but it's always worth the fight just to read your stories. Can't wait for the next one:)
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  • From ANON - Cathy on November 14, 2005
    OH MY GOD! I would die I'm serious I would absoloutely die I mean she was set up for $20 bucks! I would have melted into the ground and granted that girls wish. It made me want to cuss really. Than to make things better she sees her father! I would be so destroyed I am serious I would die. Thanks for the cliffhanger that was something I didn't want to see. I am totally ready to read that Hotaru lives happily ever after I swear! Keep up the good work.
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  • From YoukaiObsessed on November 13, 2005
    I felt so bad for Hotaru. Damn they are putting her through some hell. I love how she blasted their asses in the end though! Ohhs to find her Father like that. Ohhs poor girl.~~ Ok that's it. I am wearing rock climbing gear on your next update, so I can climb back up the cliffies. Hehehe!
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  • From ANON - justareader on November 13, 2005
    I just want to apologize for not reviewing before I just don't do reviews, but you sounded like you really want some reviews. Honestly u'r doin really well with your portrayal of the characters and its like I could see them. u'r female character is having a hard life and keeps me wanting to read more to find out if it gets any easier which it probably wont. I admire your dedication to continue to write this story considering u'r busy schedule and fragile condition. Kuddos to u. keep up the good work. I really hope that she and Inuyasha can fall in love and help Kagome and Miroku to get back together. Damn to be caught with your pants down by your daughter that's pretty ****** up. I'm still trying to get over that one!
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