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Reviews for Betrayal's Gift

By : LdyMoon
  • From ANON - Angel on November 07, 2005
    That was a short chappy. Shippo seems to be all grown up I'm glad that he is trying to help Inu cope with things since it's been such a long time for him to harbor his emotions. Update soooooooonnnnnnnnnnnn. I can't wait for the next chap, please make it a little longer though if it's not too much to ask. *begs on hands and knees* I know your busy, but, for your readers? WE LOVE YOU LDYMOONLUVSINUYASHA!!!


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  • From YoukaiObsessed on November 05, 2005
    Aww Shippo was basically consoling Inuyasha. Love how he told him to move on with his life. He seems to be good for Inuyasha. Good chapter, cannot wait to see what comes next!!

    Take care of yourself and rest!!
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  • From ANON - Cathy on November 04, 2005
    Wow, you weren't kidding that was a short chapter, I wish you would put the next one up tomorrow hint hint, if not, I guess I'll wait a whole week, since you seem to update weekly. This was a filler, but, it is insightful, I don't blame InuYasha though cause I'd be mad too. And Shippo, wow, he's grown so much already if InuYasha asked if he wanted a mate!!!

    Well, till the next chapter. Please email me the update so I'll just know when to check it instead of checking every other day. Can you tell I'm bored?

    Please update soon I want to know what happens.
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  • From ANON - Inu-Shinta on November 04, 2005
    Wow. That was a really powerful chapter. Though it did seem to be short, it was very good.
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  • From YoukaiObsessed on November 01, 2005
    Ohhs so realistic, and brings back memories. The whole, I love you, don't you love me, let me show you how much I love you.-------Holy hell! *Blinks* On the date rape. Very well written, and realistic again. Ohhs I want to slap the fuck out of Ken.

    Congrats on your news! I am so glad you are going to have a girl! Haha, on what you did to your hub! Sneaky, I just love it, you have to keep them on their toes!!
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  • From ANON - linda on October 30, 2005
    You really know how to turn up the heat and make the unthinkable happen.I can't wait to read the next part to the story!!!
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  • From ANON - Angel on October 29, 2005
    First let me congratulate you on your news. That was a little sneaky how you surprised your husband, but I bet he was surprised.

    Ok now on the story oh my gawd! I mean poor Hotaru oh what a bastard he is I was nearly in tears for her yet you put another cliffy, hell yeah I'm coming back to read the next scene. keep up the good work ok again congratulations!
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  • From ANON - Sekkei on October 24, 2005
    Update soon love it!
    I hate Kagome and Miroku too!
    (Lol it's like the first bark of my dog... she was too just a tiny tiny puppy then and she let out a huge roar like bark. Me then ===>> O_o;)
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  • From ANON - Cathy on October 24, 2005
    Thank you for notifying me that you updated the story. It was a short chapter but it was well worth it. I wonder what Sesshomaru is going to do and Rin is married with children wow. She's grown some. I wonder will you write a story about that or put it somewhere in this story. Please update soon.

    I just wanted to say about Intent Observer's review. It was a good review and I understand what that person was talking about since at first I was like wow, Inuyasha is going to get with Kagome's daughter that is wierd, but then I looked at it like this Inuyasha never had Kagome and he never told Kagome his true feelings so in reality Kagome didn't belong to him. I understand that when he gets with Hotaru is he loving Hotaru for herself or because she reminds him of Kagome, but didn't Kagome remind him of Kikyo? You keep up the good work, so far every story that I have read by you always left me satisfied so I trust what your writing about.

    Please notify me again when you update and please don't take so long this time.

    Your fan Cathy
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  • From ANON - DEAD SCREAM on October 24, 2005
    Kagome is crazy Miroku is nuts and there daughter man you can really put a story together please continue on I will be wait till you UPDATE.......
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  • From ANON - DARK TOUCH on October 24, 2005
    Loving this story keep it up I love the characters hey do you just write Inuyasha stuff what about Sailor Moon or Ah my goddess this is the first time that I have read anything by you so I was just wondering................ ok got to go class I know I should have been studying but you Lady Moon kept my up last night reading now I will fail my test but hey at least I can think about Inu lol ahhhh so is life lol..........
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  • From ANON - Alice with Chains on October 24, 2005
    Wow I have never felt so much emotion with any character please UPDATE.....and I must add the pain this girl is going through I know she will have to come out on top right am I right or wrong huh guess I will have to read so you must UPDATE???
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  • From ANON - DEEP BLU on October 24, 2005
    This is my first time on this site I love Inuyasha and I just wanted to say Wow you made me feel the characters it made me almost feel like a movie please keep it up. Oh get aboard and finish the story up cause I'm dying to know the ending, huh well at this point I'm just dying to have the next update lol.
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  • From ANON - Air Bender on October 24, 2005
    WHat the hell wow lady you rock and roll keep up the most excellent work cause I will look for a UPDATE.
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  • From ANON - glaze on October 24, 2005
    Wow you really are an excellent writer please post more..................................your story spikes my interest.... I will wait for you to update ok.
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