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Reviews for Betrayal's Gift

By : LdyMoon
  • From YoukaiObsessed on October 24, 2005
    Ohhs- On what your dog did! I feel for you, I really do. I have as puppy, that can send me flying from the room in a flash, when he pulls those stunts. *cringe*

    Great update! This is really interesting. Now how is Sesshoumaru going to act towards Inuyasha? Hope to see more soon!
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  • From ANON - Intent Observer on October 24, 2005
    I came...I read...I cringed.
    You writing style is good and I give
    you props on your imagination. BUT
    I find the very thought of Inuyasha
    sexing a kid of Kagome's...YUCK.
    I think it's beyond weird, nasty and
    utterly uncomfortable. Again this is
    no reflection on you or your writing.
    I just can't get with that part of it.
    Continued Success, I.O.
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  • From ANON - Angel on October 15, 2005
    Thanks for the update, that was sooner than the last. Well where do I start I mean, what is Inu-Yasha up too and wow, Hotaru is very powerful, I totally felt sorry for her when Kagome her own mom used priestess power to shover her away. I can't wait to read what you post next. Oh, another thing I noticed about your writing is that it flows. I get pictures in my head its like I'm watching a movie or the show and in thirty minutes its over so I sit and wait til the next episode. PLZZZZZZZE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Cathy on October 13, 2005
    Oh my where do I start, well, I wonder what Kagome meant by the child is yours inuyahsa since your saying that Hotaru is Miroku's daughter. And Miroku is taking medicine for a sexual disease, this is just breaking my heart, he's too cute for that. It also seems that Hotaru is very powerful I am excited to see where this story is going. I feel like I am riding on a roller coaster and what did Inuyasha wish for? Please update when you have the time of coarse and hopefully that is soon. Please email me when you update. Thanks.
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  • From YoukaiObsessed on October 13, 2005
    *blinks* Ohhs on what Kagome said after giving birth!! What are Inuyasha's wishes going to be? Oh that's going to be interesting. I love the way you are doing this. So many cliffies though. *swats them* hehehe!! Hope to see more soon!!
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  • From ANON - Peacemaker on October 13, 2005
    Nice chapter three if I do say so myself and the cliffhange with inuyasha is going be driving me nuts until the next chapter. Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.
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  • From ANON - Rider on October 12, 2005
    very good story so far looking forward to more chaoters in the furure
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  • From ANON - Angel on October 11, 2005
    Wow, ok, let me start with chapter one, I felt so bad for Inu-Yasha I mean I love him so him getting hurt really hurted my feelings, but this was like so real!!! People do things like that all the time. And in chapter two, this girl Hotaru well she's mysterious but is she from sailor moon? Everytime I hear or see Hotaru I think of sailor moon. Pleassssssssssssssssssssssseeeeeeeeeeeeeee update soon I can't wait to see what is going to happen next, this is a cool story.

    oh BTW this is my first time reviewing on a story here on AFF.


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  • From ANON - hanyou908 on October 11, 2005
    this is a great story so far i look forward to seeing more chapters
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  • From ANON - Cathy on October 09, 2005
    Oh my, poor Hotaru that girl Fuu is such an awful person. And Hotaru going through all the drama growing up in school. Shame on the teacher she should be fired. Anyway, I'm loving the story so far. I don't want to give to much away but I like the twist in this story. Poor Kagome too. I really like her, but, I can't believe that she betrayed Inuyasha. Oh well, that's what makes the story interesting. Please up date soon, it took you nearly a month to update. I kept checking to see if you updated. Please email me so that I know you did ok. Thanks alot.

    Cathy
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  • From ANON - Tainted Dreams *swats log in box* on October 09, 2005
    *Blinks* Ohss this is looking good. Oh poor Inuyasha and Hotaro!! Then Kagome popping pills. *blinks* I really like this, its different for what I normally see here. Cannot wait to see more of this!!

    Tainted Dreams aka YoukaiObsessed
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  • From ANON - Peacemaker on October 09, 2005
    Another great chapter and thanks for the heads up on the update. I like the premise behibd the story and it took me awhile to realize that Miroku was her father. Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.
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  • From ANON - Backlash Wave on October 01, 2005
    Well I like it because it isn't Inuyasha/Kagome. I hate that damn bitch. Anyway update soon please.
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  • From ANON - Cathy on September 30, 2005
    Well hello there I haven't seen your work in a while, I am glad that you are back. Well so far this story is intriguing I am interested in reading more so please update soon. I do have to say this though, this is different from what you normally write. Kagome and Inuyasha at odds, Kagome cheating on Inuyasha? To tell you the truth I am shocked. But, I read your stories and they are good, so, I know this one is going to be too and if anybody doesn't think so well, there just stupid.

    PLLLLEEEAAASSSEEE UPDATE SOON I GOTTA KNOW WHATS GOING ON!

    Love Cathy
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  • From ANON - Peacemaker on September 29, 2005
    Good start so far, I can't wait to see more. I was wondering if you could email me when you update please. Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.
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